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Reviews for Pains and Contradictions

By : padme82
  • From CodyMThomas on November 01, 2010
    GAH! Evil EVIL cliffie! nuuu I wanna know what happens! oh I hope the next chapter isn't too far away, I may go mad from the suspense!
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  • From ANON - Jordan on October 31, 2010
    OMG! I love, love this fan fiction! I usually don't read Snarry or really lonf fincs, but this one may be my favorite fic of all time. I love it! I'm a college student, so for the last few days I've been sneaking onto my computer between assignments to read. I nearly cried in the beginning with Ron. I love that you kept most aspects the same (excep for the whole Snape/Lily thing), and I love that Remus was such a big part. I cannot wait for more. Please write more! Pretty, pretty please...?
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  • From Jags on October 26, 2010
    it's very good so far. I can't wait 'till you finish it.
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  • From Die4U1990 on October 26, 2010
    Dear goddess. I am in shock right now, I'm only one chapter in and youve already made me cry, even though i can argue with logic that of course none of this happened. In the real version everyone but snape got a happy ending, but still the way you capture their emotion is amazing. I thank you for writing this, at least from the chapter I am on, and I hope it gets better.
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  • From QueenB on October 07, 2010
    Ch. 35 That was truly wonderful, an oasis of tenderness in the midst of terror, despair and pain. While I think Severus is wrong to belittle Harry's feelings, Harry clearly needed to gain control of himself. While I hope it will turn out for the best, I can be satisfied that it might not. It's not happy endings that matter; it's the little moments of happiness on the way that we must cherish.
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  • From CodyMThomas on October 07, 2010
    Whoot for updates and cuddles and all the angst piling up around here. You made me tear up! I so wasn't expecting that, but it's true. loved the chappie, thanks for updating! i hope your life settles down for you soon.
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  • From QuantumCascade on September 23, 2010
    Oh my... I really don't have the words to express how much I'm adoring this story. You're fantastic! Simply fantastic! I've spent 2 days of my life reading this story and consider them well spent! I only ask that you finish... if you don't, I'll have to cry, and I get all blotchy when I cry. Seriously. It's not pretty. You have the power to avoid it! Just... keep.... writing! :D Thank you for sharing what has obviously been a labor of love... can't wait to see how it ends!
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  • From ANON - baka on September 18, 2010
    excellent story, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Tariray on September 15, 2010
    Guh - i still love this story - to pieces

    my heart breaks with every chapter, i am moved by your writing skills.

    really, so beautiful, i love the fragility of snape's heart - i really do. And harry, who i normally dismiss, is beautiful.

    I would love to recommend you on m blog - your are so talented and this fic deserves so much acclaim. I hope you dont mind.

    T
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  • From ANON - Tariray on September 15, 2010
    Wow - to this day i still love this fic - the way it moves me and the style of writing which seems to come so effortlessly.

    Well donw, i utterly love this fic even when i have gotten over my Snarry craze.

    Mind if i mention you in one of my blog posts? i think you deserve the shameless promotion.

    I shall, as always keep tabs on you. You're marvellous!

    T
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  • From QueenB on September 08, 2010
    Ch. 34 New chapter! FINALLY! I'd almost forgotten this story; that's what a long hiatus will do.

    I'm glad Harry is working on the bond, although he is hesitant to throw lethal spells. However, I fully understand Moody's attitude. Unlike that fake Moody Harry met, he's spent almost no time with Harry and thus doesn't care about him as a person. As a formidable fighter, Moody knows that, when fighting in a war, you use the weapons available to you and, when the others fail, you pull out the big guns. He doesn't want to use a teenager barely into manhood. But people are dying and Harry is the reason for it.

    That scene with Malfoy was incredible. I certainly didn't trust him and was glad to see that Harry didn't either. However, Harry showed remarkable restraint in not blasting the ferret and I commend him for that. A good warrior knows when he doesn't have to kill.

    Don't keep us waiting too long before the next chapter.
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  • From MyaMalfoy on September 05, 2010
    Go, Severus, go! That was the perfect way to get Voldemort to come where they want for the confrontation. Excellent chapter! Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From CodyMThomas on September 04, 2010
    "What have you done?" He has broken the stalemate, once again listened to the voice of Fate, and gotten Voldie an excellent reason to come after them without having more lives being lost. I say it's a good thing he's done, and I can't wait to read the next part!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on April 27, 2010
    I'm so in love with this story it's ridiculous. Great job so far and I cannot wait for more!!

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  • From ANON - daisy on April 26, 2010
    Alright... I SHOULD be in bed by now. It's 2AM and I couldn't just stop there, and it seems the two chapters I DID get through were even worse that what I could have left off at.

    I am glad they got away just in time to finish that though, but damn, I was glued to my screen with anticipation of what was going to happen, and the emotions you've managed to have Severus portray and yet still keep him IC due the the situation is just mind boggling and awe inspiring. The way you've managed to capture their heart shattering emotions and portray the events kept me on the edge of my seat, but this is it for the night. I'll pick up again tomorrow if I get the chance to read for a bit again. Can't stay up all night every night.

    I'm LOVING your story though, and I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

    daisygirl
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