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Reviews for A Muddy Secret

By : GammaOrionis
  • From chickaboo on September 26, 2008
    Wow. That was intense. I'm glad that she's forgiven him. I wonder what's with the note from dear ol'dad. If Lucius is frightened, then I think I may have an idea. Great update, I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From helenesnape on September 25, 2008
    I wonder what Lucius' father could have possibly wrote that would make him freak out so badly? Could it have to do with DE initiation...betrothal to Narcissa...could his father know about Hermione's true bloodline...The possibilities seem endless. (These are just rhetorical questions, I wouldn't want you to give away too much of your great plot just to satisfy my curiosity :) )

    I was glad to see Hermione forgive him, especially now that he is in such an emotionally bad place. But complete absolution can only happen if he seeks it from the other Muggleborn he insulted. I suspect that Lucius is about to receive a large helping of Humble Pie.

    Ah! Schadenfreude seems to be the appropriate term, thanks for pointing that out. I studied Spanish because German wasn't an available course at my school, so naturally I wouldn't have known that word.

    Looking forward to your next update!
    MHS
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  • From LilCas on September 25, 2008
    omg omg omg omg omg omg Keep writing!!!
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  • From Rosamund on September 25, 2008
    short but wonderful chapter...forgot to mention how much I love her friendship with Sev ;)
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  • From LaBibliographe on September 25, 2008
    Addendum:

    I found this drawing that seems to fit your story. The context can be anything one wants.

    http://fc68.deviantart.com/fs12/i/2006/299/1/e/Lucius_Severus__Attraction_by_pervert_bitch.jpg


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  • From Shalengreh on September 25, 2008
    i almost feel bad for lucius
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on September 25, 2008
    No, not too long! If you don't have the story writt already then on the contrary, I admire you for your speed! There are authors that do update quickly a WIP story, but there are very few who accomplish good quality in the same time. And I consider your story definitly quality work! See, that's the problem with people who like your work: They will constantly ask for updates. But hey, no pressure there! Well maybe just a little bit??? No, seriously, if it's for the sake of a chapter to take your time, just do it at your pace! After all, you write for yourself formostly (is that even a real english word? or is it only formost that exists? whatever, I guess you understand what I mean anyways...), so don't let anybody bother you.

    I loved the flashbacks. It's like a beginners guide on how to turn your child into a psycho! Poor Lucius! And he is so clueless about Hermione. I hope he figures out what's wrong. She should talk to him! I mean everybody deserves a chance of redemption. Well may be not everybody, but this young Lucius definitly does!

    So please update soon! *LOL*
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  • From Rosamund on September 25, 2008
    Awesome story! I can't wait for more of it...just caught on this morning ;)
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  • From onduril on September 25, 2008
    Hi,
    I thought I'd drop a little review. I really enjoy your story. It's interesting to see a time turner fic with Lucius and Hermione. I've sofar mostly read the snape/hermione timeturner fics. But as I said, I really enjoy yours.
    Keep it up and I can't wait for the day that Lucius and she get together and he gets to know the truth.

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  • From ANON - Miss Lilac on September 25, 2008
    I am LOVING this story! Please please pleaaase update - I was poorly today and decided to read some fics, and this one really shone in my eyes!! It's a perfect mix of everything that I love - Hermione, Lucius, going back in time, etc! ME LIKES :D It was angsty but not *too* much, this fic is delicious. Hope you update soon darling!
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  • From Utopia on September 25, 2008
    Unless Orlando has long blonde hair, pointy ears and a bow and quiver, I DON'T WANT TO KNOW! Give me Legolas ANY day! I've a thing for blondes... I'd happily be in a Legolas-Lucius sandwich (me in the middle) with Asher (from Anita Blake) and the prince from the new Helboy film standing off to one side for desert! Mmmm. Odd really, my fience looks a bit Snapey - big nose and quite greasy hair (oh, I hope he doesn't read this!! lol!). But my babe has a permenant tan and spekkies. I've no idea where the blonde fixation comes from.

    Draco's cute... but why settle for second best when you have Lucius available?

    The YANKS are prudes? Good grief! You should see my parents' generation and the ones before that! lol! We just don't care these days! We'll talk about sex all day long! lol!

    Glad you approve, milady, I love the artwork on there! And some of the funny picks take the mick brilliantly! LOL!

    What's up duckie in RL? Wanna talk about it? Just drop me an email of you do.

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    AWWWWWW! Was Sevvie who saved her! He was probably more upset because of the 'domestic' violence and didn't want to see more! I should have guessed that one! Mini secpumsemptra (or however you spell it).

    To say Sev's 11, he's got an old head on those young shoulders!

    Oh dear, no wonder Lucius is a bad Father - he didn't exactly have a good role model to base his parenting skills on!




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  • From xineweber on September 25, 2008
    Oh, poor Lucius... he really doesn't know what he's done...

    Severus is quite an adorable child :) vicious, but adorable :)
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  • From chickaboo on September 25, 2008
    Wow. That explains a lot about your Lucius. I wonder what Hermione would say if she knew..... Great update, I eagerly look forward to your next one!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on September 25, 2008
    Poor lucius! :( Damn you Abraxas!!! And to think I used to like you!!!

    This chapter was brilliant!

    Oh I know....*swoons* Tom Felton is the sex =D


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  • From ANON - Mia on September 24, 2008
    I love the insight into Lucius. You actually managed to wrangle sympathy for Lucius from me. JK never managed that. But, oh how this chapter left me wanting the next one to be here already. I want everything happily fixed and ironed out, and to be independantly wealthy. Can you do that too? Thanks for this. It gets better and better.

    ~Mia
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