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By : Cliobella
  • From SNAPESANGEL1991 on March 10, 2019

    i would love it if you added more

     


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  • From FieryPhoenix on June 24, 2015
    Absolutely loved these three chapters! Well written, seamlessly flowed together. Love a happy Severus!! Well done!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on October 02, 2009
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From diamondmouse on October 26, 2008
    lmao that was great! i loved how you ended that last bit with the children question
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  • From Sampdoria on October 25, 2008
    A wonderful story and a brilliant third chapter!!!!
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  • From chickaboo on October 25, 2008
    Oh I loved it! What a great ending! Thank you so much for sharing!!
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on October 24, 2008
    lovely story and beautifully written
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  • From desiraes0220 on October 24, 2008
    Great chapters so far can't wait for more.
    Cannon who the hell cares if the story and
    charaters are written well and it flows with the story
    great work update soon please

    Des
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 24, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on October 24, 2008
    I love this story! It's up to you if you want to end it, but it would be interesting to see how they deal with a possibility of pregnancy. Snape with his fear of having kids and Hermione, even though she may want them, not feeling as if she is prepared for them at that moment. And then there is the newly single Ron. What will he be doing now that Ginger, the vapid blonde bimbo is out of his picture, so to say? And what about Ginger? Will she be wanting revenge now that Ron has seen her for what she is? You have questions that you could be answering, but it's up to you if you want to go on or not. It's a great story and I hope to be reading more of your work in the future.
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  • From voraciousreader on October 24, 2008
    Loved it! Just the idea of Hermione defending Severus' virtue in a pub, and then him laughing it off with Remus; just great.
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  • From VictoriaPrince on October 14, 2008
    Congratulations, my dear Cliobella!

    You managed to capture a Severus Snape that any woman would want to bathe with! Not that we wouldn't all take that plunge most willingly at the drop of a wand, anyway.

    You achieved the perfect balance of elegant erotica, without resorting to base vulgarity----which is a marvellous talent, indeed.

    Brava, my dear, brava! I truly loved both chapters of "Mine", and am simply awestruck by your imaginative one~shot. I hesitate to call it PWP, as its quality is so far above the usual fare called by that term.

    I would sincerely enjoy reading more of your work. Continue writing, please!

    Victoria Prince, fellow author
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  • From dreamer24 on September 30, 2008
    *Gasps* Absolutely wonderful!
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on September 30, 2008
    Dont feel bad, Luv. Oneshots have a way of taking on a life of their own....trust me, I know, only for me it is usually my Lucius oneshots that turn into lengthy collections of smut LOL......it was very sweet, lovely in fact! Of course, I love Severus....i especially love him naked....naked AND wet....well thats just pure decadence and the only thing I can say about that is MORE please!


    Happy Writing!
    S_G
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  • From neelix on September 30, 2008
    oh good grief... how hot was that!

    I want to be in the tub with Severus..... sigh!

    A little more would be lovely!
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