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Reviews for A Muddy Secret

By : GammaOrionis
  • From chickaboo on September 17, 2008
    Okay it's official. I'm hooked. And I like how you're writing Lucius. Like he's just fully coming into his arrogance. It's kind of like Lucius of Hermione's minus the cynicism and immediate condescension. Though he seems to be perfectly capable of such. And I'm babbling. The short of the long is....I like it and I can't wait for more!
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  • From Citten on September 17, 2008
    i am so happy to read another chapter! hey i am glad that you were honest at least i have no false sense of security. but i will say that even if it is not regular updates that is okay i just hope that you will not abondon this story i love it so! :) so you have a general idea where you want it to go so that is great and i will try and be as helpful as i can--so i will tell you what if promise to try and not give up on the story i will make sure i always review and that if you need help or want and idea email me (princesscrystalcitten@yahoo.com) and i will try my best to help out. hey also even if you one update every so often is better than nothing or even none at all. beside i know how life and espiecally school! :) so i hope that helps. now for review of the chapter: Loved that dumbledor put her in slytherin, i love how you set up slytherin house (with them each having there own rooms and being able to walk into each others area), as loved lucius was and miffet that she is not completely swayed by him. ;) well that is usually always a recipe for attraction (sometimes on both sides.) i als cant wait to see the chanllenge between them cause you know it will happen cause she is an acheaver too. :) and i think it will be fun to see how dear old lucius will handle it and react! until next chapter or email. :) hope to read or hear from you soon!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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  • From angelnomiko on September 16, 2008
    lol that was great .. poor mione she dose not know what to do with him ... please please update soon ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Mia on September 16, 2008
    An interesting if somewhat murky start. I'm intrigued to know where this is going. I am hopelessly addicted to Ms. Figg as well. I hope you have the wits to maintain your twisty start. It's rather exciting. I love the bend you threw in about the ministry of magic incident. After all, Harry wasn't there. It could have happened now couldn't it. Thank you for a tantalizing beginning. I'll be watching for more.

    ~Mia~


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  • From chickaboo on September 16, 2008
    Interesting. It seems a little fast paced but I'm intrigued and want to read more. Hope you update soon!
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  • From Clare1984 on September 16, 2008
    This looks good. I love a younger Lucius cos I haven't read many stories with it and by his comments to Hermione, there's obviously gonna be lots of good stuff happening. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on September 16, 2008
    Wow, a great start love! I love your Lucius, I wrote a Lucius!Timeturner fic, but it's a little different from yours.

    Loving your Lucius, update soon!

    ~LadyVoldemort87~
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  • From Citten on September 16, 2008
    i love the story!!! i really love your lucius (past and present or vise-versa); also loved the way he first tryed to hold her-foolish girl. i would have let him, but enough about me more from you. well i am really going to love this story and i do hope that you have lots planned for this story! :) i wonder will things change now in this timeline? well i guess i will just have to read and find out! i am so excited and i do hope that you will be updating soon!!! and that you will be posting regularly. :)
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  • From Shalengreh on September 16, 2008
    I'm interested...more please
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