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By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - Angelbaby on September 18, 2008
    You've achieved a miracle. I'm so not a dog person but I've fallen in love with Studley. I want a Studley. I can see Draco and Hermione's children riding around on his back when they are small.
    I totally love your Malfoy's, it's exactly how I picture them. A normal family teasing each other who just happened to have made some bad choices. Lucius is great as a Dad and I think any grandbabies would have him wrapped around their little fingers.
    I think Hermione and Draco need a little argument because it's been too good up until now. I hope you write the reunion in because that would be fun to see how you picture some of the other characters. I don't think you've ever even mentioned Neville or anyone else.
    By the way I hold you completely responsible for my lack of time in the evenings now because you got me watching Buffy again. Now I have to watch at least two episodes each night and work my way through them all again. I'm up to series three, episode twelve and on tonight.
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  • From KellyJCR on September 17, 2008
    Shouldn't she know by now that Draco is possesive of his relationship with her. Possesive isn't the right word but he seems very dedicated and likes to keep her close. I guess we all have our old hang ups from time to time. As much as Hermione analyzes everything I would think she would get curious as to the nature of the relationship. I thought this muggleborn issue would rear its ugly head eventually. I guess Draco will have to just ease her mind and finally put the subject to rest. i love the teasing side of Lucius he seems alot like my father-in-law its done out of affection not spite. Looking forward to the fight. Well done!!!
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  • From ANON - Lisi on September 17, 2008
    I love your story, and this chapter was sweet, but you should find a way to end with Hermione's insecurities, because is obvious that Draco is smitten with her. KEep going, please, the plot is good, and the way you portray Narcissa is sometimes hilarious.
    A hug
    Lisi
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  • From Utopia on September 17, 2008
    Not on your parents' sofa... I'd agree with that! lol!

    How old is Lucius? He's behaving like a toddler and pointing fingers! Is a: 'It was your fault we went to their flat and saw the aftermath of nookie! na-na-na-na-naaaaah'

    Narcissa's allergic to sex? Or just talking about it? I can't see any woman near Lucius being unaware of sexuality and sensuality!

    FIFTEEN! I'm choking at that one! That's not legal! And Lucius took him to a BROTHEL!!!? What a bad influence!

    Is Narcissa channeling Mrs. Bennet from Pride and Predudice with her nerves?

    Oh! Cissa's got the wrong end of the stick! She's clueless! lol! Can you send Lucius and Narcissa to marriage councelling? Tantric lessons? SOMETHING to get them together in a less arranged sense!

    Ooooh! Lucius isn't going to win a verbal sparring session here! lol!

    Oh no! nightmares!




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  • From Citten on September 17, 2008
    yeah i finally caught up with you sweety! love the story!!!! so much to say..... well one thing that i wanted to say was i loved the line of sex toys!! ;) you notty girl you. :) (in the best sense.) basicly i just love everything! and you have made me laugh so much--thanks! :) well it will be interesting to see what happens next in our--oops--your little romance. :) as always update soon! :)
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  • From smmz79 on September 17, 2008
    poor hermione... but i am sure draco will make an appearance to make her off limits it sounds like something he would do... OMG narcissa... ha ha allergic to the practice of sex... oh that was rich.... i love how draco baits his parents that is sooo funny.....
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  • From on September 17, 2008
    So you are promising angst lite?

    Fun chapter. I enjoy the Lucius/Narcissa/Hermione/Draco banter :)

    Thanks.
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  • From OUFAN on September 16, 2008
    This is the best story. I come home from work and look to see if the story has been updated. As soon as I get through reading the new chapter, I call my sister to see what she thought. I love any Draco story, but this one is really great. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From Pyroangel198605 on September 16, 2008
    He should change his mind and go with her, thats what I think lol
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  • From Breenieweenie on September 16, 2008
    once again you write about Hermione's insecurities beautifully. I do hope that if they do fight or argue or whatever that it lasts more than just one chapter. I hate when things resolve too quickly because real life isnt like that. You are such a great author and I love Lucius.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 16, 2008
    I think I was squirming with embarrassment right alongside Hermione in this chapter. What a conversation to be having. LOL And you made me feel so sorry for Narcissa that she felt that no-one ever looked at her the way Draco was looking at Hermione. I guess an arranged marriage has a different outlook on a relationship but still, I wanted her to feel truly loved. Maybe something will change as your story continues even if its not about the senior Malfoys. (I can hope) I do think that the womenfolk have more in common with eachother than they supposed and I love that Lucius is constantly teasing Hermione. Methinks that Draco will go to the reunion. :)
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  • From sweething10 on September 16, 2008
    Narcissa absolutely cracks me up in this fic! Fanning herself and getting all upset over Draco and Hermione having sex. Too funny! I feel sorry for her, coming to the realization that she may be missing something in her relationship with Lucius. I would be happy to take him off her hands if she'd like to find someone knew. *evil laugh*

    I think Draco will end up going to the reunion with her. Either from the beginning or deciding last minute and surprising her. Either way, I look forward to everyone's reaction if, in fact, he does go.

    I'm not worried about the inevitable fight they are going to have. All that means is incredible make up sex! LMAO!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on September 16, 2008
    A little stress and strife is part of a real relationship and I love the way you write them and this story, so no worries! Thank you for updating regularly and doing such a great job on it. I check daily and smile hugely each time I see you've updated. Hugs, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Laur on September 16, 2008
    Property of Draco Malfoy Bit was hillarious!
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  • From kazfeist on September 16, 2008
    Gosh, SG, you've really got Hermione down to a T. That's exactly how I see her, with even more beauty on the inside than on the outside. And, I can understand how she's confused. My first husband was a pretty boy. He eventually left, and it threw me for a loop. Glad you've got a happy ending planned, and I hope Draco's gonna man up and show up at the reunion...for her, of course. :D
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