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From ANON - Rae on September 03, 2008
I love this story :D

Haha actually i love all your stories :D your a great writer and I hope you and add another chapter soon!!!!
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From carha on September 03, 2008
I can't believe I missed this until you were up to chapter 7 :(
Great work so far hun. I always love seeing what you post. Looking forward to your next update!
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From OUFAN on September 03, 2008
I just love this story. It's very funny, and I love anything with Draco in it.
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From Larrabee on September 03, 2008
GAWD! Ginny is so annoying! idk... I hate her. No matter how endearing you make her she just grates on my nerves. HELLO! Its like mind your own business. I am sure Herione didn't ask her about her sexual life with Harry.
*OKAY rant over*
I love your stories and I love you! Just hate Ginny... sorry. lol.

I wonder how the Malfoys are going to react to Hermione? If Draco is like his character in "Mastering Temptation" is Lucius the same? I hope so.

And idk, but I have a feeling Ron might get annoying. You know, because he just called off his wedding, and he might be getting lonely and nostagic.

I can't wait for more. I know we have to wait every other day, but you always make it worth it.

I hope you do another SS/HG and SOON! And maybe a RL/HG... but he's not one of my favorite pairings. I prefer Severus, then Draco, then Lucius... everyone else falls into line. But you make it work. Especially with stories like "It Happened One Night."

Kudos, Love, and all the best.
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From Baybeetricia on September 03, 2008

Could you believe, after waking up yesterday morning, I was itching to come on this website to see if you posted anything? I am so damn addicted to this story it might be bording early obsession.

I must have visited AFF like 10 times to see, and I was so disappointed that it wasn't there but this chapter made up for it.

Now REAL COMMENTS

Lol! I can't help but laugh at Hermione's comment at the beginning. I mean it must have been extra cold last night for her to still see her butt prints on that window. I mean I could just imagine the smug look on Draco's face when she said that. At least now, whenever she looks at that window, print or not, she will remember it.

Now Studly. For starters I know I should have mentioned this from earlier chapters but I think Draco is sweet for getting a dog like Studly. Not many people could do that and still treat him like a normal dog. -Sighs-

Secondly, I was kind of anxious to see what they would say, and by they I mean the Weasley and their gang, about Studly. I wanted to see if they would shy away and look at him in disgust. I'm sure they were doing that, well Harry at least, mentally but I was impressed when he did't voice it. Albus is so sweet. That's why I love young kids. They don't really look at the appearance as much as older people do.

I really liked Molly in this chapter. I'm sure if she did't come out there when she did that interrogation might have lasted until the wee hours of the morning.

Lol...I can't help but laugh when Draco commented on the freckles....I would ask the same thing and it was good to see her find the humor in his questions....now as for the firecrotch part....lol... I mean, I don't know why but Paris Hilton's comment on LL(lindsay lohan) being a firecrotch just popped up in my head...lol...I know it's bad but you caused it.

Now Charlie. OMG Charlie...I knew there would be a rebel in the family but my goodness not you. Nipples pierced, tongue pierced, AND penis pierced???? WHY!! I understand the benefits of them, mind you, but it's still shocking you know (I liked when Charlie rose his shirt, showed Hermione his pierced nipples and then hugged her. That had me cracking up. I knew she must have been shell-shocked)

Are you going to go into the REAL reason for Ron and Susan's breakup? I have a strange feeling that there might be some underlying issue, resolved and unresolved to some, just sitting there. I mean, I don't think it would have been that little. Something else must have happened; right?

Besides Draco really playing nice around the Weasleys, I don't think I have more to say....

Oh yes...

Don't you think he might need a NICE little reward for behaving himself around them? I mean he HAS changed, and his ego DOESN'T need to be inflated but just a LITTLE gift would suffice...lol

Don't mind me, you just continue with plan....

