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Reviews for An Unexpected Turn of Events

By : CovenmasterOrion
  • From ANON - Anastacia Lynn on December 28, 2014
    I love this story! Please continue.
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  • From rosemarysbaby1 on January 11, 2010
    i can't wait to read more
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  • From ANON - Hermione925 on October 31, 2008
    luved it cant wait 4 the nexted one this is gettin really good update soon plezzz!!!!!
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  • From ANON - mary on October 30, 2008
    I think that giving us some time references with the jumping around would make this so much more coherent to read. Otherwise, it's really good.
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  • From Citten on October 30, 2008
    great chapter it made things much clearer and i really enjoyed the part with hermione and her little boys! i love that scorpios loves her like a mommy! :) so do we get to have a marriage cause you have not gotten to that point and i so do hope that it is coming! :)
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  • From blondpierogi on October 30, 2008
    wow this story is sooo awesome!!!!
    great job!!!
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 30, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Heidi191976 on October 30, 2008
    An excellent chapter. I hope that Ron will get caught eventually before he decides to try and reclaim his children like Sarai did when she tried to get Scorpius. I also hope that Draco actually marries Hermione so that they are a real family forever. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From kazfeist on October 30, 2008
    A very interesting way to get away from patient confidentiality. Great update chapter. I thought that you had already had Draco and Sarai divorced, back in the beginning of the story, though. I didn't see the need to explain it again. Also, I assume you'd given custody of Scorpius to Draco based on how the two had gotten divorced. Anyway, thanks so much for the update. Now, we only have to get Ron back to justice. :D
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  • From ANON - Casey on October 28, 2008
    Cassie Can't die!! thats just would be sooo sad!!
    why are Hermione and Draco still just friends?
    Or will they draw comfort from one another in their time of need? and have another baby??
    Update ASAP :o)
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 27, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Citten on October 27, 2008
    that is just afall. how could you do that? i do hope that everything will eventually be okay! dracos little angel! do post soon and let us know what is to become of the little girl!
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  • From ANON - girlyswot on October 26, 2008
    This story is one of the most offensive things I have ever read. I have no objection to graphic violence and sex but I have every objection to the complete trivialisation of the serious problems of domestic violence and abuse. Not one character in this story has anything like a normal, moral response to the outrageous things done to Hermione. Why, when Hermione is finally thrown out of her home, doesn't she (or more likely Harry and Ginny) have Ron arrested? When Lavender admits her role in the abuse, why doesn't Draco urge her to tell the Aurors?

    If you are going to write about issues like this, at least have the guts to do it properly, in a way that explores the real emotional struggles associated with this kind of relationship. But to use domestic violence as an excuse for this kind of shock fic is utterly repellent. You should be ashamed of yourself.
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  • From desiraes0220 on October 26, 2008
    Your story is good and well writte for the most part however it does tend to get alil confusing at first when you even with the line break jump to a memory or flashback with out letting us now when this flash back accured like say 3 week artfer ron and Hermione started dating or april 1998 forbiddin forrest something like that would make it a lot easier to read. But its your story if you trying to make us confused to werre we have to read it 2-3 times to get it straight then your doing a great job at it other than that keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - DuchessCullen on October 26, 2008
    Wonderful! (well obviously not the drowning) I can't wait for more. Please please please update soon! :)
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