Reviews for Something In The Way She MovesBy : soldiersgirl0709 |
You wrote a beautiful story. I loved it. Somehow I wish there were more. The characters you created in this story are now one of my favorites. I don't know if you still check this account but I want you to know I throughly enjoying this story. Actually, I have found I greatly enjoy your writing. I've been reading through some of your stories, right now I'm skipping the one-shots but I'll go back to them after the chapter stories. I really only like D&H, L&H and S&H stories. Maybe some day I'll try other pairings but not now, and never Ron and Hermione, yuck! I have a hard time with Harry and Hermione, they just seem more like siblings to me.
Thank you for sharing your imagination, freely. Much appreciated.
How did I know that the Prophet would ruin D&He's ability to share THEIR news with their families. They should sue for breach of privacy. I loved Hermione throwing up on Lucius' shoes, that was frickin funny. I also love how Draco playful goad's his parents. I will say it again, I love this playfully sweet Draco. He still has his snark but he's so damn adorable.
So sweet he planned their wedding and surprised her with the dress and flowers. The only thing not mentioned was a photographer. I can't wait for the parents to find out about the marriage and the baby.
Aww, so sweet. This Draco is giving me cavities. lol
I'm glad they finally figured out what their feelings were/are. They are both relationship challenged. Glad their figuring it out.
Hermione has some serious self esteem issues. I think Draco just doesn't want to put her in the headlines and be judged for being with him.
The chair. I wondered if it would make another appearance.
That was great! Narcissa got what she deserved, invading her son's bedroom so early in the morning. Lucius is just shameless, and it was funny. I loved that Draco transfigured Hermione's shirt to say "My boyfriend's dad saw me naked". Seriously, I love this Draco.
Uh oh, is Lucius going to blow when he finds out? Or is Narcissa, being a helicopter mom going to catch them in bed together? Maybe it will be a normal meet, can't wait to find out.
This Draco is just so sweet.
Oh god, Draco doing manual labor shirtless, yummy.
Great chapter.
Your sex toy line is perfect. The Ron is hilarious,no wonder Hermione didn't know sex could be amazing, he probably didn't know what to do with his 6 inches, and clearly not his tongue. Of course Severus and Lucius would be the crowning glory of the line. A little intimidating, Draco seems perfect, though I wouldn't rule out Lucius or Severus.
Such an imagination you have.
This story is refreshing. I saw in one of your comments that your a Buffy fan, love it. I own the series box set. I did watch it when it was on tv. My bestie at the time and I used to watch while on the phone with each other when we couldn't get together. We'd be silent until commercial breaks then freak out and discuss what had happened. lol
I loved the Weasley bbq. Please tell me that now that Ron is single he won't mess with Hermione's relationship, cause they REALLY make no sense. Charlie is so great, outside of the box, especially for the backwards wizarding Britain. I love how relaxed Draco was around the Weasley's. I'm loving this sweet story.
I'm so late to finding your stories but I'm so glad I did. I love AU stories. I hated cannon pairings, they made no sense. You are a gifted writer.
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