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Reviews for Memoirs of a Male Escort

By : Digitallace
  • From ANON - qwerty on October 21, 2008
    You totally skip a chapter.
    We went from Draco and Harry mad at each other because Harry caught Draco fooling around with Blake after confessing their feelings to complete madhouse at the hospital because apparently Draco and Harry fell asleep together in Harry's bedroom when someone attacked Grimmauld's Place.
    I love this story, so could you please upload the missing chapter? Thanks!
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  • From ANON - ThePurplePanda on October 21, 2008
    This story is awesome! I love it! But what did we miss between chapters 12 and 13. At the end of 12 they hate each other again. And at the beginning of 13 they were sleeping in the same bed? It's a little hard to follow.
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  • From Severussgrl on October 21, 2008
    sweet. Poor dray. He better live and give Harry some kids... i'm pouting lol. It's a great story.
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  • From whitedragon on October 21, 2008
    poor draco. Yay!! for harry to stand up for his relationship with draco. i'm curious who might've cursed draco and what else happens.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 21, 2008
    i was just wondering what happened between this chapter and the last chapter. it seems to me as if it kind of skipped a whole lot of time. the last chapter harry was kicking draco out and then now there in st. mungo's? just wanted to see wat's up otherwise its a great story. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - keikey on October 21, 2008
    hello ! I adore your story ! I was just wondering...isn't there a chapter between this new chapter 13 and the previous one ? There seems to lack some link after Blake told Draco that he has messed up with Harry and the scene where Draco is " rescued " ?
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  • From ANON - CARMELEYES on October 21, 2008
    Love this story!!!! Yay for Draco he's alive
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 21, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 14!!! What happens when Draco wakes up?
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  • From ANON - tas on October 21, 2008
    Just read your new chapter. Loved every word! Got the alert for FF and checked it out here on AFF as I like the smexy scenes graphic. lol. Anyway. You seem to be missing the chapter before the latest. Just thought you'd like to check that out. AFF can be quirky sometimes. I have fics archived on here for a few years, and after awhile - for some reason - the grammar, paragraphing, and so on kind of f--ks up. It's good you post in on other sites due to this. And is part of the reason I have a yahoo group to archive all my fics so they stay beta'd.

    Anyways....love this fic. Please update more soon!!!!!

    ~tas
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  • From ANON - mia on October 21, 2008
    I think you're missing a chapter. On ff.net this is chapter 14 and thus makes sense as it follows on from the events that transpire in that chapter. On this site, the jump from the end of chapter twelve to the beginning of what is posted as chapter 13, whilst not impossible to understand is a little confusing.
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  • From ANON - Elise on October 21, 2008
    Again I must say that I. love. your. work. The begining of this chapter was especially fun. You left me with a cliff hanger last chapter, so the beginning of this one actually made me panic. I thought I had missed an update and skipped ahead, somehow ruining the surprise of the end of the one I missed. Alas you were just playing with my emotions and started off with a bigger surprise than the one you left me with. It nearly killed me. After my short recovery I again changed my mind on which one of your fictions is my favorite; this one is growing on me as well. I now don't know what it is that makes your writing so real and lifelike because I change my mind as often as I change my favorite fiction. It is, perhaps, a combination of natural pacing, realistic dialogue, attentive description, complex and engaging plot and personal voice. I love reading each of your updates every day and drawing parallels between each story. I recognize key phrases and description that come up sooner or later in all your work. Its like you have the same unique character of Harry and Draco is each plot setting and I applaud you for your consistency! It really brings something to your work when I can identify you in each of your characters. Also I am really enjoying your plots. They are really original, far more so than anything I've read recently. Also, I cant help but thank you for not leaning on lots of sexually explicit scenes to pepper up your stories. They are really well written and you can just write without trying to please us to much. Its like you develop the emotional side of each character before you delve into anything physical, giving you fictions another very human aspect. It's tragic how much I love seeing Draco and Harry in turmoil over each other, and maybe I only like it so much because you write it so well! I'm not sure. I am sure that you are one of the best writers I've been fortunate enough to stumble upon, and I thank my lucky stars that I have. Another epic review- enjoy!
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  • From ANON - I.Drowned.My.Goldfish on October 21, 2008
    I really have the feeling that I missed a chapter or something... but besides that I still love it
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 21, 2008
    I'm sorry last I read Harry kiked Malfoy out now he was hit with a curse and Harry is tellin ppl he is in love with him ..... What just happened!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - anon. on October 21, 2008
    Very nice as always, but is it me, or is there a chapter missing. The previous chapter ended with Harry throwing draco out and this begins with draco already being hurt. Did you skip the attack intentionally? 'Cause it would've been nice to read it in more detail.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 16, 2008
    Holy crap update already!
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