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Reviews for Sacrifices Betrayals Love and Foolishness

By : TheSiner
  • From ANON - Wiggin on September 23, 2008
    Hullo!

    Thanks for the story, I thought it was an exellent read so I came to pat you on the back!

    First of all, I thought the characterization was great, especially on Albus Dumbledore. You made him sound like he was so used to running everybody's lives that he doesn't even know why he's doing it anymore.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on September 15, 2008
    Wow that ending was just great and I am looking forward to what you are going to add to this story
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  • From Jan on September 14, 2008
    Great Work! Keep it up ^_^

    Jan
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  • From jljaina on September 13, 2008
    nice ending! I am glad to see they worked things out! I liked how it end from Cluadia's perspective as well.
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  • From Stefzgf on September 13, 2008
    Thank you. It's a great story. Full of emontions and misunterstanding. At the mid of the story I saw no happy ending, but the last chapter put a constant smile on my face.
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  • From ANON - Bones on September 13, 2008
    Loved it!
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  • From katecooley on September 13, 2008
    Yee! I love this story so much! And I think Draco deserves a little boot in the ass for being a jerk!
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  • From Hambares on September 13, 2008
    OOOOH! A happy ending! Yea! had my doubts that it would be happy, but you did it! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Jen on September 07, 2008
    Love the fic and Claudia is perfect because Severus is Roman, the name of one of the old Roman emperors. ;)
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on September 07, 2008
    Yes finally Severus knows that Harrys baby is his. I dont expect thier talk to be easy but I do hope they will make up. I love Harrys attitude in this chapter and how he stood up to the headmaster
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  • From ANON - Becky on September 06, 2008
    You've got an okay story started. It'd be even better if you would take the time to fix the grammar and spelling.
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  • From Narcoleptic86 on September 05, 2008
    Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

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  • From YoursTruly08 on September 05, 2008
    One more chapter to go! I'm so excited. I can't wait for Harry and Severus to finally reconcile and make a beautiful little family together :)
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  • From Jilliane on September 05, 2008
    (Chapter 3)

    Well, I'm glad that Harry stood up to Dumbledore and to Molly, and everyone else, but honestly, he and Severus are both being immature about not confronting one another. I'm glad to see you resolved it somewhat towards the end. Hopefully in the next chapter they will both confess to one another--Harry will tell Severus why he ran away, and Severus will tell Harry of his mistaken belief that he was with Ron. I was glad when Harry told Hermione to drop it when she was gunning to discuss his pregnancy (NOT a Hermione fan!), and I was glad that Harry showed some restraint and some spark when Severus finally came to see little Claudia, and didn't break down and turn all tearful and girly.

    Your writing style is strangely addicting, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From cravedom on September 05, 2008
    Good Lord that men is an idiot! You would think he would at least ask! Oh well I guess we can not change the man's nature. I know this story is already written but; is there a chance that somebody punch Severus in the mauth? His behavior is apalling.


    I understand why Harry lost his mind after hearing Molly talking about taking the baby. While 17 is not the best age to have a baby he is not by any means a child anymore and how selective of them to think that he was old enough to be a marthyr but not old enough to care for his child. He really needs to stay away from them, maybe he should make sure Claudia does not go to Hogwarts.


    I can't wait to see how much more punishment you deal next chapter.



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