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Reviews for Pains and Contradictions

By : padme82
  • From plainsong101 on October 14, 2009
    Oh damn...my heart was beating so fast at the end of that chapter! Snape is screwing with fate...and now I'm scared it's too late. Oh, you are a master of suspense...
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  • From QueenB on October 14, 2009
    Ch. 29 This is a shocker and one hell of a cliffhanger. The hand of Fate doesn
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  • From CodyMThomas on October 14, 2009
    Oh holy crap! NOOOO not this massive cliffie! GAH! I'm gonna go mad! Nuuuu HARRY!!!! evil evil evil cliffie!!!
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  • From starstruck86 on October 14, 2009
    Ohhhh wow wonderfully long update.

    My heart is all fluttery from then end. THAT, Severus, is what you get for leaving the bond unmatured... *has a bit of a sniff*

    The descriptions of Severus' despair when Harry finally gives up were beautifully written.

    Thanks for such a great update, can't wait to see what's going to happen next! Crossing my fingers that somehow Harry has a soft landing... xx
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  • From yaoibryan on October 11, 2009
    wow, that story has me on an emotional rollercoaster, haha. first i'm sad, then i'm happy, then i'm suspicious, then i'm mad, then i'm sad, then i wanna kill someone....yeah, you probably didn't really wanna know my thought process, haha. anyways, great story, and please add me to your mailing list? my e-mail is bryannate666@yahoo.com, thanks!
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  • From ANON - frozenrose on October 01, 2009
    I have been crying for the past... oh, about9 chapters. :((( But I love your story and am hopelessly addicted to it. It's beautiful even in it's darkest moments of angst. God, I just want to go up to my room and sob myself to sleep in my pillow, but that would raise way too many questions from family members. I hope this story has a happy ending. Anyways, cheers to you for being an awesome writer and updating as much as you can. It's very much appreciated, and I hope I can read another one of your mesmerizing chapters again soon. Until then.
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  • From ANON - bibliobibuli17 on September 28, 2009
    I just finished chapter 22, and honestly...the entirety of the chapter angered me.
    I only have one criticism, however. I don't like how dense Harry is made out to be - I mean really, some of these connections are quite simple, it shouldn't be that difficult! This high level of density he's been characterized with has shown up here and there throughout the story, but this was the most extreme example I've seen yet. I agree, Harry can be dense, but THAT dense? Geezus. 0.0

    A person can be emotional without being made out as an idiot. Sure, he was overwhelmed with everything going on and his emotions, but rather than making it difficult to focus, rather than going off as he did, one would think he would be completely and totally soaking up every bit of information being imparted to him. Not going off on a delirious tangent. And there was MORE than enough drama in this chapter already without his antics. Really though.

    This is all my opinion of course. XD

    I completely approved of two parts. Once I had finished those two parts, I basically skimmed the rest of the chapter because I wanted to punch Severus in the face so badly, lol. When Harry went off on him, YES YES YES, everything I was thinking. When Dumbledore told Snape that he disgusted him, YES YES YES. But Snape was just ridiculous. Someone needs to freaking...I don't even know. He made me so angry, throughout the whole thing, with his denial and oh-so-martyr-ish-ness and ESPECIALLY his condescension, that REALLY pissed me off. >.
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  • From TheReapersMule on September 25, 2009
    I have read through these chapters with awe. I haven't read a fan fiction to date that I loved as much as this. What you have gone with Harry and Snape is amazing. The fact that through all of this, they have remained themselves to varying degrees, speaks of how good a writer you are. I cannot wait to read more!

    Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Thalia on September 24, 2009
    All I have to say is Wow. You are doing a wonderful job with this story. Every chapter is a heartwrenching episode. I look forward to the sage ahead. May the muse stay with you. Thanks you for sharing with the readers.
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  • From on September 23, 2009
    AHHHH! Your making me cry again. T_T Why Severus... why must you do this to Harry.

    Please update!
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  • From darkness100 on September 22, 2009
    must cry......WWWAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! this story has so much angst in it but it is so good.
    please please please write more, i am hoping for a happy ending eventually.
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  • From jediw2b2 on September 22, 2009
    This just gets more painful and heart wrenching but in a good way. I really feel for Snape in this chapter, trying so hard to do the right thing but torn between staying and easing his own and Harry's pain but needing to go to Voldemort so he can protect Harry - what an awful dilemma.
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  • From ANON - anon on September 21, 2009
    Fantastic.
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  • From PanonDaur on September 20, 2009
    Thank you!
    Goodness, got a little misty eyed with this one!
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  • From ANON - morganabythesea on September 19, 2009
    You are killing me! :-) I've used up an entire tissue box with these last few chapters. Please say it is going to be ok at some point, I don't know how much more stress I, Harry, or Severus can take. Great story!
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