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Reviews for A Muddy Secret

By : GammaOrionis
  • From Utopia on October 08, 2008
    Oh, so she's back now. That was rather anti-climatic! I was expecting something else... don't know what though, but something spectacular.

    So, does she drive Lucius to becoming the 'big bad' because she left him and all hatred of muggleborns stems from her rejecting him as a person because of his Dark Mark - a Dark Mark he never wanted to take in the first place... and if that isn't dodgey psychology, then I don't know what is! I read something similar (to what I just said, that is) in another Sev/Hermione back in time, oh the irony; Hermione was sent back in time to set things to rights and keep Sev on the 'light side of life'; but when she leaves for her own time, Sev spirals into a depression and ends up joining the Death Eaters and doing all the nasty stuff because she left him! I was in tears with that fic!

    I'll send you the opening chapters of my back in time, though I want another 2 chaps before I think about posting it (and for this to be complete and have rested a bit so it doesn't look like I'm trying to steal the limelight from you).


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  • From Shalengreh on October 08, 2008
    shivers.....scary...I like it....
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  • From Citten on October 08, 2008
    of course we didnt. :) (hehehehehehehe) i do totally agree with you on the halloweeen movies though but i also love the mel brooks ones of halloween. :) they are funny! though i am a big fan of dracula movies too. well this is all going a lot fast then i thaugh you were going to go. i was hoping that they would get to descuss things a little more in the past but apprentally you have something else planned. but i am totally along for the ride i cant wait to see how lucius is going to react in this time and now. oh i am so excited! :)
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  • From ANON - Apple on October 08, 2008
    erm..........

    All i can say is... pls oh pls oh pls post the next chapter soon.......



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  • From voraciousreader on October 08, 2008
    Yes, when I had a pinched nerve in my neck and shoulder, I found that anything that went through a range of motions caused pain, not just the originating motion. My Chiro let me pay it off over time, bless him. All you can do is ask, anyway. Maybe you can get a back rub from Lucius? I am REALLY interested in the conversation that just has to be coming up next. Thanks for the quick update!
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  • From chickaboo on October 08, 2008
    Oh that's just evil of you to do. I can't believe you would so willingly torture us in such a way! lol Great update, I'm dying to find out what happens next!
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  • From jaimelee on October 07, 2008
    Awwwww.... poor Lucius!! She needs to give him a chance to explain.
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  • From andarte on October 07, 2008
    You and the friends that live in your head are doing a very good job! ;)
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  • From ANON - Mehuh on October 07, 2008
    WHAt?!?!? NOO! T.T This is why it makes me sad to read unfinished stories..... I get so hooked... and I HAVE TO WAIT!! *tear* I'm not even sure if I'll find this fic again!!
    I will. I am determined!
    I really liked this story, if you couldn't tell. XD
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  • From voraciousreader on October 07, 2008
    I think she'd better get her tail back where she belongs, pronto. AND she used Voldie's assumed name rather than his public un-name, which is going to cause Lucius some twitches, I imagine. Good cliffie.
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  • From Utopia on October 07, 2008
    Halloween - Magical New year! And we will be pretending to not be home on the 31st because the trick or treaters get on our nerves. Probably a Lord of the Rings night for us.

    So much for telling him nice and gently... way to go Hermione! lol




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  • From Utopia on October 07, 2008
    17

    I'll have a read.

    Don't fret duckie, if its just a trapped nerve then you're ok! My dad had a trapped nerve in his back - and to relieve it all he did was fart! lol!

    What sort of Gran does that? Surely it's perfectly fine for her? Its the magical equivalent of your Gran spitting on a hankie and washing your face on the bus!

    Awwww, she was about to spill it and the meddling meddler meddled away!

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  • From Heidi191976 on October 07, 2008
    This chapter was great. I look forward to reading the next one.
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  • From HildaMalfoy on October 07, 2008
    Some Muggleborn ideas can be silly... but they just need to learn what is best for the wizarding world. Hermione's own house elf right campaign was a little..silly in a way because of all elves only Dobby really wanted to get paid.... dunno...

    So now she hates him?Hm.. but poor Lucius was forced into the service of Voldie-face.

    Can't wait to see what happens next.

    On a side note, is it possible to contact you outside AFF? If uyou have a livejournal, you can add me there http://luciannamalfoy.livejournal.com/ or if you have email/messenger i'd be happy to correspond with you.
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  • From HildaMalfoy on October 07, 2008
    Gods, it's slowly getting to the sad part! I don't qwant her to leave our cute wonderful Lucius and return to Potty and Weaselbe.

    I think that probably Lucius' feelings are deep enough for her to not mind too much she's a muggleborn...or at least I hope so! I hope that for his budding love for her he could set their differences aside.

    And wet, dripping Lucius...hmmm...yum!

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