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By : booback
  • From on October 22, 2008
    Another great chapter!
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  • From smmz79 on October 22, 2008
    great chap... and you finished the torture up perfectly... poor charlie, i hope that draco and hermioneis able to help charlie and make him not so wrried.... wow blaise and pansy, what a reunion.... i love draco and hermione and i have found that i love draco, hermione and charlie a lot as well great job.... i look forward to your next chap...
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  • From ANON - hpslashgirl91 on October 19, 2008
    great story!!!! please update soon. =]
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  • From ANON - sexysarah on October 19, 2008
    Oh. My. Godric. That is sooooo not enough torture. I certainly hope you leave him hanging for a long while before healing him up... I'm sort of wondering if Harry's resolve not to go in there will hold for the duration...

    I also have to say I greatly enjoy reading your work, I love your style and how masterfully you manipulate your characters, it's an effortless read! Wonderful flow, wonderful pace, wonderful... just wonderful! You get a plate of warm chocolate chip-oatmeal cookies (they're gluten-free!)to enjoy while writing the next chapter! I hope you enjoy them! -Sarah
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  • From lilbitbord on October 18, 2008
    Something told me that they kept a list. Oh Ron is for a world of pain and humiliation...LOL YES! Please don't just leave it there tell is more about what Charlie and Draco are doing to Ron, yes I need help!!! I can't wait for more :)
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  • From jocat on October 18, 2008
    You have a very nasty streak. Love how you ended the chapter - leaves a lot and then again very little to the imigination.
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  • From alina290 on October 17, 2008
    Pay back is a bitch. You have such a twisted mind. Do not change. Give me more ideas of torture. This is so good. All my love to you. Keep up the good work. Next chapter please.
    Liz
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  • From ANON - kristy on October 17, 2008

    omg this story is getting good. And it a about time draco charley kick ron ass. for every time he touch hermione
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  • From angelnomiko on October 17, 2008
    lol og draco .. please please more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From voraciousreader on October 17, 2008
    Wierdly enough, the broke bones I can support, but the chair leg... that's just squicky, even if appropriate. With that tally sheet, this is going to take a couple of chapters before he gets it through his head what he put his ex through. By the time they're done, Azkaban is going to be a breeze.
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  • From desiraes0220 on October 17, 2008
    THATS IT! I AM COMMIN TO YOUR PLACE AND I AM GOING TO TAPE YOUR FINGERS TO YOUR KEYBOARD. THEN I AM GOING TO LOOK IN ALL YOUR FILES AND REGUALAR MAIL AND SEE IF I CANT FIND SOMETHING TO BLACK MAIL YOU FOR. HEHEHEHE.

    you are evil and just mean ron wasn't even this evil and cruel they way you wrote him in this story. girrrrrrrrrrrrrowwwwwwwwwllllllllllllllllllll.. just cruel cruel cruel you should go into the tourcher business you could make a killing and you would be the most sot after tourcherer in the biz.....
    update soon please
    Des
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  • From Larrabee on October 17, 2008
    Muahahahaha! Muahahahaha!

    *evil laugh*

    Are fun!

    Revenge - even funner!
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  • From smmz79 on October 17, 2008
    OMG!!!!! YEAHHH you go draco.... i can not believe they kept a list, wow... so charlie has to knock her up again that is funny and it sounds like a competition that will last for a long time... wow the chair leg oh god draco is ruthless but of course he is he had to heal hermione and see what ron did to her every time that he got angry.... great job and i am looking forward to see where you take their relationship...
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  • From ANON - The Bloody Baroness on October 17, 2008
    omg...........i
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  • From SeayKat on October 17, 2008
    OMG Don't mind me as I roll on the floor in fits of evil laughter. Please god, tell me we get to see the rest of Ron's punishment. Pretty please with cherries, Draco AND Charlie on top. >:)
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