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By : LennaNightrunner

From ANON - Anon on November 15, 2008
First of all, congrats for entering the writing competition, I wish you the best of luck. :)

For some reason, this chapter made me feel really sad. I suppose because I've made the mistake of confusing lust and love before and at this point, that's exactly where Hermione seems to be. It's as if she 'knows' what the score is, but can't help but delude herself into thinking it could be something more anyway. Of course, I am sure that this particular relationship will end on far better terms but still, there's that lingering empitiness I feel for her because I know how much she wants from him, how much more she needs from him. I don't know if that was the intention but I found this very moving (and of course the teasing and the sex was delish as always - LOL) :)
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From lafemxtina on November 14, 2008
...that was AMAZING!I'd need a cigarette if I still smoked them! Can't wait for the next chapter even though its gonna be a few weeks! You are so awesome!
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From scarletwitchextreme on November 13, 2008
Chap 12: SMUT, DELICIOUS, NAUGHTY SMUT, I am such a randy female...sigh shakes head. NO SILENCING CHARM, and he spanked her oh that one was blisteringly bad boy of him. I was also glad that two of them were so randy that couldn't wait one more day to have each other, and him coming to her window wet was so sweet, so chevalier, and so smug all rolled into one. I loved the statement: And now he would have her in her own bedroom, right under the noses of every single Gryffindor who would never believe that their sweet little bookworm would succumb to the advances of Draco Malfoy: Pureblood, Slytherin, Death Eater. And there would be no magic to keep them from hearing if she couldn
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From scarletwitchextreme on November 13, 2008
chap 11: We finally see draco's side of his feelings and emotions, and i pleased to see he was frazzled and wanting her badly, the horny dog! and I am glad to see the kidnappings have increased, I laughed when she wasn't even fazed by it, and I glad she was secretly pleased...lol. But she has a fear of when he is gonna give her up, and she may be in love with him, I was suprised she actually gave in to it so fast but atleast she thought it awwwwwwww I felt for her. The smut was hot, very delectable, had my heart racing, draco was wickedly fufilling, but hermione stole the show:
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From scarletwitchextreme on November 13, 2008
chap 10: The aftermath confrontation between them was not as bad as expected, and I think it fit them and the situation they were in. But the inevitable Ginny confrontation hath come to hand, and I was hoping she wouldn't be a pain in the ass, but u assured me that she wouldn't so i took your word for it. Hermione starting to get her feeling for him to the surface, even if she is still confused, and Ginny wasn't a pain but she just listened and assessed the situation, poor hermione, I think she is more confused and feeling a bit ashamed now. Short and sweet chapter.
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From scarletwitchextreme on November 13, 2008
Chap 9: SMUT, SMUT, YUMMY SMUT....I died, it was so fucking hot. Getting ahead of myself...breathe, just keep breathing. OMG that was some insane shit u wrote, it was so sorchingly done, had me screaming for more. But lets start at the beginning shall we...Hermione's nerves must have been shot, I could feel the anxiety, and fear radiating from her to me, at least he was considerate, actually he was very considerate with the meal, and foreplay and the act itself, and especially afterwards. I applaud draco in this one, he held back his snarkiness and gave in to his softer side, but his ego was still in there somewhere, it was all a very hot draco in this chapter.
But now the breakdown: I loved the part where he was remembering teaching her the 69 position, OMG, OMG, do I have to say anything else. The tension building between them was edible, and he really wanted to make her his. But between both of them they would have to admit that this single act was gonna change them forever. Although the Occlumency part was a funny, but at first i was pissed as I though he did it again. I loved the tension and the first kiss of the night was hot. I was constantly fanning myself throughout the entire interlude it was so good.
I also appreciated the fact that Hermione let herself go and just gave into her feelings, even though at the beginning she was scared of the big ole bad bed. malfoy was being his sweet and playful self with a hint just of the ego thrown in...did i mention I Loved him here, especially when the commanding self kicked in and hermione obdiently followed. But during the act, boy they sure had alot of mixed up emotions running through them, alot...it was mind spinning, and I hope they sort themselves out really. Oh and what killed me her was this beautiful knicker-soaking little statement when he told her to open her eyes:
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From scarletwitchextreme on November 13, 2008
Hey lenna,
OMG I am sorry i haven't reviewed for a while, I didn't have internet for a while now, and its nothing against u. I still love u and your fic to death and I have just read chapters 8-12 and I screamed, screamed, passed out on the floor, got up and then screamed some more. You had me completely dumbfounded, it was great, it was brilliantly written, i love the way the story is flowing and I love how the characters are evolving at a sensible pace and not just jumping into things from one day to the next. I loved how hermione and draco's realtionship has grown into something understandable atleast on dont worry my words r the truth and here goes a long ass review:

