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Reviews for Pains and Contradictions

By : padme82
  • From SickPuppy on August 18, 2008
    No no no no no no no no no no! You can't leave Severus to Lucius' tender mercies! You're evil, you know that? EVIL! Update chapter five soon please! SP
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  • From lilpotter on August 18, 2008
    now harry doesnt trust snape.poor harry.
    and draco.i really don't trust him and idon't like him.i think if he understand snape fallen in love harry,he damage them.
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  • From SickPuppy on August 18, 2008
    Chapter three - Again, a beautiful chapter. I love the subtly shifting relationship between Harry and Severrus. It's lovely to read a story where they don't go from hating each other to humping within about three chapters!

    And this: "Do you understand? Or shall I bring out the hand puppets?" - I did laugh! I had an image of Severus pulling out little felt hand puppets, one with Vernon's moustache, and one with a scar on it and going through what he expected! Of course, he'd do voices too! Please carry on writing! SP
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  • From Jilliane on August 16, 2008
    (Chapter 3)

    Oh my God...*trying not to gush*......Oh hell!.....*gushing!*......That was awesome!!!! Seriously, that chapter was damned near.....no, it was perfect!

    This is just everything I want to read about Snape and Harry. Nothing is sugar-coated, they are just themselves, completely in character, totally believable, and with a natural progression to the story and their developing relationship. The way you wrote them, the way they were driven to defend one another, the things they both said...just perfect. What I liked best, and this may sound strange, was that Severus left Harry there at the Dursley's. And it was right that he did so, because it was what he'd been told to do. Rather than make some rash and untoward decision to go against the Headmaster's edict, even though it was against his better judgement, Severus did as he was told, deciding to go and speak to the Headmaster instead. Excellent.

    I can't for the next chapter and more of your fantastic writing! If you have an update alert list, please add me! jillianetpr@yahoo.com

    Please update very soon!

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  • From llyoung on August 16, 2008
    I love your story. Your writing is fantastic (you are very talented). Your portrayal of Snape is perfect. Thanks for writing and posting your story.
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  • From SickPuppy on August 15, 2008
    I *takes a breath* ... that is ... just amazing writing! Absolutely beautiful, and funny (in the right places) and just heartbreaking all at once. The last line of chapter two was such a perfect way to end it - a tiny lightening of the mood but such pain in Severus' words as to break a heart of stone.

    Truly, truly, magnificent work, and I am eager to read further. If there is an update list, could I please be added? thispuppyissick@yahoo.co.uk

    Amazing writing! SP
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  • From Jilliane on August 14, 2008
    (Chapter 2)

    Another nicely written chapter. I like how your'e keeping Snape to character and didn't have him suddenly go all soft a gooey in his sympathy for Harry. He can, of course, have sympathy and still be his intense and sarcastic self. I'm looking forward to what will happen next. Please, update soon.
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  • From Jilliane on August 13, 2008
    (Chapter 1)

    This is an excellent beginning! I really enjoy your Severus, you've really done the character justice, and this a well written chapter. You've got me inrigued and wanting to know more. I hope you'll update soon, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and more of your excellent writing.


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