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By : GammaOrionis
  • From Citten on September 20, 2008
    i LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! she is so a perfect slytherin. even if most would have left him. besides she is a woman. no i do think it is odd that he would be thinking about children at this age i have this way of thinking that those of pureblood anstery marry and have children early. i love that 'determation' in lucius he will have her! :) way excited about the posting regularly i will be looking forward to the next chapter (espically if you post more than that or early.) but either way i will enjoy. i love what she did to james, siruis, and peter--it was perfect! :) i also loved lucius recation to it as well! post soon! :)
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  • From chickaboo on September 19, 2008
    Great update. Poor Lucius. He's gonna have to convince Hermione first. LOL I can't wait for more!
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  • From Heidi191976 on September 19, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on September 19, 2008
    I loved this chapter =D

    Loved how Hermione stood up for Sevvie, and hexed James Potters arse! Go Mione! The little brat needed telling once and for all. *growls* Stupid Potters...

    And Luci wants to marry her LMAO, now he's a fella who knows what he wants LOL. Please tell me...*batts eyelashes* Is she gonna have any little Malfoys? Hehe, I hope so!

    This was a brilliant chapter and I throughly enjoyed it!

    ~LadyVoldemort87~


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  • From LaBibliographe on September 19, 2008
    Chapters 1-3: This is very inventive and the dynamic between Hermione and the younger Lucius is quite entertaining. He's at once less subtle and more overtly demanding of his due. All in all, a simpler version who hasn't yet been tested by any real adversity. I like Hermione's handling of him. She isn't nasty to him, just businesslike. He is the only one translating her actions as playing hard-to-get. Unfortunately, it acts as an irresistible goad for Head Boy Lucius to conquer her. That should be fun to watch. She's no one's pushover.

    My only request is that you finish the story. Too many authors fizzle and don't finish, eagerly rushing to start something they haven't any plan for.

    I don't think anyone replied about italics. I use the "Input text" section in the Authors Panel when I add chapters. Within that text box, italics will work if you use HTML coding. See this URL for an example of how to make italics work using HTML coding. It's very simple.

    http://www.htmlcodetutorial.com/_I.html

    That should work for you.

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  • From Utopia on September 19, 2008
    Ooooh... this is interesting! The chapters are quite short - but they flow nicely from one to the other and keep the pace!

    I've got a back in time LM/HG in the pipeline, actually, it's been in the pipeline since I sat in last year's exams at uni waiting to be dismissed! lol!

    I'll give it several months before posting mine, this [your fic] deserves some serious limelight. The plots are so very different, but some little things (Hermione supposedly from Beauxbatons) are too similar for my liking and it looks like plagiarism to me (even though fanfiction is really just plagiarism with a disclaimer at the beginning, all said and done; but as a reader I hate to see a plot repeated over and over). I'll do some severe re-working so it doesn't look like I'm a copycat. I've another story to finish first to give me some thinking time. I don't mean to offend with what I've written, I just thought it was good manners to mention something about my plans for a back in time fic.

    If you want to get in contact: utopia_beta@hotmail.co.uk

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  • From Citten on September 18, 2008
    and so it starts---he will have her! but we knew that. :) we are off to a wonderful start. it will be interesting to see how things unfold with the others she knows in history. i cant wait to see how the gryindors treat her outside a classroom. ;) i will say that she is very stubborn! i makes me want to hit her, she is being so stuck-up! most women irratate me when they are like that. well i cant wait to see how you brerak her of that! :) or maybe it is lucius that will have that honor. ;) oh! i just had a thaught how is muganagal (?)going to treat her?! i will be waiting to see that. :) but she needs to start giving him a chance or he might become a deatheater just to get her. :) now there is a thaught. do update soon my dear! and i will be happy to help anyway and anytime i can. :)
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  • From Lauriurix on September 18, 2008
    awww :) nice story hehe :)

    wanna read more =D
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  • From Heidi191976 on September 18, 2008
    This is an interesting story. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From chickaboo on September 18, 2008
    Ah yes. The Pimp Cane. So important it deserves the caps. lol Great update, I can totally see Lucius just being baffled by the fact that Hermione could just care less. I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Mia on September 17, 2008
    Nice. I'm thrilled you updated so soon. Made me smile when I needed one. Thanks.

    ~Mia~
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on September 17, 2008
    See I had the same thing...Myself and my man Voldemort were blissfully happy, until the Potter brat killed him LMAO...*sigh* It's always the good ones who die =(

    This was a great chapter, love the way she is ignoring him LOL. Keep thinking about the end of this story though...Will she end up as Draco's mother? The mind boggles LOL.

    Looking forward to more!

    ~LadyVoldemort87~
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on September 17, 2008
    Am officially extending Lucius Malfoy a personal invite into my room. He can have an all access pass at any time of day...though he should be warned that my room is warded to render him completely naked upon crossing the threshold. =)


    Good job, duckie! Keep it up!

    Happy Writing!
    S_G
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on September 17, 2008
    Well this was a great second chapter!

    I didnt actually post it here...LOL...It was one of my first ever fan fictions.

    I agree about the SS & RL timeturners, but I like the characters they are based on, if you get a chance check out Snapes_Goddess' 'Remember'.
    It's heartbreaking, but has a brilliant ending.

    Looking forward to more from you!
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  • From Shalengreh on September 17, 2008
    Yay!

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