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Reviews for A Muddy Secret

By : GammaOrionis
  • From Rosamund on October 09, 2008
    Just caught up...can't wait for the sequel!!! E-mail me if need be...I'll be out of town for a few days :( Well, it's a fun conference so :)
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  • From Byrony on October 08, 2008
    Oh you evil, evil woman.. Bellatrix has nothing on you... okay enough angst.. great story and am eagerly awaiting the sequels.. : )
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  • From angelnomiko on October 08, 2008
    please please put up they next part ..PLEASE
    that was great ..

    angel
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  • From voraciousreader on October 08, 2008
    Yes, Lucius can be naked as he gives you the backrub. I'll even throw in a nice bottle of scented oil, but ONLY if you promise the sequel in a hurry!!! LOL! You're evil to do this to us, sugar, but we forgive you.
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 08, 2008
    Excellent. I am glad that Hermione was able to get away before Lucius's father killed her. I look forward to reading the sequel to see if Lucius gets Hermione.
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  • From chickaboo on October 08, 2008
    If I didn't know any better I'd say that you enjoy torturing me this way.. You do. Don't you? I can't wait for the sequels!
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  • From Citten on October 08, 2008
    i think she was rather stupid to just up and leave! i wonder though...... no i wont do that to you until after i read the sequels--both of which sound exteremly fun and enticing! :) you have me foaming at the mouth waiting in anticapation! ;) i will tell you what i was thinking but only later so as not to ruin your work or train-of-thaught. i really love lucius possessive nature towards her sometime! makes me all tingly. well i will be watching for the sequels are you going to be doing them one at a time or symontanosly? well i guess i will find out. it might be nicer to read one at a time though, but i will leave this up to you and enjoy it either way! :) see you in a week!
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  • From ANON - AlyBalyBonTaly on October 08, 2008
    I now no longer know what to think. I will have to wait and see for what their fates will be in your sequels. Wow. Just wow. I admire your style of writing and the plot bunnies that run through your head are extraordinary. But one last thing~ please let them keep their emotional attachment? Pretty please?
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  • From Utopia on October 08, 2008
    Oh. that was a quickie of a chapter, wasn't it! lol! Though, a quickie with Lucius would be Verrrrrrrrrrry nice *mmmmmmm*

    Tell you what ducks, I'll give you a week to bask in the limelight of this fic, then mine will go up! I know Snapes_Goddess has a BIT to post here too! I want to get mine up before hers, and give it time to settle too (my beta said fester to that! lol!)

    10/10 for the first installment!
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  • From ANON - TheSlytherinPrincess on October 08, 2008
    Noooo!!!!! Not a cliffy *sobs* Authors can be so cruel sometimes T_T I'm going through withdrawal right now, you know. Lack of Lucius makes me very antsy/cranky. I must say, however, that leaving the story off where you have was a very Bella-like thing to do. Now all I have to do is focus on classes until I can get more Lucius ^_^ I hope he forgives her, eventually... Oh! I almost forgot: Why was Lucius speaking to Hermione about their (present)history together (Flourish and Blotts, the World Cup, the Ministry, etc.) as if, at those times, she would have remembered going back in time (even though it hadn't happened to her yet)? That was slightly confusing. It seemed to me as if he felt she'd been purposefully "forgetful" of their time together...even though she'd been a kid and couldn't possibly remember it (again, because it hadn't happened). Maybe I just missed something (wouldn't be the first time ^_^).
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  • From ANON - TheSlytherinPrincess on October 08, 2008
    Noooo!!!!! Not a cliffy *sobs* Authors can be so cruel sometimes T_T I'm going through withdrawal right now, you know. Lack of Lucius makes me very antsy/cranky. I must say, however, that leaving the story off where you have was a very Bella-like thing to do. Now all I have to do is focus on classes until I can get more Lucius ^_^ I hope he forgives her, eventually... Oh! I almost forgot: Why was Lucius speaking to Hermione about their (present)history together (Flourish and Blotts, the World Cup, the Ministry, etc.) as if, at those times, she would have remembered going back in time (even though it hadn't happened to her yet)? That was slightly confusing. It seemed to me as if he felt she'd been purposefully "forgetful" of their time together...even though she'd been a kid and couldn't possibly remember it (again, because it hadn't happened). Maybe I just missed something (wouldn't be the first time ^_^).
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  • From ANON - Apple on October 08, 2008
    *sob* *sob*

    u'r evil..........

    but then......... i wanna be Lucius' too...........
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  • From ANON - AlyBalyBonTaly on October 08, 2008
    You're right, hopes and expectations are two different things, and I will admit that they do seem to get confused with one another. So now that every thing has simply flipped over, what do you plan to do with dear Lucius and Hermione. They techically did not have a physical relationship, to me it looked more emotionally driven and unacted upon in some degrees, so in that case what are you going to do???
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on October 08, 2008
    JESUS CHRIST WOMAN!!!

    These chapter what I have missed have been fantastic!

    Now she's back in her own time, and lucious Luci is there....Hmmm....If it were me I'd jump him LOL

    But alas it's not...So you are a fan of Bella eh? ME TOO!!! She's the best Death Eater ever! Well female one anyway, after my Luci and Sevvie!

    So we are nearing an end...BOOO. But there will be more right? *Bats eyelashes* Pretty please? I'll send my Draco bot round to see you if you gimme morrrre LOL

    Brilliant, Brilliant, Brilliant!!!

    ~LadyVoldemort87~
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  • From ANON - Shetan on October 08, 2008
    What a wonderful story.....
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