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Reviews for Sacrifices Betrayals Love and Foolishness

By : TheSiner
  • From Drachenfliege on August 25, 2008
    I just read it a second time..
    It's so great!
    I'm checking at least 5 times a day whether there is an update or not!
    So pleaaaaase update soon!!!
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  • From Demonicone on August 24, 2008
    Awesome!!!! You always write some of the best stories, I can't wait to read the next chapter. ^_^
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  • From lilpotter on August 24, 2008
    please update soon last three chapters and please happy ending.i hope stupid snape talk ron and reach harry.
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  • From ANON - todd on August 24, 2008
    this is so good love, angst, miscommunication, and MPREG!! My favorite parts of stories!
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  • From AislinnNicole on August 24, 2008
    I've really enjoyed this story so far. I love the forced bonding snarry stories, so I really hope you continue this. I think you've really captured Harry's pain and depression throughout the fic, and got me really emotionally involved... so now I really want to know what happens!
    There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but otherwise, this fic is quite good! It's got me hooked, and I can't wait for more!
    Please post the rest, I'm sure many of us want to know what happens!
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  • From ANON - Brabra on August 23, 2008
    Oh how I hate Malfoy,

    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - Reika on August 23, 2008
    I love it! please post the rest!!! It shows that you put efforts into it, and the story really good! Good work!
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  • From ANON - Kristina on August 23, 2008
    Oh my god. Poor harry. You know this is the first fanfic I've ever cried over. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Feydra on August 23, 2008
    Despite the cliche of the forced marriage, I thoroughly enjoyed reading the first part of this fic. Writing in the third person, present tense is a bit unusual but it does give your fic character.
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  • From YoursTruly08 on August 23, 2008
    Oh my God I absolutely love this. Pleaseeeee post more very very soon.
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  • From SamHill on August 22, 2008
    In all honesty, I think that it needs to be beta'd. There are a lot of general errors that make it a bit harder to read. That said...

    I like what you've done. I enjoy the emotionally, gut-wrenchingly sad stories the best. I truly look forward to reading all of the other installments. It shouldn't be to hard to find a beta on this site, and if you really can't, or if you're at all unsure, I'd be glad to lend a hand. I haven't beta'd before, mostly because I have a four year old who demands (literally) quite a bit of attention, but I'd love to give it go for the right story. I do like this one a lot and I hope you don't give up on it!!
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  • From alma on August 22, 2008
    Awesome, awesome start of story. I'm guessing Severus saw the innocent kiss Ron and Harry shared? I can't wait to find out Snape's reaction to Harry running away!
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  • From LilyBlack on August 22, 2008
    I really, really love your work!
    Also your other stories and this story is really good...and very sad :/

    But how will they know where Harry is when he doesn't know it himself?
    And did he leave a goodbye letter?

    I find it really sad that they couldn't speak to eachother..
    I mean, it seems obvious that Severus had somehow seen Harry kissing Ron and thought more of it and voil
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  • From Lika on August 22, 2008
    Wow
    I think it was a great beginning. And I want to read the rest now! Not wait *smile*
    Thanks for posting
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  • From lilpotter on August 22, 2008
    i look twice today if you update or not.please update soon.im worried if snape used harry,why snape dont want break up harry ask to him
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