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Reviews for Something In The Way She Moves

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From Baybeetricia on September 01, 2008
    HOT DAMN!

    I would be literally fanning myself if I didn't have this fan next to me doing it for me. That was such a hot and steamy chapter.

    I could picture that scene for scene going over in my head as I write.

    I mean the window? Merlin help me!

    That right there broke my expectations of both this story and the lengths Draco would go to give pleasure and I would love to admit that I wish I was in her position. The contrast of cold from the window and the heat from his skin must feel intoxicating...

    What a way to end my night right?

    Thank you for that.

    Update soon.
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  • From kazfeist on September 01, 2008
    Thanks so much for updating so quickly! And for the kind words. I look forward to seeing how your story plays out....it is tough to build a relationship from a one-night stand, but these two actually have a lot of things going in their favor. Enough similarities, I think, that take the story out of the usual. I know, back when I was single, it was hell the morning after. I don't think that one relationship (including my first marriage) lasted from a one-night stand. My second marriage (over 21 years and counting) started with lots of long phone calls, actually. Hope you also have good luck the second time around. :D
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on September 01, 2008
    Awesome update!!! Window sex is amazing (at least it seems that way because i don't know myself...LOL - I will however keep it in mind for future reference with ??? ) ;-p Your writing just flows so naturally with this story. You are truly a very talented writer! And can i have Studly (he is adorable) or at least borrow him from Draco.....i mean I WAS there when you named him! As a matter of fact I said stud and then you were inspired to used Studly so I had a hand in naming him. =) Looking forward to more, as always......

    Lots of Love
    LadyB
    xoxoxo
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 01, 2008
    I think, that in future anything I read from you should not be read at breakfast. I nearly choked on my toast while attempting to fan myself at the same time. LOL Damn that was hot!.

    Actually there were things in there that spoke volumes to me. I can remember in my mispent youth (lol) wanting someone to think I was the centre of their universe and wanting to love me and only be with me. Sigh!! That one broke my heart! And he was a bad boy! Never get why we go for the bad boy! LOL Wow, you got married at 18!!! So did my sister, and she's still happily married. I guess someone's got to get it right. :) Anywho, I love how you've made Draco grow up and take in his surroundings and be a bit more realistic without compromising his narcisstic (sp?) side, I love the blend. :) And I can totally see Hermione taking a step backward socially as she's somehow put herself on hold. Of course, that isn't going to stay that way and I can't wait until Lucius gets involved since he's so unhappy with Draco for not following family tradition. And on a side note, suddenly I don't think Studly is an ordinary dog, in fact, I'm starting to wonder if he's a dog at all. A trapped animagus perhaps????

    As for flattering you, I am just so impressed with your ability to bring out so many amazing stories, given that I know how busy you are, goodness I have so much to learn. That being said, I can't wait for more. :)
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  • From heather360 on September 01, 2008
    As usual I love it! My husband stole my phone from me and read the dinner scene and says"Well this isn't smutty at all. This is good." so suprised is the man who thinks romance is only a cover for porn for women. Thank you for another great story, and for the "I told you so for my husband"
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 01, 2008
    your rock!!!!!!!! luv ya luv ya luv ya...cant wait for more posts, but alas im in a hurrican,,hope to get to read more soon,,,keep up the good work..great story
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  • From dawnangel on September 01, 2008
    I love all your stories, I can't to read more.

    thanks for writing
    Dawnangel
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  • From Eilisbelle on September 01, 2008
    you mentioned that you married the geek but got your heart broken?? Damn. My mum always said geeks make the best husbands!!! I'm attracted to the bad boy. I've got a very healthy dark side, and need a man who can keep up with me on that!! I"m still single and childless.... I love it!!
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  • From Eilisbelle on September 01, 2008
    Wow... that was really really really hot. I had just watched Beyonce's video Naughty Girl, and the song played out through my head, whilst reading this chapter. The heat of it, the carnality of it. Nice.
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  • From ANON - Niccy on September 01, 2008
    Glad you decided to update early. Loving the story so far. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us.
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on September 01, 2008
    Oh belive me, it's not my dream to become like that! But I am in research, too (well, will be - another parallel ;-)), and I can tell you that's hell for your social life (plus people you meat in your job are all just as crazy as yourself...). I definitly admire you and am certainly just a wee bit jeallous... But: back to your story!

    I like the pairing Draco/Hermione for some reasons you mention, too: I think that he needs somebody who 1. is at eye level with him and can put him in his place when needed 2. doesn't want his money only and 3. gives him the feeling to be needed. And your Hermione can definitly all of that. Despites her insecurities concerning her own person, she knows what's wrong and right but she knows how to forgive, too. It is obvious that she's not with him for his money BUT (and that's important and one more thing I find great about your story) she does accept his gifts. I cannot see Draco with somebody who couldn't accept it, I think that for him it's a way to show he cares (By the way I do not understand why in many fics she's described completely uncomfortable with that? I would agree, that she probably wouldn't be the kind of girl to go shopping with his credit card - pardon account number - or expect him to buy her stuff, but a gift is a gift... And if your boyfriend has the money? I really don't see the problem.). Probably the only way he knew growing up.

    Hmm... Waiting for the next update...
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  • From nastygrl on September 01, 2008
    I love it! Draco is perfect, sexy, a little reckless and utterly adorable ( and do-able!) Hermione seems a bit too shy, I am used to seeing her a bit more fiesty, but I am really, really looking forward to reading more.
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  • From LadyofClunn on September 01, 2008
    Now that was just HOT! Oh, so Lucius is going to find out soon? I have to get some popcorn ready, just in case.

    I can understand the Buffy thing completely. I
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on September 01, 2008
    This was such a hot chapter, my lovely! Window sex....God, did someone just turn the heat up? *fans herself*

    I really do like this story, its shaping up to be one of your best ever!

    Much love,

    V x


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  • From Utopia on September 01, 2008
    You know you said you married 'Harry'... I think I'm marrying a NEVILLE to be honest. lol.

    Andy wouldn't fit into Slytherin because he can't lie for love nor money; He's not the sharpest knife in the drawer, so Ravenclaw's out. He wears his heart on his sleeve, but is TERRIFIED of my Mum! lol! So, that leaves me with Hufflepuff.


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