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Reviews for Her Romp with Centaurs

By : PensievePerson
  • From Kayrox133 on November 02, 2009
    Hilarious. Poor centaurs who fucked Umbridge though. Ugh! I am still laughing over the ass kicking!
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  • From ANON - John Littlewood on October 27, 2009
    I liked the first chapter!
    It's all taken as a bit of a joke and humourous but i also think it's very kinky and i liked it!
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  • From PensievePerson on December 23, 2008
    To Mamacita:

    Thanks for commenting. I already thought the story was dark as well as humorous. I couldn't see it getting darker unless you stray from canon. To make it darker, there would be more violence and maybe they'd kill Umbridge? That did not happen in canon. In my opinion, the story is fine as it stands. Adding to much of anything is always a bad thing, as Shakespeare says. Yes, I thought of other crazy details, but I thought they would be too much.

    But go ahead if you want. I will not mind. It's not within my rights to complain and I understand it's truly not my property, except for the replica I wrote here.
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  • From Mamacita on December 23, 2008
    i half-expected you to have the centaurs vie with each other to NOT have to be the one to rape umbridge! >snort< i very much enjoyed the fact that you wrote this at the humorous end of the spectrum; but now you've started me thinking about what the story could be like if it took place at the other, much darker end...and will you look at that, it's the start of the christmas hols and i have all this free time to write! hmmm. (if i do go there i will definitely credit you with giving me the idea!)
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  • From PensievePerson on December 11, 2008
    Thanks for the review, Slashslut. I appreciate it. It is my most unusual story, and I think it extremely likely that it happened. In fact, in my mind it did happen! Now the compassion...it is something I think only Dumbledore would show for Umbridge. He is still capable of feeling sorry for her, yet he was also firm with her. He told her off about being High Inquisitor! He told her he's in power, not her.
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  • From slashslut on December 11, 2008
    definitely one of the most unusual hp fics ive ever read:) not sure that dumbles deserved compassion from anyone after what she had done at the school though . . . *bitter! party of one!*
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  • From PensievePerson on October 27, 2008
    Thanks 'rejected' for the note. I'm not all over it either, but I definitely did the best job I could with this idea, whilst keeping it simple! :)
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  • From ANON - rejected_ on October 27, 2008
    I didn't read it but I must say the idea for the fan fiction was very good. If I was in to this kind of thing I'd be all over it.
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  • From screamguy on September 05, 2008
    This is a unique look at centaur society. I really enjoyed this chapter, found it particularly amusing how Bane was trying to press the issue of butchering Umbridge. I'm surprised at her insolence towards the centaurs, she's rather brave, or shall we say stupid; for one in her uncompromising position.
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  • From screamguy on September 05, 2008
    "At the word
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  • From screamguy on September 04, 2008
    Oh.My god.

    This is without a doubt, hilarious! >.> Although I think perhaps you are trying to force the hilarity a bit too much in this? What with the kittens I mean... I will never see her doilies the same way again . .. >.< . .

    Very good start by the way, and now that you mention it, it does make sense she was raped.... my mind just never went there . . .
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  • From sjauthor on August 31, 2008
    Hehe...Umbridge is turning into a beast herself!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2008
    pretty good

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  • From xsx on August 23, 2008
    This was fantastic
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  • From sjauthor on August 21, 2008
    Hehehe...serves her right!

    I am surprised Bane was up for that, as he is quite good-looking and she is horrible! But I guess he's just teaching her a lesson.

    As usual, you are displaying great knowledge of the HP characters. I imagine she'd indeed wear underwear like that. And the doilies...ugh! So she doesn't want children... That's one relieve for the wizarding world! :)

    Great job, Pensieve.
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