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Reviews for Pains and Contradictions

By : padme82
  • From ANON - daisygirl on April 26, 2010
    Hey Snow... I just started your story P&C tonight, and I must say, I am already hooked being four chapters into it. I love how you've made Sev the only one to realize the depth of Harry's emotional state and take charge of the situation because of that.

    I loved the interactions between them on the train. It was really intense, and well written for the amount of tension between the two of them. I'm sad that you've killed off RW this early in the story, but it does make the severity of the situation all that more clearer to Harry. Poor Harry.

    I loved the conversation that took place between Sev and Petunia. I laughed at the threats he's made against them. I hope that they're at least intellegent enough to treat Harry somewhat decently.

    Getting there though, just starting chapter four and looking forward to reading so much more when I have the time to pick up on it again.


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  • From CrazyPedantic on April 20, 2010
    Damn I thought I was wordy, but I've got nothing on you. It took me two days to read this. I laughed I cried, several times. You've written a terrribly angst filled story that at times is completely depressing. I am glad you finally had our boys get together properly.

    I can't say this has been an enjoyable read. This is a good thing, you've created wonderfully rich characters and convey emotions in a truly real and gritty way. Thankyou for putting so much into this masterpiece. I will definitely be reading to the end, whenever that may be and however long it takes.

    Keep up your stunningly creative and wonderfully dreadfully real work.
    (All of this is complimentary, this isn't a fluffy happy story so just saying it's great is an insult to you and all your hard work)
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  • From CodyMThomas on April 19, 2010
    Whoot! update! and awww Severus and Lupin are actually getting along a little! whoot! I'm glad for the Harry/Hermione thing too. I hope things keep going well, they deserve their happiness as long as they can get it.
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  • From QueenB on April 19, 2010
    Ch. 33 I
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  • From ametomoe on March 14, 2010
    i'm so happy to see a new chapter. this story is simply beautiful, and i can't wait to see how it ends. write more soon please! :)
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  • From ANON - Iralima on March 12, 2010
    I have Sleepwalker by Nightwish stuck in my head now
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  • From landra02 on March 11, 2010
    I have to say I love your story, it's one of the best stories I've ever read! Right now it is really frustrating to know that the next chapter is not up yet but I'll wait as patiently as possible!! The plot is captivating to say the least and the characters, especially their reactions and the development of their emotions, are well thought through.
    Actually I would love to be added to your updating list^^ my email: hitsuji02@googlemail.com
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  • From ANON - Krysty on March 11, 2010
    ........There are no words.......
    I feel so bad for them!
    They just got together....ish, they have ten days together, and now....yeah....sadness.
    But Harry is right, there is work to be done. Then him and Sev can be forever together.
    This chapter is a lot to take in, which is good because it really makes you think. What will they plan to get old Voldie? Will the lovers be separated? How will they avoid being caught? It's awesome.
    And it's so, so, so well written, and the characters are still sooo in character! You are so amazing!!!!
    Thank you sooo much for updating and for continually sharing this with us!

    ~Blissful Spirit^_^
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  • From PrismaKakkerra on March 08, 2010
    Sooooo good. *drools* More!
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  • From CodyMThomas on March 06, 2010
    awww I'm sure it was very tempting to stay in that happy bubble. It's strange though, I could have sworn I've read this chapter already... must be losing my mind in my old age. :P
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  • From SamHill on March 05, 2010
    Yay for being back on your game! I was so excited when I saw the update, but I only just now had a chance to read it.

    Dead!Ron makes me sad. But I'm glad that things are going strong between Harry and Severus. Loved this update.
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  • From QueenB on March 05, 2010
    Ch. 32 I
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  • From starstruck86 on March 05, 2010
    **guh** Lovely, hot, shiver-inducing sex there.

    I know there's a war going on outside their door, but all I want to do is see more of them tucked up in bed together! You're making it so beautifully rich and warm between them that it's hard to want anything else.


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  • From ANON - bookbinder on November 19, 2009
    Awsome. A slightly different take on the usual HP/SS bonding fics.
    Certainly one of the best I've ever read. Love the characterizations.
    And KUDOS for Bruch's violin concerto. It's so terribly underestimated,
    hardly anybody who's not activly playing a classical instrument has
    heard of it. I find it so moving that I want it to be played at my
    funeral. A little morbid, yes, but maybe it will lend the comfort to
    others like it did for me.
    Thank you for sharing your writing with others.
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  • From darkness100 on November 15, 2009
    well you have now broken my record.. you have made me laugh, cry, smile, frown and get horny all in one chapter.
    congratulations!!!!!!
    seriously though, more more more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    .......................................................please!
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