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Reviews for Sacrifices Betrayals Love and Foolishness

By : TheSiner
  • From cravedom on September 01, 2008
    Well it was great to have Severus POV and confirm that he had indeed seen Harry and Ron kiss however I can not shake the feeling that while we were reading this Harry was daying. Is that crazy or what?


    Will Harry's note prompt Severus to look for him? I wonder if he will just asume Harry left with Ron. In that case who is going to find him? Somebody is going to find him;right? AAAhhh the stress!


    Please do go and save Harry so I can start worrying about how on earth is Severus going to explain that he had sex with Harry's nemesis because he thought Harry was being unfaithful. I cannot imagine Harry instantly forgiving that.

    Can you tell I am enjoying this?
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  • From ANON - Amiyom on September 01, 2008
    Wow-- this is a real tear-jerker. Very emotional and raw. I was thrown off by the style at first, but I've gotten used to it. I do think some of the sentences need to be revised though-- do you have a beta? It seems like sometimes words are misused or missing entirely-- fixing those errors will help the flow of the story. Nice job so far, I'll be watching for more!
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  • From ANON - Winters Prologue on September 01, 2008
    I definately am interested in this story. I was getting right into it and it finished! GAH! Anyhow email me when you update, I must read more... gypsy_willow90@hotmail.com
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  • From Jilliane on September 01, 2008
    (Chapters 1 & 2)

    I love your writing style, the way the story is told, and I love it that you have the story from both Harry and Severus' points of view. Just excellent all the way round, and I am very much looking forward to the next update. I hope Severus wil find Harry in time, I hope that they will talk to one another about what they saw the other do, even if it is an argument, just so they communicate.

    If you have an update alert mailing list for this story, please add me to it! jilliantpr@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - allyanor23233 on September 01, 2008
    please update soon, anxious to see what happens next. does harry actually succeed to commit suicide or will he be found in time
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  • From lilpotter on September 01, 2008
    thanks for new chapter.snape jealous harry but he have sex some students.especially he have sex with draco then kiss him.i think snape love draco than harry.i really hate snape and draco.i think snape not sorry harry' left.
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  • From CanadianGinger on September 01, 2008
    This is amazing! Honestly one of the best Snarry fics I've read in a long time. :)
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  • From ANON - Solomon on August 31, 2008
    I can not find the link for the rest of this story please alert me Slm8364@aol.com when it is ready Thank you
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  • From Ewe on August 30, 2008
    that is interesting story

    hmmmm....is there more coming or is this the end?

    I would really like to know please email me at sheep_mcirvin@yahoo.com

    ewe
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  • From nco1970 on August 27, 2008
    Wonderful, sad but wonderful.
    Please post the other chapters!
    You can always change things afterwards if you really feel like it.
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  • From Briarrows69 on August 27, 2008
    Please post the next part. I look forward to finding out why Snape was with Draco and what his reaction will be when he finds out his husband is gone (and possibly dead).
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  • From ANON - megan on August 26, 2008
    Awesome story,
    but THE HELL! if you've written the story -POST IT!!!!-
    i HATE the i've finished the story i'll post it in sections, either you've written the story to your satisfaction and post it knowing that you can't please everyone and if there are mistakes or inconsistencies that you can go back and fix as needed.
    OR you are so desperate to please everyone that you simply don't have the BALLS to post what you've created.
    AND that you're so desperate for everyone to like your story that the first contradicting flame that you get will make you stop posting all together!!
    OR EVEN change what WOULD have been a WONDERFUL and INTERESTING story just to please the few junior high students (who are on the site under false pretense but by some of the author's grammar and plots you KNOW that's where they are) who whine that you should put this that AND the other in "'cause the story would be so much 'better' if only...".
    I've been reading fanfics for a LONG time almost 10 YEARS now and I've seen MANY authors who try this and ALL of their storys' first and even up the third chapters are wonderful, THEN they change to please the reader and the plots disintegrate and some lose interest and others just keep spewing this unpalatable "literature" - if you could even call it that.
    And SORRY for the rant but this is such a GOOD story i would absolutely abhor something like that happening to it, it has so very much potential.
    I'm also not saying don't post it in sections, by all means take your sweet time! -Just don't change what you've written!!!! you have more writing talent on the tips of you hair than 90% of all the readers not to mention the few of those who will be reviewing (i'm sad to say that it is NOT an accurate percent representation)
    So take heart know you will have die-hard fans if the QUALITY of your writing and plots stay even remotely in the same place they are now.
    Sincerely, Enthusiastically, Honestly, Rantingly, Yours,
    Megan L.
    p.s. please respond to my review I would like to know if i should keep up with reading it, if my review made any impact or if you took it as a flame without reading it all the way through, or disregarded entirely.

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  • From ANON - AkaneIkeda on August 26, 2008
    Please go on writing! the story is really good and moreover reeeeaaaally sad... i even cried...please, write on!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2008
    This story is awesome, please update soon. Please, please, pleas, please, please!
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  • From ANON - Babs on August 25, 2008
    I love forced bond fics and also unrequited love and depressed Harry. So you've put the goodies in one story for me ;). I really can't wait for the next parts!!
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