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Reviews for Sacrifices Betrayals Love and Foolishness

By : TheSiner
  • From ANON - tribebohemian on August 21, 2008
    wow. this was so beautifully written and so heartbreaking. at first i was turned off by your use of present tense since most people use it incorrectly and inconsistently. but you used it to your advantage and it inhanced your story. there was an intimacy in this that really drew me in and i felt as though i were harry experiencing all this hurt, pain and turmoil. one might argue that harry seems far too subdued and so different than his fiery book character. but i felt that this harry you created is the harry i see in my head... the harry that has reached his wits end. the harry that is simply... done. done fighting, done reacting, done trying, just... done. i thought you played up harry's insecurities in an unique and fresh way. i mean, it's been done so many times and yet i just really loved your simplistic phrasing. it wasn't over the top and you didn't dwell on harry's self pity. i could sense a strong confidence in this piece. it was like, you didn't need to babble or over-explain anything. instead you made your point and were confident that the reader understood. not easy to pull off since many writers fail to give their readers the exact right amount of information. i loved the feeling of isolation i felt from being inside harry's head... what a lonely place. and your observation of everyone in his life... brilliant. you critisized their humanity without hating and i loved it. especially what you wrote about remus. i've always felt that way about him; there but not there. the best part about this is that there is no good guy, bad guy... not manipulative dumbledore who is to blame for everything, no betrayals and all that cliche stuff. this was about people being people and all their hopeless flaws. yeesh, i just can't seem to say enough about this. lol. i loved it, absolutely loved it. not to gush too much or speak too soon but i can honestly say that this piece of writing felt like the story i've been longing to read for years. the fanfiction i've always wanted to write myself but am just not talented enough to do so. well done and so looking forward to an update or anything else from you in the future.
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  • From katecooley on August 21, 2008
    OOOH! This is good. I hope there isn't much delay in the appearance of the next parts!
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  • From ANON - Snakelette on August 21, 2008
    How sad! I'm guessing Snape saw Ron kiss Harry and jumped to conclusions, but to fuck Malfoy of all people! Well, it's a great start though and I hope you update really soon.

    Ehm, starting to read a story that "might leave you wanting more after the end" made me a little hesitant. Could mean "so good you want more" or "was that it?!" *grin* I hope it's the former. Or at least I hope for a happy ending after all this angst, and all that is sure yet to come...
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on August 21, 2008
    Wow that was something else. I really felt Harry's emotions and my heart truly ached. I would really love to see how you end this. I think I know why Severus acted that way towards Harry
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  • From Bambisbunny on August 21, 2008
    I dont know what to say. That was the saddest thing I've ever read. you have to post more NOW!!!! I have to know what happens. you've gotten me hooked now, like a heroin addict without their heroin. POST NOOOOWWWW!!!!!!
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  • From Extraho on August 21, 2008
    i am going to murder you if you dont update this ASAP!!! i LOVE it. i hope....nah...i dont know. a part of me want a happy ending, the other wants sev to suffer! can you mail me when you update?


    extraho_606@hotmail.com

    thank you!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 21, 2008
    Oh Poor Harry!!!!
    This is brilliant - I can't wait for more.
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  • From lilpotter on August 21, 2008
    i reaaly hate snape and malfoy.snape reaaly doesnt love harry? he used harry.i hate it.poor harry.if you continue i hope snape come back to harry.stupid man
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