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Reviews for Envy

By : ElyBaby
  • From ANON - NS on June 15, 2014
    Beautifully written. Pansy's character is well developed here and while the sex itself is integral to the story, it's not exaggerated or romanticized, which is perfect for a darker story like this. Ron's perspective felt a bit generic at times, with none of the quirks we saw in the series. But the biggest thing that's missing from this is another chapter. Then another, and another. I really want to know what happens after this. :)
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on August 27, 2013
    Ely-Baby,

    I came across 'Lust' and saw that you were writing individual "Sins" stories. So I decided to start with your first one.

    Oh, I do like the very Slytherian reasoning that Pansy uses to blackmail Ron. He really should have 'locked that door'. Bad for him, but good for us (your readers) and Pansy.

    I love that Pansy can admit that Ron can get her off, but Draco can't. I can imagine her coming back for more...and how can he turn her down. I did like 'taking' Pansy and she was more than he expected...I don't think that he would be able to deny her ever again.

    Thank you and keep writing!
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