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By : CovenmasterOrion
  • From ANON - musicandbooks96 on October 06, 2012
    please, please, please,finish.
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  • From ANON - Shanda on December 30, 2009
    This is fucking EPIC! Seriously, you're amazing and I bow down to your greatness! I had so many flippin' things to say as I was reading the chapters, but as I waited til the final one to review you can imagine I'm overwhlmed and have forgoten most of it in my state of awe. I know I was freakin' amazed by Rose, Scorpious, and Albus being animagus already. Plus, all the things they've already been through vould freakin' fill all seven novel adventures in one freakin' year! Crazy. EPIC. But Hermione has it tough. Geez, I can't even imagine... being 'used' so many times... I hope she catches a break soon. I am so insanely estatic about this story and can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Ms M on October 10, 2009
    great plot!! i can't wait to read more amazing chapters..
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  • From dragongirl on October 07, 2009
    Please can Hermione endure something else, like a little happiness perhaps, just a little please!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on October 04, 2009
    Hello =)....so I read all that you have posted in one sitting. I like the plot. I like the idea of a family trying to pick up the peices, the next generation bridging the gaps between the old, previous generations stuck in a time warp of ideas and unaccepting of change. I think its very real and a great angle. My only criticism, and I mean for this to be constructive, is that I feel like I am missing something somewhere...like there is more I should know about backgrounds etc.....I like the story but for me there is just something missing...I just dont know what specifically....


    Happy Writing!!
    S_G
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  • From kazfeist on October 03, 2009
    Well, it least she's alive....hopefully not too badly damaged, eh? Love the way you've got the kids so involved with what's going on. I assume the next chapter will be full of action and a rescue, perhaps? :D
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  • From Rosamund on October 03, 2009
    awesome update! more, please!
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  • From KellyJCR on September 30, 2009
    I can't express how thrilled I am that you are continuing this story. I was a loyal reader when you originally had started posting it and was disappointed when it had disappeared. I love the various inner stories of all the characters along with the plot. I find your style of writing great. You had mentioned that some thought it to "blunt and violent". Well I think the way you handled all that had happened in a timely way. It comes across very actioned packed and serious without getting to muddled down with to many words and making it sound to over the top. This makes for a very fast paced and interesting story. It also helps keep focus on the plot. I do have one question since I reread this. I thought Hermione had set the meeting with Draco on the 18th of December and then when Hermione gets kidnapped it suddenly the 11th of December. I try hard not to worry about dates but, since a time turner is being introduced I think its important to keep the dates straight. Thanks again for continuing this. Can't wait for the update. Well done!!!!!!!
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  • From Rosamund on September 29, 2009
    almost forgot...if she saves her mum, then erases what she did to that skank, right? ;)
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  • From Rosamund on September 29, 2009
    awesome update! Loved it.
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 12, 2008
    This is excellent. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From kazfeist on November 09, 2008
    Great idea to give Rose all her aids. Hopefully Hermione won't have to stay raped and bitten. :D
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  • From ANON - BeautifullyMalicious on November 09, 2008
    This story is so great! The characterizations, especially the children, are wonderful! Please update soon!
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  • From Rosamund on November 09, 2008
    Oh, that was just AWESOME and worth the (long) wait!!! I can't wait to see what she does with the timeturner, hopefully go back before Hermione was raped (again). I suppose she can't go too far back, but at least undo what was recently done. Brilliant!!!
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  • From bananasforyou on October 24, 2008
    the fucked up situations that happen to those people.
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