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By : GammaOrionis

From ANON - Apple on October 07, 2008
finally get some time to read your stories...

why is Hermione so mad when she knew that somehow, he's going to get the mark anyways...

*shake* sigh...
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From ANON - HermioneMalfoyFan on October 07, 2008
Not loged in, not much time, just: Oh my God... You're evil, yes you are! She will go back and he has no time to explain himself! So cruel!!! Better, complete review in a few days, I promis! So, back to lecture... Good job by the ways :-)
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From Citten on October 07, 2008
hate is such a strong word. and it is even more terrible when said in anger or without thinking. well what will lucius say now? i do hope that she does not just up and leave now. i cant wait to see what lucius will be thinking in the next chapter?! :) what ever it is it will be very interesting and maybe funny. :) side note halloween is very fun! i love it too! though not as much as my mom! she is just crazy about it! and you are right you dont keep us waiting long! THANK YOU! :) until next time.
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From ANON - AlyBalyBonTaly on October 06, 2008
I guess I stand corrected~ there will be a huge lack of understanding for both Lucius and Hermione. I was not expecting her to react that way or to even tell Lucius in that fashion, but you are the author and so a creative, artistic license must be granted. :::grumbling:::
I can only hope now that this story will come to a pleasantly civil ending based on her reaction, cause anything that happens in the past greatly affects the future.
One final thing~ I love time-turner fics, and I love how you painted your picture with your words. I really hope that Hermione is sent off after saying goodbye to the ones that matter most. In most time-turner fics, the author will have Hermione tragically transported back to her time, and it would be highly refreshing to see if she is sent back amiably.
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From jaimelee on October 06, 2008
Oh dear... that ending w/ Chapter 18 was unexpected. I sure hope she doesn't hide the letter she wrote for Lucius (or destroy it) now that she's seen his Dark Mark. Mind you, she's always known, so I'm not sure why she had such a huge reaction. Either way, great work! I can't wait for the future.
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From andarte on October 06, 2008
*Squeals* Ok, I know I have been incredibly spoiled by getting two chapters so quickly... but I can't wait for more. Pretty, pretty please! This chapter is a horrible cliffhanger and I really must know what happens. ;)

I really like Lady Nimue and I'd love to see her in future chapters. Its really kinda depressing that Hermione will be going back soon, but then again I can see things being very interesting between her and the older Lucius. Deliciously interesting. Although I must admit the idea of Hermione and the younger Lucius getting some fun in would be nice because I just love the idea of Hermione having him before Narcissa ever did. (Is that terrible of me?)
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From Heidi191976 on October 06, 2008
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one.
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From voraciousreader on October 06, 2008
AS always, a good read! Now just what did she say in that note, hmm? He's already a death eater. Have you tried a Chiropractor for that pinched nerve? Mine did wonders for me when that happened. I hate it when people are in pain.
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From ANON - AlyBalyBonTaly on October 06, 2008
I really love your story and it's painful waiting for the updates. I really hope that the battle ended in Hermione's time and that Lucius would be understanding when she returns- not too understanding in the very beginning yet some incling of it. Also what's going to happen to Narcissa and Draco? Harry and Ron? What about them?
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From HildaMalfoy on October 06, 2008
I finally took the time to read your story! Your Lucius is absolutely charming. Yes, I can feel he's got a big ego, but he has deep feelings for our dear Hermione as well.

Can I get your young Lucius,please? He's just wonderful...

I hope your hand is better now... *sends hamper of potions and chocolate*

Will be looking forward to more!
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From Heidi191976 on October 06, 2008
An excellent chapter. I hope that Hermione will be able to return home soon and also waant to be with Lucius once she does. I think that she loves him, but is afraid of what his future self will be like. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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From Utopia on October 06, 2008
Ah, the first rule of being a beta is that you have to read it weather you agree with it or not. For example: There are a lot of crap betas out there who refuse to edit stuff because they don't think X should be paired with Y... I've had some really odd pairings sent to me in the past - that I don't like - and I've edited it none the less. I've read a lot of stuff, and I can give an opinion regardless of weather I like it or not - actually, its better if I DON'T like it because then I'm more impartial. Send it over, and tell me what you want from me and I'll do my best for you!

I'm scared of Daddy long legs! I scream and run away. Bella's the only HP female who's got balls. lol. Good job too, because if Voldie's regeneration spell couldn't produce a NOSE, then what hope did his genetalia have? Someone has to have a pair among the Death Eaters! lol!

Oooh, my beta and I (yep someone betas the beta) were having a very "grown up" discussion, here's the scenario: Does LM look better in (a) the Leather Death Eater armour? (b) Naked as the day he was born? (c) doing a striptease from the leather Death Eaterness to nakedness? (d) Naked, but with a few bits of leather for effect... we didn't draw a conclusion on that debate.

Grandma Cuddles! They're as bad as baby photos for embarrassment!

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From onduril on October 06, 2008
*hug*
*morehugs*

The only grasshoppers I'Ve seen so far are small but I know that there are huge animals out there.

As for the story. Really cool. I like Nimue. On Friday they've shown Merlin (with Sam Neil) on TV again and I watched it. And I was reminded of your storiy somehow. But I don't know how...;)
However, keep writing and I'll keep reading.^^

*evenmorehugs*
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From chickaboo on October 06, 2008
I understand your pain. I don't do well with things that have more than four legs. So I am sending you giant bear hugs.....and a large can of pesticide and a bull whip. That should just about cover all your bases. lol Great update, I can't wait for more!!
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From Citten on October 05, 2008
oh! BIG HUGS! and i will have to send you shoe on a large stick for just such occassions! :) well hermione spilled the beans. i wonder what the spell will really do and how excatly will it help albus, for i still do not trust her. :) well try not to keep us in suspense for too long. ;)
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