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Reviews for Secondhand Heroes

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Purple-er on August 27, 2008
    The troublestone that triggers genocide against minorities is a great idea...
    harry and draco's interaction was believable, well-written. Good Job :)

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  • From avihenda on August 27, 2008
    this fic sounds interesting. :-)
    Hope you update more soon.
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  • From callistianstar on August 27, 2008
    Getting very interesting! :D There are just so many candidates for people who might have dug up the stone (on purpose, if it was), so I'm interested to see who will be taking that role. I'm certain that this pent up agression you are building up in Harry will have to go somewhere, other than to bed with Malfoy of course. lol I really liked the "emotions" as described in this chapter. Nice job.
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  • From Mangacat on August 27, 2008
    UHhhhhh.. it really IS a conspiracy!!! But not the way one would've thought it to be... clever, clever, you surprise me at every turn and once again. It's great how Harry's emotions and reactions swirl along with the revelations he gets, I very much love his character right now!!!
    All yours darling, go play some more!!
    Cat
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  • From ANON - cleo on August 26, 2008
    Eheheh, Harry's reactions to Draco are sooooo sweet! He's cute when he's confused about his feelings. I've a question about the stone: you said the people infected fulfilled the principles of a leader, but things as the registration of werewolves and spells put on the bloodlines are not Harry's principles, am I wrong? I think I don't understand it very well. Can't wait to see what happens next. Hope you'll update soon.
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  • From elfqueen114 on August 26, 2008
    Amazing plot! I can't get enough, please more!
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  • From Mangacat on August 25, 2008
    EMAHAHaha.. I didn't even realize I was the first, so FIRST (*g* I know it's silly, but well..) ok, now we have even more an outline on what horrendous things big-wizard-brother is up to. Well, it's still once again your intricate, original yet authentically similar portrayal of the characters and their emotions, that get to me. You develop the same characters always along the line of different settings that makes the hteir own person and yet traceable back to one origin. I always marvel at that. Can't wait for the rebellion to start in earnest!!
    Cat
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  • From callistianstar on August 25, 2008
    I'm so glad you came back to AFF! This is an interesting story so far, and I can't help but see the opposite nature of it to the Frame of Mind Series. It is funny how you flip the characters around Harry only for Harry to follow the same pattern of bitterness with a lonesome nature. Hm...The Order of Dragon, huh? :D Nice touch. lol I liked that last scene in Chapter 2 in particular with the scars. That was very well written. Nice job so far!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 24, 2008
    about the story...

    When she leaves, she moves like a gentle breeze...
    But when she comes back, she comes back like vengeance...
    Like a hurricane on the southern shore.

    Girl! You don't do things by half, do you??? :-)

    I have to admit, it was truly ''quiet'' with you gone.

    Sooo,an eight-chaptered story? Is that POSSIBLE? Can ya' show that much restraint?

    :-)

    Anyway, this is intriguing..and cringe-worthy. Nipples being ripped? Oh yeah, I
    DEFINITELY feel the pain!
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  • From ANON - Amiyom on August 24, 2008
    I really like this premise-- interesting and original. Looking forward to more. Nice job.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2008
    Oh no Draco is really hurt. thats so sad. please make this a happy ending story please. Loved readign it by the way.
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  • From bananasforyou on August 24, 2008
    i love it!
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  • From ANON - cleo on August 24, 2008
    Wow, this Draco is...amazing. Strong, wise, proud and intense, but absolutely not out of character. I think it could be easy for Harry to fall for him, since he's already comforted by his heartbeat!!! I can't wait to know what's coming next.
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  • From Jilliane on August 24, 2008
    (Chapter 2)


    I'm dying to find out what Draco knows. Nice description of the torture scars, and of Harry's feelings. Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Lullaby to Rita on August 24, 2008
    Great begining, so much tension already, I believe this will be a great story! Are you going to show draco's point of view too or just harry's?
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