Update soon

Baybeetricia
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From ANON - Cliobella on September 03, 2008
This is such a great story, not that I am surprised, all your stuff is amazing! But I just have to say that I love Studly. He reminds me of a dog we had named Rufus. He was so ugly he was cute. I especially like James riding Studly, my daughter did the same thing with Rufus! Poor dog. She used his ears for reigns.
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From ANON - Anon on September 03, 2008
Fair enough, Studly is a dog but certainly not an ordinary one. :) I think he will be very protective of Hermione too. Be interesting to see what Lucius makes of that. I laughed right along with Hermione when Draco was asking questions about the Weasleys (and their frecklies) and I found her embarassment endearing as Bill told her all about his piercings. I also liked that Ron didn't act like a mindless jerk over seeing her and Draco together. He was mature and made his point known to Draco without going overboard about it. The fact that Draco accepted it for what it was made me even more impressed with his maturity too. :)

As for your other half, I don't know what to say, I'm so sorry he had to be part of something that changed him so much from the man he used to be. Obviously he can't go back to that person again, but I do hope you find your connection again and if you can't, I hope you find peace with eachother despite the changes. (and I apologise if that got too personal).
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From on September 03, 2008
I have no idea how I missed the beginning of this story! I adore, love, and frequently re-read everything you write! I should be better with reviews, but I usually read bits and pieces between chasing my girls. No more excuses - you're a wonderful writer & I am addicted to this story, just like all the others! Harry & Ron not overreacting was great! I hate it when they take her for granted and then decide to complain once she's happy! I hope to read more soon!

If you happen to have an e-mail list, I'd love to be on it... kk30@mugglenet.com

Thanks!
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From Jullsy on September 03, 2008
I am coming all the time on the site to see if you have updated. I love your stories with Draco - he is so cute, I want to hug him.
I laughed a lot when I red about the Belgian chocolates as I live in Belgium in this moment and I don't think that their chocolates are really exceptional.
I almost cried when Hermione said to Studly that they are kindred, it was so sad.
I am looking forward for teh enxt chapter.
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From sweething10 on September 03, 2008
This was a great chapter. Seeing Draco interact with the Weasley's was a lot of fun. It was nice to read a chapter without Harry or Ron doing or saying something insulting towards Hermione about dating Malfoy. Harry's surprise, Ginny's questions and Ron's warning were all appropriate and expected. And Molly's comments about needing to fatten him up were hysterical!
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From ANON - lovemygoodies on September 03, 2008
Wow! I love this story. I've always thought there could be more behind Draco's visible dislike of Hermione. Plus, it's nice to read a story where Draco is pretty normal for a change. Just a very pleasant read. Thanks, and keep up the good work!

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From LadyBlueEyes on September 03, 2008
Wonderful update, darling!!! I love the way Milly is just the mother hen to everyone.......we all need a Molly in our lives. Charlie is addicted to body piercing...interesting.... =) A fun afternoon with the weasley's....very entertaining, especially Draco's 'firecrotch' commentary......I'll never look at a red headed male the same way again...LMAO. Brilliant work as always!!

Love
LadyB
xoxoxo
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From kazfeist on September 03, 2008
I've been enjoying your stories, off and on, for a couple of years, I think. Sad about your husband. War can do that to people....hopefully, you'll find heart's balm soon. Thanks again for the lovely chapter. One of the few in which the Weasleys and Draco interact somewhat normally, and yet there's a 'happy ending'. Well done! Can't wait to see where this leads. :D
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From LadyVoldemort87 on September 03, 2008

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From ANON - Kirsty W on September 03, 2008
I just had to leave a review on this amazing fic.

I have only just found this fic and am now fully caught up.

I love the way you have written Draco and Hermione, especially taking into account the fact that who we are at the end of school is very rarely who we are years down the line. I had a chuckle about Hermione's slogan t-shirts, as I have loads of those types of t-shirts as they always amuse me.

I adore Studly I want to keep him!!!! Definitely prefer him to Crookshanks and no cat could live for that long, magic or not!!!

Can't wait to see Lucius/Narcissa to make an appearance.

I had a look at your author page and realised I have read quite a few of your fics and really enjoyed them.

Looking forward to more.
Kirsty
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