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Reviews for A Black Mistake

By : Gryffindorclutz
  • From ANON - LZ on April 19, 2015
    While I usually lean towards anything with hermione I was especially intrigued with this story. The sex and dominance was exciting and I loved the power struggle between the two leads before Narcissa eventually gave in. I wold love to read more.
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  • From haleynoel on September 09, 2009
    You should def continue this
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  • From Phiana on August 22, 2009
    where have you gone...????? Please update this story it is one of my favs on here!!! Please

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  • From drkdsire on December 25, 2008
    "When she had children, she was going to make certain that her boys were never troublesome and always perfect angels"...until they were shunned by Harry Potter, then they turn into right dicks.

    I think you've got me hooked.
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  • From haleynoel on November 07, 2008
    I love this story and really wish you would continue it! I love your work and really think you could something fun with this...please?
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  • From Phiana on October 29, 2008
    Please hurry and update, your killing me with the waiting game. PLEASE there is only so much more that i can take!!!
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  • From heather360 on October 17, 2008
    OHHHHHH! This was good. Actualy good does not even begin to describe it. I absolutly loved it. Bravo.
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  • From elibdally on October 05, 2008
    Just wanted to let you know that your story inspired mine. I have officially written my first NB/LM fic thanx to you called - Behind the Closed Doors. Please read it and let me know what you think. Thanks and update soon!
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  • From elibdally on October 04, 2008
    I just had to re-read and review this fic again. This story was very well written. I really hope you update soon. I wonder if there are more LM/NB fics like this out there. If there are please let me know!


    LaLa Out...
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  • From elibdally on October 03, 2008
    WOW! This story deserves so much more praise. I don't understand why you haven't gotten more reviews. Well, maybe the fact that everyone has to be signed in to do it might have something to do with it.

    Anyway, excellent story. I love my Slytherins dominent. I think you captured their charecters really well. I totally see this situation happening.

    Since you wanted to make this a Dramione, I believe you still can...Just write a sequel, maybe naming it 'Like Father Like Son' or something of that sort. You can definatly come up with something...marriage law, dicrease of pureblooded babies, etc...

    Update soon!!!

    Five STARS!

    LaLa Out...
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  • From Phiana on September 13, 2008
    Honestly you are amazing!! I love your writing, you can really tell that you enjoy writing these fanfics. I have been reading fanfiction for years now and all of your stories are right each time. Bloody FANTASTIC please keep it up!!!


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  • From way2hott4u on September 10, 2008
    DAMN! I LOVED IT!!!
    CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!
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  • From NutsAboutHarry on August 31, 2008
    Wow...what an interesting fic! I found it a little hard to beleive Lucius was that heartless with Narcissa's first time. I always saw those two despite all Death Eater crap around them as a very much in love couple and that their love began before they became an official couple.

    But I love what you've written so far...keep it going!

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  • From SoftObsidian74 on August 31, 2008
    You know I had to peek because you were listed as the author and I just really like your stuff. This is a very interesting premise to Lucius/Narcissa, and I really like the way you've reworked their background so far. As usual your non-con makes me feel bad for liking it, but I did...it was hot...and Lucius is in his best Dom form here so I can't wait to see how you continue this and how Narcissa gets out of her situation and winds up claimed completely by Lucius. Great opening...
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