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Reviews for Strong Hands

By : ZooArmy
  • From sapphiretrini on September 15, 2008
    hi this is wonderful! i like this story a lot can't wait to see what happens next! hopefully smut? XD
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  • From lovesnogger on September 15, 2008
    omg super cute!! and your writing is awesome so don't pay any attention to whoever had the nerve to say that shit. can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From Dadella on September 15, 2008
    I'm reviewing before reading the last chapter, in response to your a/n... the truth is, as someone who speaks another language entirely (though I don't know which one) your grammar is actually pretty good... not difficult to follow at all (minus a few stumbles when I'm too tired to be awake but am still reading all that lovely lovely drarry slash...) but if you were NOT an ESL, then yes... your grammar is atrocious ( >^_^< )

    but those that matter understand and it's not a problem at all...

    (by the way, I adore your story... it's cute, and I just want to squeeze your insecure little Draco)
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 15, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 5!!! To be honest, the story isn't hard to read. Sometimes you arrange the words wrong but who doesn't. Even someone who speaks, reads and writes English makes these mistakes. I really enjoy your story and encourage you to continue.
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  • From ANON - arealdeal on September 15, 2008
    this is a great story, I did want to comment about what you said about the reviewer and your English. First off, you have a lot of talent, or else you wouldn't come up with this and go to the effort that you do. Second, what shows thru when I read isn't so much mistakes as, there would have been a better (soother) way to say something. That is why you need someone to proof read for you. Just little tweeks to make it flow better from an English standpoint. For example, "lay on your stomach on the table" - too many "ons" I would have just said "lay face down" then there are a few times when word order is out of whack, it is just an English thing, and nothing to sweat about, but a 15 min. proof by a "dyed in the wool" English speaker would solve all of those. Please don't listen to reviewers who don't have all the facts, we will still all read and enjoy your work, but if you would like a - I hate to use the word Beta, lets just say an "English" checker, I would be happy to do this for you. I listed by email above, if you are interested, if not, don't let the few get you down, I can hardly say more that "my pencil is blue" in French let alone write a story in another language. My hat's off to you and your talent!
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  • From Leentjef on September 15, 2008
    very very goodkeep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From shinythiefxblast on September 15, 2008
    my mouth was open in one big oh my god right at the end. i swear draco is freaking dense!!!!! oh hahaha lol. *wipes away tear* NAICE!
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  • From ANON - Minnie on September 15, 2008
    I don't know if I missed it, but when did Hermione hear Draco tell them about Harry writing about Dust? Just a tiny something I noticed. Otherwise, I love your story, and your grammar is okay, really. I'm not the best to judge, because English is only my second language, but I have definitely read stories written by native speakers that were A LOT worse.
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  • From TheGingerLady on September 15, 2008
    Yay you updated!! *glomps* wiiee thank youu!!! i cant wait till the next chap!!!! oohhh
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  • From Leentjef on September 10, 2008
    very very good chapters keep up the good work and
    pooooooooooooooost soooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
    bye bye
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on September 10, 2008
    haha. can't wait
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  • From gentlenightrain on September 10, 2008
    EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I'm so excited about the meeting! Update soooon! PLEEEEEAAAASSSEEE!
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 10, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 4!!!
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  • From Chiken89 on September 10, 2008
    Why do you do this to me? Couldn't you have just cut off where Draco actually MEETS Harry, I mean I would still freak out but at least I know Draco knows how "James" is at least. AHHHHH its horrible just cutting it off like that!!!! Oh brilliant story I LOVE it. Please please please please please times infinity update SOON!!!
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  • From Toddy on September 09, 2008
    Enjoying it so far, more please.
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