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Reviews for A Muddy Secret

By : GammaOrionis
  • From Heidi191976 on September 24, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I hope that Hermione will eventually tell Lucius why she is upset with him, even if she has to lie to him about certain things. I do think that she wants to be with him, but doesn't want him to treat people the way he does now. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From voraciousreader on September 24, 2008
    So, Severus returned Hermione's favor? Good to have friends in low places! As an aside, Tom Felton is rumored to be studying Fisheries Management for his University Major, or whatever they call it in Britain.
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on September 24, 2008
    Ive said a million times that writing is like therapy without the fees....dont apologize for working out emotion through words, it can be very powerful and it can make for great writing at times. The story I am most proud of came out of a period of depression.


    Yes, it was a might short but thats alright, not every chapter can be lengthy. It was emotional and angry and showed how the situation made her feel and her frustration. Great job!


    Happy Writing!
    S_G
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  • From helenesnape on September 24, 2008
    There's absolutely nothing wrong with writing to purge some of RL's angst. I do it alot myself.

    Although it was short, it was a good chapter. I rather enjoyed seeing Lucius so flummoxed, not understanding what he did wrong (That moron! How could he NOT know! Oh, wait he's a man...of course he's not gonna know!)
    And then to see him lose his cool when someone hexed him behind his back...loved that!

    Looking forward to seeing how this will play out!
    MHS
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  • From Utopia on September 24, 2008
    Oh! She hit him so hard that a forensics person could get her fingerprints off his cheek!

    Oh, he deserved it!
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  • From Utopia on September 24, 2008
    Smoked stuff tends to go as far as bacon, and ham. But there's toad in the hole, bubble and squeak, bangers and mash and spotted dick to get through!

    Proper British! Are you DARING to suggest that the Yorkshire Accent ISN'T proper British? Are ya indeed? Are you saying that how Sean Bean speaks ISN'T sexy? (ignore Boramir, that's too posh - but in Sharpe it's spot on Yorkshire!) He's Mellers in the Lady Chatterley film adaptation! Seriously, plant me between Rickman and Bean having a chat and I'd be a puddle of aroused goo - even if they were discussing the weather or their shopping lists!

    oh look! Italics!

    Sign the marriage register! He doesn't talk Quidditch on a date! lol!

    Is he related to Nimune then? Was one of the fathers of the children a Malfoy man? I think they'd be obsessed with their family history and roots - which is why LM knows so much... I should just keep reading shouldn't I! The curse of reviewing as I write is a bad one.

    Awwww! It would have been funny for Lucius to see Hermione's knickers at this stage!

    I always had the opinion that the Malfoy men, being practically wizarding royalty in their bloodline... that the lads would be packed of to a (very well paid) courtesan as soon as they were legal (presuming 17 for magical Brits, rather than 16 for the muggle ones). I can see Abraxas firmly telling Lucius not to take a witch to his bed until he'd been "broken in" and knew what to do in bed when he got there! Lucius probably knows more about how to pleasure a woman than how to pleasure himself!

    Yessss! Someone's SLAPPED Malfoy! Finally!


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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on September 24, 2008
    The chapter was nice... But I have to admit: Too short! :-( (Okay, I am only complaining because I want to read more of it!) I am curious to know if he will be able to wiggle himself out of it!
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  • From Lauriurix on September 23, 2008
    OMG! =D

    of course, this chapter was just as awesome as others even better :O

    i imagined it in my head lol xD specially the slap =P ikes :P

    hoping to read more! =D
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  • From chickaboo on September 23, 2008
    Please oh please oh please update SOON!! Ack! I have to know what happens next!! (I really loved this chapter in case you hadn't noticed. lol)
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on September 22, 2008
    ROFL, so he felt the business end of her wand hey? LOL I can't believe she slapped him! Go 'Mione!

    Oh I know it's his birthday =D I LOVE HIM, He's my favourite character apart from my Voldie. Hehe.

    Feel a little sorry for Hermione, she must be so upset, but poor Luci doesn't know what he's done wrong, I can imagine how confused he is.

    I've just had the delight of tasting my first twinkie LOL, and I loved it...Reeses Pieces too....God....I so wanna move to NYC. Although I do love Britain, historical and all that LOL

    Anyway my darling, this chapter was brilliant, and I cannot wait for your update!

    ~LadyVoldemort87~
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  • From Heidi191976 on September 22, 2008
    Excellent. I think that Lucius will have a difficult time getting Hermione now. I can't believe that she punched him. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what happens.
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  • From jessirose85 on September 22, 2008
    That was a great chapter....some of it was what i thought may happen...once again im not spoiling the story for outside reviewers xxx 10/10
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  • From Citten on September 22, 2008
    That was just a perfect chapter in everyway. first how she worked the conversation at a)breakfast and b) while in hogsmeade. next how they spent their day and how enjoyable most of the day was. :) the kiss was spectacular--i want one!--loved the love bite, mark. ;) but boy did he scrwe up! i love and yet cant believe she hit him. though i love that she did, he diserved it! though i now am going to be drolling waiting for the next chapter! (and i really wanted to see where you unicorns would be! :( will you?) poor lucius is going to be so clueless as to why.
    Sorry about not reviewing chapter five crazy weekend and did not get a chance to. i will say though i love how everyone reacted to her handy work! :) i also loved that lucius was being chivleraous about carrying her bag and i really loved that he kind of loves being bossed by her! :)
    please update soon as you can!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on September 22, 2008
    I was reluctant to read this at first... But I am so glad I started reading it anyways! It's great! Update soon, please...
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  • From ANON - Shetan on September 22, 2008
    What a marvelous chapter. Please update soon...
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