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Reviews for In Want of a Child

By : tana97
  • From Veracityrules on August 25, 2008
    Oh brava! I had tears in my eyes like Harry did on reading the last couple of paragraphs.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2008
    I really love this story - only read the first chapter but I'm sure going to read the rest, lol - problem is you have a lot of typos and spelling errors, like 'course' instead of 'cause' and 'is' rather than 'his'. No matter, it's a really unique plot and you kept the characters in character, it's really good!
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  • From Nikte on August 24, 2008
    So far loving it (even if the chapters are a little short and Severus is SO out of character, but he is really cute and that makes him really sexy) I never expected Hermione
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  • From ANON - Winters Prologue on August 23, 2008
    This is a rather interesting and different story. I like the fact that you have captured Harry's nature to run into things but I don't think that I could handle Sev completely resisting for any more chapters, I think that he needs to start to cave in, even if he doesn't let it show.

    Anyhow email me when you update if you get the chance; gypsy_willow90@hotmail.com
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  • From Selera on August 23, 2008
    So wonderful. ^^ I love the idea of Sev caring for a child.. of course I also like the domenering and dark Sev to.... =^^=
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2008
    When the pregnancy comes I hope that it will be Severus and not with Harry being pregnant. I just love how this story is going so far!
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  • From Carmeleyes23 on August 22, 2008
    GO HARRY GO
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  • From YoursTruly08 on August 21, 2008
    Oh my. He'd better say yes, or something close to it!
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  • From Extraho on August 21, 2008
    aaaw! this is so sweet. i cant wait for sev to have his belly ful of harry - or the other way around, but im set on sev carrying the little troublemaker - please?
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  • From YoursTruly08 on August 21, 2008
    Hm, though it is moving a little bit more slowly than expected, I like the story so far! Can't wait to read more.
    Ash
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  • From alma on August 20, 2008
    I like how they're interacting with each other.
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  • From alma on August 20, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on August 20, 2008
    Poor Harry! he's so confused.
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  • From alma on August 20, 2008
    good start.
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  • From jljaina on August 20, 2008
    hmmm. Very interesting... Its neat to see the two interacting so nicely so far. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
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