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Reviews for The Debt

By : Daktalakpak
  • From gossipgirl84 on April 24, 2013
    Try not to take this as a flame but as constructive criticism. This really, really needs a beta. It's kind of hard to read. There are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. You said earlier in the story, that you tried to clean it up, well, it needs more than that. It's good, I liked where you were going with this, it was just hard to read because of the mistakes. So, next time, get a beta, someone who can help look over your work and fix any mistakes.
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  • From bloodshound on July 10, 2011
    damn she's not right in the head. This could get her expelled.
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  • From bloodshound on July 02, 2011
    ut oh. now who grabbed him... and she didn't even give him a chance to explaine.
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  • From bloodshound on June 18, 2011
    As long as you can control the main over view and nudge thme in your semi planned dierection, it should be fine. let them go and do what they want. Who knows, could be fun yeah? ^^
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  • From bloodshound on June 13, 2011
    Heh, you asked for it Draco. ^^
    I'm glad the Gryffs din go all 'raaaaaaaaaaargh' on him.
    Still what about Heirs and all. Malfoy at least will be expected to provide one.
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  • From bloodshound on June 04, 2011
    ohhhhhh, considering Draco's earlier tone, this sounds ominous.
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  • From SParker on May 28, 2011
    I knew this story looked familiar. It HAS been
    awhile. Good to see you're finishing it. :-)

    ...and I'm still wondering if a debt still exist.
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  • From bloodshound on May 28, 2011
    kudos on getting it done then... and more importantly published for the reading of us. ^^
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  • From bloodshound on May 21, 2011
    Nah, half the time the characters almost seem to wonder off and do their own thing, dragging you along for the ride. Still, it's fun finding out where you end up. ^^
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  • From bloodshound on May 13, 2011
    oh,scary. Draco's got a stalker.
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  • From bloodshound on May 06, 2011
    it happen with teenage girls. *nods wisely.
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  • From anniea on October 19, 2008
    oh you are so cruel!!!!!!!!!! i want more!, next time ur writing a sexual scene try "addicted" by saving abel, "animals" by nickleback or even, "get stoned" by hinder. they really inspire me to write. update soon *kisses*
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  • From bananasforyou on October 16, 2008
    omg. nice and just wow!
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 16, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 7!!! Why is Draco molesting Harry?
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 13, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 6!!!
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