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Reviews for Dudley's Discovery (More Prologue Added)

By : Ms_Figg
  • From Ms_Figg on October 04, 2008
    Chelzi: lol. Yes, it was a Dudley story, but it's kind of heading in the direction of Daddy Dearest, where I followed the story line of several characters at once, but it all blended together in the end. That's why I have it in the General area, because there is so much going on. Dudley will be back in spades. He has a lot to deal with. So do his parents. Soooo, let's see what happens. Thanks for commenting.
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  • From yeagerbomb on October 04, 2008
    this is interesting, though i'm unsure how the plot got here from where it started and where it's going. however, i'm apparently willing to continue returning to read. so...keep writing! the mechanics are good and the style is also. the plot is just a little disjointed. but i'm living with it. but seriously, wasn't this a dudley story for the first three chapters?~
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 03, 2008
    great story
    and it is funny
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  • From NutsAboutHarry on October 02, 2008
    Oh man the mental image of Hermione punching Lavender out made me laugh out loud! You are HILARIOUS! And I giggled a bit when Ginny decked Lav Lave too....I needed a good giggle!

    Well done for two lovely chappies!
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  • From jessirose85 on October 02, 2008
    This was great..Snape is having a fun time, eh??

    Can't wait for more xxx 10/10
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  • From yeagerbomb on October 02, 2008
    this is really interesting. i hope you update soon. i saw the title in the section and though, ehhh...might as well! and it was good. i love dudley's-a-wizard fics. they entertain me endlessly. well written, despite the slight oocness. i actually really liked hermione beating lavender up like that. yay violence!!~
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  • From stopperindeath28 on October 01, 2008
    interesting story! looking forward to the next chapters:)
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  • From Ms_Figg on September 28, 2008
    If you want to see a manip of how I see Dudley in my mind, visit this link: http://www.theburningpen.com/images/dudley.jpg

    The Dudley in the books is blonde so I maniped that in as well. :)
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  • From NutsAboutHarry on September 28, 2008
    I think this fic is my new favourite! Poor Dudley being scared of ickle house elves! I can't wait to see how he further progresses in his life at Hogwarts and how he deals with grumpy bum Snape!

    Wel done!
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  • From NutsAboutHarry on September 27, 2008
    Oh maaaaaaaaaaaaan what a teriff start to a New Mrs Figg fic! I really like Petunia's Promise and like what I think this fic could be!

    I look forward to future chappies!
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  • From ANON - dudley on September 24, 2008
    really...I never thought dudley could be an interesting character. Give us some more, please...?
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  • From helenesnape on September 14, 2008
    Ms_Figg:

    HA! I knew you couldn't stay away from the SS/HG ship for very long. Looks like someone is getting their mojo back! :)

    Hmmm! Snape owing Hermione a life debt that he is not all that fired up to make good on. That could get very interesting. What would she require of him if he tries to circumvent his debt to her, will things just get nasty, or will they heat up? Oh the possibilities!

    Loving the spin you've put on JKR's existing story. The gaping plot holes JKR left us with are seemingly endless. I look forward to seeing what you will come up with.

    Thanks (as always) for the great read!
    MHS
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  • From ANON - Briappletree on September 13, 2008
    Ooooh, I like this idea.

    :D :D :D Can't wait for more. :3
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  • From helenesnape on September 13, 2008
    Ms_Figg:

    Interesting expansion on "Petunia's Promise". I liked how you elaborated on what happened to the Dursleys after they all left Privet Drive for the last time. Turns out that Dudley wasn't the heartless bastard he was in 6 of the 7 books. Looks like he finally developed a conscience there at the end. It was good to see him give Vernon what-for...family is family, and they should stick together when times get tough. I never really liked that self-serving SOB Vernon anyways! And Petunia...that woman needs to grow a spine, REALLY!

    I hope to see your return to the SS/HG realm soon. Perhaps these recent one-shots are what you needed to get back in the groove.

    Looking forward to more great work from you!
    MHS
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  • From ellaevenstar on September 13, 2008
    Can I just say, WOW?

    This is really great... I'm loving your Dudley!

    Man, I can foresee a great story from this, if you wanted to continue with this train of thought. =) It's certainly different from anything I've ever read.

    I love love love this!
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