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Reviews for A Muddy Secret

By : GammaOrionis
  • From ANON - ana on September 24, 2008
    yep. definitely love the way you wrote about Lucius who needs Hermione... even for her attention. but then, i also hope that things will clear up soon.. it's so heart breaking seeing him like that....
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  • From LaBibliographe on September 24, 2008
    Chapter 8: Sorry for not keeping up with your lightning updates. I
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  • From Citten on September 24, 2008
    Good i dont think you should aulter chapter seven. excelent chapter! i could feel the angwish that you are convaning from them both espiceal lucius! poor poor lucius to be treated like that by your own father. (i do hope that is not what you ment--that you were treated the same way! for if it is i am sending you a huge hug and a shoulder if you need it! :)) but i hope that hermione is slowing getting that there is a deeper reason for all this. but i do have to agree with you on the fact that a)he is a male b)a slytherin--though a slow one but he will get it! (i hope) :) see you soon....or rather write and read you soon! :) i will be dying to see what happens!!!!!
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  • From Heidi191976 on September 24, 2008
    This was great. I think since Severus went to speak to Hermione that he should tell Lucius what she said about why she is angry. Then Lucius could tell her about his past and then maybe they could work things out and become a couple. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From LaBibliographe on September 24, 2008
    Chapter 7: Short chapter, yes, but it packed a wallop. I
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  • From jessirose85 on September 24, 2008
    Poor Lucius.....the flashbacks were well written....we know now where his anger stems from....more soon of this great story 10/10
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  • From LaBibliographe on September 24, 2008
    Chapter 6: Lovely Lucius was a clothes horse even as a teen, I see. Yummy-looking! He must have been born with a well-developed sartorial sense. I
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on September 24, 2008
    I have found that redirecting my upset helps tremendously. Keep writing, work it all out in your stories =) it helps I promise!



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  • From ANON - Kerima on September 24, 2008
    ... =/....
    Updates? Please?
    I'll fedex you some bacon?
    So far this is a great story =).
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  • From helenesnape on September 24, 2008
    It's so sad that Lucius received such indifference from his own father...the apple doesn't fall far from the tree does it? The fact that he never got to know his own mom and his father practically hated him for her death is just so tragic.

    Given the circumstances though, I don't blame Hermione one bit for ignoring Lucius. I think she needs to hex him badly (or perhaps punch him in the face again) before she can fully get her anger out of her system.

    Thanks for the interesting chapter! You are very good at writing angst, although I hope that you work through you own angsty period soon so you can get back to the hot UST that exists between the two of them.

    I've immensly enjoyed the last few chapters...must be the sadist in me, loving Lucius' misery. Looking forward to more.
    MHS
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  • From ANON - Mia on September 24, 2008
    This was brilliant. I loved this chapter. You have nothing to fear about its quality. You are one of those wonderful writers who put forth thought and effort when setting out angst. I adored Severus' defense of Hermione. Did he do it because she was kind to him? Or because he was pissed at Lucius for knocking down Lily. Well, I naturally presume that the 4th year female Gryffindor was the Evans girl. Though short, this was my personal favorite chapter thus far. I can't wait for more. I am enjoying this story far more than I anticipated I would from your first chapter. The first convinced me that you might be a decent writer. Since then you have more than exceeded that expectation. My favorite parts are the interaction with Snape though. Poor guy needs a friend. I always feel bad for him. I expected him to just be a bitter, nasty person without any good reason before that pensieve. I always want to fix his sorry plight. Too bad he won't learn not to call women names from Lucius' experience. Tsk Tsk.

    ~Mia
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  • From Utopia on September 24, 2008
    Oooh, this is a brilliant site for fan art - especially if you love Malfoy senior:

    http://acciobrain.ligermagic.com/gen.php
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  • From chickaboo on September 24, 2008
    Actually I must say I thought that chapter was perfect. It showed Lucius's confusion and Hermione's hurt and anger. I wonder what Lucius will do when he finds out that Hermione is so angry about his use of the "M" word. Great update, I can't wait for more!
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  • From Citten on September 24, 2008
    1st- HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (deep breath) i am better now. :) you are just too funny, i promise i do not want you to become like moody! :) but it was sure a funny thaught. :)

    okay as to the chapter even though it was short, it was powerful-it showed her emotions beautifully. poor hermoine! :( well i do love how lucius would not even clean himself before he went to find her and all that happened to them in the hallway. boy severus was being very brave. i wonder how long will it take lucius to find out what he said wrong?
    okay totally off the wall statement, but--why does no one think that maybe the reason they are in the past is because they were there before and just doing all that was done once before?! because face it lucius would not have sent her back if she had already been there before. though it may and will be different each time because of our choices, so she could change HOW things happen in the future or her future could lie in the past......................okay i am going to stop now or i never will. (sorry this was my mouth running-away without me so you dont have to respond to the last part here it was mostly for my benefit.)

    thanks! :) see you soon!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on September 24, 2008
    Uh oh, they've fell out! Something like that must be so slip of the tongue for Lucius now, I almost don't think he know's what he's saying. Poor lamb =D (I love him can you tell? LOL)

    Yeah, I've heard him singing, I've got the songs on my I-Tunes...Time Isn't Healing is my favourite.

    I love the way Snape is sticking by her, I love a loyal Sevvie. Hehe.

    I like a little angst, although most people don't I think it adds a little more ooomph to the story.

    This was a bloody great chapter, and I love you Luci just a little more than I should LOL.

    Looking forward to the next update!

    ~LadyVoldemort87~
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