Chap 8: I love the fact that at the start of this chapter that u have let hermione analyze the situation, with her acknowledging his ingrained characteristics and bad boy emotions and atleast she is thinking positively about all the craziness he has endured and she has comprehended him to a huge extent and that will only be good for thier relationship, and poor draco has definately passed through alot...sniff, sniff...lol.
Anyway at least she is truthful to her reactions and confused emotions for the boy, the boy really has her mind mushhed up...lol, atleast she sees him as a person now. Then u turn to draco's blunt thoughts for the head girl, such a naughty boy...sigh...can I have him...sigh. Anyway he still sees the fact that he needs to keep her hidden from himself, although they bonded on particular level, he seeks to regain his bad boy personna although he wants her badly and somewhere deep down, cares for her.
Potons class had me smiling like a ceshire cat...hahaha, poor hermione, the toying and prodding LOVED IT, i could feel the fire from here. She was sure gaining a independence of his commanding personality and not turning to mush just at the sight of him, and her anger and fiestiness, brilliant, poor draco he prodded tooo hard. The girl was on fire...I LOVED IT, she handed his balls back to him. But I was suprised she went with him that evening though, even if they kept it "professional". But i appreciated the time pass and how he would try to mix things up by sneaking chances in different places and keep her guessing when he would strike, especially on Halloween night, although none of them would acknowledge it that is the way their "relationship" is him needing to appease her by kidnapping her at different places and placating her. Loved it and the ciffly would have killed me had there not been another chapter...lol.
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From ilke on November 01, 2008
Okay, that was a particularly painful cliffhanger!!! You evil woman! I imagine though that Draco has a bit more in store for her this evening. Oy! I can't wait! I love that you have him breaking his rules. What a great way to show that he is afftected! Woot! Wonderful chapter my dear! :)
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From PotterEntourage on November 01, 2008
God your Draco is just FIRE! The torture of her, the descriptions of the cold of his skin, and "roll over", has me dying! Ugh! Girly, you are just too good!
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From ANON - Anon on November 01, 2008
First up, yay that you updated and second, no worries about the deletion. :) As long as you got to read my vote of appreciation, it's all good. :) And last but not least, damn that was hot and what a teasing bastard Draco is but, and of course this just my opinion, I think he's teasing himself just as much, if not more and the moment Hermione realises that - oh he's gone, baby, gone. LOL Another brilliantly delish chapter. Ish very happy. :)
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From kazfeist on October 31, 2008
Well, she's finally admitted her feelings. Now, let's work on him. I think it's not going to be long. I mean, he couldn't even wait a week. Something will happen, my guess is that Ron will do something, and he'll just crack. :D
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From lafemxtina on October 30, 2008
That was so HOT!!! But the cliffy is a killer! I can't wait until chapter 13!
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From PotterEntourage on October 30, 2008
dfnarghoesl'a?ghn[qatgrioghnldx vnx1! And that ends all coherent thought!
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From crissm on October 11, 2008
hello!!! this is the first review a give u and i have to say i love ur fic!! is so good and i love the way u picture the caracters.
Sorry if my english isn
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From DracosSlave on October 10, 2008
What can I say? The last two chapters were great. Firstly, the way they develop feelings for each other is so adorable. I love their confusion and denial. Secondly, oh the smut scenes are perfect! I want to be Hermione so bad... Only for a day... I want Draco *pouts*! Anyway, I loved everything, hun and I really can't wait to see more...
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