Click Here!

Reviews for Something In The Way She Moves

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From smmz79 on September 23, 2008
    OMG i think i am going to cry!!!! what a fabulous story!!! i just loved it!!!! and i loved lucius... oh wow i laughed so hard when hermione was yelling at draco and lucius was serious about harming him for her!!!! i also love that draco still got to harass his mother that was funny... oh and i loved the part when hermione told harry off and he was like yep she is close that was great!!!! loved the whole story it was perfect...
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Laur on September 23, 2008
    Big Daddy! Hillarious
    Spanking...yet! Hillarious!

    LOVE IT!!!!
    Report Review

  • From slytherinqueen555 on September 22, 2008
    This story is amazing! I love it when you have a plot to a story with steamy sex in there as well. Keep up the great work!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Michi on September 22, 2008
    omg i've been following this for quite some time (sry this is only the first review, busy with college and whatnot) and i have to say this is one of my favourite stories ever! and such speedy updates! you really are the bomb XD

    Big Daddy... *giggle-snort* oh mi gawd it's just PRICELESS!!!
    Report Review

  • From sweething10 on September 22, 2008
    I so love this story. Draco's reaction to the baby was priceless. And surprising Hermione with a wedding was so perfect for this story. Everything between them has been spontaneous up to this point, why not a wedding too! The scene with everyone talking at once and Hermione puking on Lucius was so funny! And totally believeable with that crew. I knew Narcissa's mood would change once she found out about the baby. Can't wait to see what happens next!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lady_Saphire on September 22, 2008
    Excellently done dear!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lady_Saphire on September 22, 2008
    I Know what you mean about it nbeing therapy....although I hasvent hadn the guts to put mine yet in more than my ever present notebook....great job !!!!!
    Report Review

  • From HarryGinny4eva on September 22, 2008
    I like the romantic, hopeful, sweet, loving, carefree and dedicated couple you've created. It's nice to be able to read something that is an old-school, fun, and funny love story. Thank you! There are hundreds of stories out there with angst enough for ten stories each, and while they are nice to read and can be fantastic, there is a lot to be said for good, clean(ish), honest to goodness sweet romance. And, hey, if it could work for Mel Gibson (he married his wife of now 20+ years after only knowing her 2 days) it can work for anyone! ;-)

    Thank you for keeping the "love" hope alive when I most needed it. And, THANK YOU for two updated in one day. I am smiling so hugely because of you. Hugs and thanks, HG4eva
    Report Review

  • From luv2cusmile on September 22, 2008
    i have no idea how this happened or why or where it came from but... during the beginning of that sex scene i thought of my parents having sex. EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    omgosh i'm a sick pervert. then i got over it and was able to enjoy the story. =D
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Shetan on September 22, 2008
    I think your story is sensational...... please update soon.
    Report Review

  • From mmconnelly on September 22, 2008
    I absolutely love your sense of humor. Draco absolutely cracks me up and Luscius was hilarious in this chapter. I also love the way Narcissa is such a prude. Anyhow good job thanks for 2 chapters in one day I read the rest of it on Saturday and was so very happy to see an update.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - crescentmoon on September 22, 2008
    WOW! This is fantastic. I just read it all so far today. Great work. This is a lovely romance. :D
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2008
    I totally agree with you on writing being a much needed and well-working therapy (very generous on the budget too). And I am so very sorry to hear things haven't worked out with your marriage at this time. I think your advice on weddings, their durations, lead ups whatever is spot on. There are no guarantees, they either work out or they don't, sometimes there is a problem and sometimes, no-one is at fault, people just drift apart and other times, a seperation is forced on a couple leaving them no control of the situation. Of course that's not what you want to talk about here and I apologise if I've breached your privacy.

    Two chapters in one hit is indeed exciting. :) The more the merrier. LOL So easy to picture Draco standing outside the lift and pounding on the door in his frustration to get Hermione upstairs for some honeymoon time and trying to get her out of that dress. LMAO - I'm surprised it didn't occur to him to just spell it off. Eloping and then having a party afterwards sounds kind of nice. :) And on to the next chapter - of course they'd get caught out, the name Malfoy is big news as is the great war heroine, I hope the photographer was got at and not handed the photos over but one never knows what motivates people at times even if greed is the obvious choice. But OMG when Hermione threw up all over Lucius' shoes - I fell off the chair laughing. One minute he's taking control of the situation (so he thinks) and the next he's wondering what the heck happened. I could so easily picture the looks on everyone's faces when Draco said he'd upset their grandchild. That was priceless! And I love how everyone in their own way accepted the situation, especially since Hermione promised the boys they could have at Draco should he ever hurt her. LOL But calling Lucius Big Daddy when they are alone - OMG that took the cake, I laughed so much I nearly cried. Well done (as always). :)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2008
    I loved the chapters!!!
    Report Review

  • From Citten on September 22, 2008
    well that was two great chapters!!! wonderful and beautiful wedding night. :) i really loved the uninvited guests for breakfast! that was one way of doing things! i loved and hated the throughing-up on lucius! poor hermione i would feel the same way if it were me. well all but her parents left to tell. this is going to be interesting i cant wait to see how daddy granger is going to take the news. :) though you better still have quite a few chapter left so you dont just drop us i would like to enjoy the next steps in their lives! please update soon! :)
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!