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Reviews for A Taste of Heaven

By : Breenieweenie
  • From caseyjarryn on February 06, 2009
    wow, this is such a great fic!!
    I really hope you find the time to update again soon!!
    Keep it up!
    xoxox
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  • From AnnaMolly on February 06, 2009
    finally u updated!!!!
    lmaoo
    plz update quickly
    i'm DYING 2 c wat happens
    but thank god hermione finally a stand again that whore
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on February 06, 2009
    oh and I cried too, and I AGREE with margaritama's review that she would to hermione dating some other hot pureblood, and giving hell by just looking beautiful and feeling good. Insert hermione's theme song "Single Ladies (Put a Ring on it) by Beyonce"
    Verse 1)

    Up in the club (club), we just broke up (up)
    I'm doing my own little thing
    You decided to dip (dip), but now you want to trip (trip)
    Cause another brother noticed me
    I'm up on him (him), he up on me (me)
    Don't pay him any attention
    Cause I cried my tears (tears), for three good years (years)
    You can't be mad at me

    [Chorus]
    Cause if you liked it then you should have put a ring on it
    If you liked it then you should have put a ring on it
    Don't be mad once you see that *he* want it
    If you liked it then you should have put a ring on it


    (2x) Wuh Uh Oh Uh Uh Oh Uh Oh Oh Uh Uh Oh

    If you liked it then you should have put a ring on it
    If you liked it then you should have put a ring on it
    Don't be mad once you see that he want it
    If you liked it then you should have put a ring on it

    (Verse 2)

    I got gloss on my lips (lips), a man on my hips (hips)
    Hold me tighter than my Dereon jeans
    Acting up (up), drink in my cup (cup)
    I can care less what you think
    I need no permission, did I mention
    Don't pay him any attention
    Cause you had your turn (turn)
    But now you gon' learn
    What it really feels like to Miss Bee

    (Chorus)
    Cause if you liked it then you should have put a ring on it
    If you liked it then you should have put a ring on it
    Don't be mad once you see that *he* want it
    If you liked it then you should have put a ring on it

    (2x's) Wuh Uh Oh Uh Uh Oh Uh Oh Oh Uh Uh Oh
    (REPEAT)

    (Bridge)

    Don't treat me to these things of this world
    I'm not that kind of girl
    Your love is what I prefer, what I deserve
    Here's a man that makes me then takes me
    And delivers me to a destiny, to infinity and beyond
    Pull me into your arms
    Say I'm the one you own
    If you don't, you'll be alone
    And like a ghost, I'll be gone

    All the single ladies (7x's)
    Now put your hands up

    (2x's) Wuh Uh Oh Uh Uh Oh Uh Oh Oh Uh Uh Oh

    Wuh Uh Oh

    (Chorus)
    Cause if you liked it then you should have put a ring on it
    If you liked it then you should have put a ring on it
    Don't be mad once you see that he want it
    If you liked it then you should have put a ring on it

    (REPEAT CHORUS)

    Wuh uh oh

    Oh and I do hope there is a WHY as y draco hurt hermione so much and he let her see and hear all of his misgivings/conquests (3 or 4 witches a day and undergarments left for her to see) as soon as they broke up and whats with the fake concern everytime he is looking at her? ARGHHHHH

    Respect
    Scarlet
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on February 06, 2009
    Ok first of the story is brilliant, but I have to ask the obvious question, WHY, WHY in Merlin's name is she still chasing after him and taking ALL that he has done to her? he has fucked so many witches and used her, why is she not blowing his ass to hell, in love or not why is HERMIONE GRANGER letting that manwhore hurt her and make her feel insignificant, if he asks for forgiveness in an instant she will give it, I dont understand. And the one moment she gets somewhat angry enough she kisses him in front of the entire hall, I dont get that it makes her look like a slag, and I refuse to believe harry and ron will let him humiliate(sp) her so much without kicking his ass at one point, and GINNY dear Merlin, draco was with her and hurt hermione so much by being with ginny throughout their 3 months and she dared draco to take her vignity. And he thinks that she is some sort of emotional monster, HELL YES HE IS. ARGHHHHH! I am SO angry, Please dont let hermione take him back after all that I am a headstrong female I want to kill him take him to hell and then make suffer for eternity. You have me so riled up I think I can scream *SCREAMSSSS* Great writing, so good u got me mad...lol Keep it up and update soon.

    Respect
    Scarlet
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  • From margaritama on February 05, 2009
    FUCK! I don't even know what to say....is what Ginny said true?? WTF???? My mind is blown apart.

    Ok what I want to see is this story moved up past graduation and Hermione coming into her own - she may not be conventionally beautiful but she can he really sexy. I want to see Hermione with a HOT pureblood like Blaise, Theo, Marcus or Adrian. I want Draco Malfoy to eat his words and I want Ginny to be dumped and smacked by her mother.
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  • From margaritama on February 05, 2009
    DAMN - that was so real. That went from HOT to FRIGID in seconds. What is going through Draco's mind?
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  • From margaritama on February 05, 2009
    I hate that she is questioning herself. Its Draco's problem not hers. Wow I can't believe he's just going through girls so quickly. DAMN! Padma's a slag by the way.

    And Hermione was so brave to kiss him one last time. Proud of her.

    Hermione needs a distraction by the way - a boy distraction.

    Two last things: I love how well you've captured a young woman's angst of first love. And the "scenarios" were hilarious. I was cracking up.
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  • From margaritama on February 05, 2009
    hmm - draco is strangely quiet...
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  • From margaritama on February 05, 2009
    Girl, if you're the same BreenieWeenie who does those fantastic trailers then I'm happy to read your work.

    It's a great first chapter and my heart is breaking.
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  • From Eilisbelle on February 05, 2009
    that was a good chapter. I see you aren't a fan of Ginny. You make her into a very good bitch. Love how Pansy isn't being friends with Ginny, and I can't wait to see the eventual blow out with Draco and Hermione!!
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  • From dragongirl on February 05, 2009
    I am falling in love with this fic.., It is so Dramaione because is soo good... They are both so comflicted that is funny.. I hope you keep it up soon..
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  • From Eilisbelle on September 17, 2008
    BW... oh man. You are the second author to make me speechless. Needless to say I can't *wait* for the next offering....
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on September 16, 2008
    Excellent chapter, dearest! So angsty and so sad that he felt like she believed him incapable of love. Perhaps he wonders if she speaks the truth? Maybe he thought the same so he broke up with her.....he believed she didnt really love him, just the idea of him. I like that, I like this story and I will continue to read faithfully!

    Thank you so much for your lovely praise by the way. I appreciate it more than you know. You are doing wonderfully here, keep up the good work!

    Happy Writing!
    SG
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  • From SilverEyedPhoenix on September 16, 2008
    i LOVE this story, its brilliant! You portray the images so well, i'm really impressed! PLEASE update soon, it makes for a great distraction from my physics homework lol!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on September 16, 2008
    This was a brilliant chapter!

    I love the way you are writing in the first person, well done for making it real!

    ~LadyVoldemort87~
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