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Reviews for Muggle Marriage Law 51599

By : jacidavy
  • From Terrie on September 14, 2008
    Draco should have daydreamed a little longer so he could remember what he did to Hermione and her dress after the ball.
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  • From Terrie on September 14, 2008
    This is a classic abused woman story. My sister and her husband were the same. He belittled her, beat her, destroyed her clothes and things, accused her of wanting/having sex with other men, and kept her from family and friends. But she "loved" him and also said he was sorry and promised to be better. Everything that is in this story. The Draco in this story is just like him. Popular with other people, able to fool them that he's a "nice" guy and makes Hermione still want and love him despite his abuse. If it follows the same pattern, she'll go back to him, he'll never admit or make amends for his abuse and most likely it will continue. Lucius will encourage it and Narcissa will facilitate it. My sister is dead now from illness brought on by her husband's abuse.
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  • From jessirose85 on September 14, 2008
    That was a beautiful story 10/10

    Cannot wait to read more from you in the future xxxx
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  • From kazfeist on September 14, 2008
    That's a very nice ending, in my opinion. :D
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  • From chickaboo on September 13, 2008
    What a great story! Thank you for sharing it! This was really a fun read.
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  • From revampedfallenangel on September 13, 2008
    What a great story, I hope you decide to post your other one :) your a really good writer
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on September 13, 2008
    You should post it!

    I really did enjoy this story!

    Well done!


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  • From KellyJCR on September 13, 2008
    I thought that was a very sweet ending. As to the question if you should post the other story you have I say please do. You are a gifted writer and I enjoyed this story very much. I found out if you like one story by an author the others are usually as good if not better. That little rule has yet to dissapoint. I hope you do post the other and as usual well done!!!
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  • From Rosamund on September 13, 2008
    Awesome story...you should have posted slowly and kept us hanging ;) but I very glad to have read it all. Great job!!!
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  • From Citten on September 13, 2008
    oh come on another chapter PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! like right now! i cant wait to see what happens now but why hasnt anyone told them what is going on yet. :) boy lucius has an evil strick not to let on.
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  • From SilverEyedPhoenix on September 12, 2008
    TEASE!!! lol

    -waits anxiously-
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  • From Verie on September 12, 2008
    dont tweak so long! please?

    the tension's killing me.
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  • From kazfeist on September 12, 2008
    Well, don't tweak too much...it's looking pretty good already. :D
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  • From jessirose85 on September 12, 2008
    I'm hanging for the ending....will it be up tonight?? loved that chapter tho
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  • From kazfeist on September 11, 2008
    Wow! You'd updated so many chapters in just a couple days! I had to go back and reread. I really love the story, and I can't wait for the happy ending! I was fairly worried, in the early chapters, because the transition in emotions seemed a bit forced, to me. But I love the way the story's going now. :D
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