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By : GammaOrionis
  • From AriaDragoncrest on October 05, 2008
    Huggs for yous. excellent story.
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  • From Rosamund on October 05, 2008
    Awesome...if you need any help, let me know...posting over there, that is. I know it can be troublesome, I've had problems there myself (oddly enough, more of them here). Oh, and I just updated my long time ago story Hermione's New world (if you don't mind Hr/CW)

    I knew she would figure things out...Lady Nimue that is ;)
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  • From LaBibliographe on October 05, 2008
    Chapter 16: Don
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  • From jaimelee on October 05, 2008
    Interesting... I hope when Hermione returns to the future, she won't forget about the boy Lucius once was.
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  • From Utopia on October 05, 2008
    To cheer you up:

    A REALLY GOOD young Lucius!
    http://ruby-proudfoot.deviantart.com/art/Lucius-54731470

    Just for fun:
    http://morphera.deviantart.com/art/My-Little-Lucius-25140516

    Hair issues:
    http://gangstersteph.deviantart.com/art/Lucius-has-split-ends-16017843

    Morning person:
    http://maridius.deviantart.com/art/Good-Morning-Lucius-29094405

    End of year ball (are you having one)?
    http://rhysenn-m.deviantart.com/art/Dance-with-me-darling-55147007

    Disco Lucius:
    http://luciusmalfoy-club.deviantart.com/art/disco-Lucius-vimessy-30538281

    Awwwww! Just because it's cute!
    http://xxminishaxx.deviantart.com/art/But-Daddy-the-Werewolves-85537705


    Hope that cheered you up duckie!

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  • From Citten on October 05, 2008
    Great chapter! loved how lucius got angery with his grandmother. :) i liked the way lucius responded to the house elf topic. ;) interesting how he thaught of hermiones actions--hmm.....so i wonder is he going to start question the truth or is it much more complcated then what is ovbouls. :) well i cant wait to see how you handle that! :) all right muse work your magic with this talented writer and get us some more wonderful story--PLEASE. thank you!!!! :)
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  • From LaBibliographe on October 04, 2008
    Chapter 15: Ah, poor Lucius. He is like most children - they really never give up on wanting their parents to love them. It was a short, but fraught road trip. I
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  • From Lauriurix on October 04, 2008
    interesting! ^_^ :D love it :D

    me wants more like always :D lol
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 04, 2008
    This was an excellent chapter. I look forward to reading the next one to see what happens.
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  • From Rosamund on October 04, 2008
    I forgot...did I review yet? I can't understand why this story isn't on the other site...I think it's great :) I'm an author over there, here, and ffnet. Can't wait to see how Grandmother/Lady Nimue greets them :)
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on October 04, 2008
    That's what friends are there for! Seems to be a good one, you should keep him 'round! MS is unfortunatly what I was thinking about, too. One of my friends got diagnosed with it about 6 month ago. But she had had other symptoms before, so it wasn't quiet out of the blue for her. But hey, that's about worst case scenario. It might be simply a squeezed nerv!

    So Lucius is starting to realise that Hermione might not be who he thinks she is? Interesting. I wonder how he will react when he finds out. Well, you hinted in the first chapter that he didn't know until the very end, but it's good that you're dropping clues to our unsuspecting Slytherin! Plus, I cannot imagin Hermione without any Gryffindor traits. She's ways too innocent to conceal them in the long run. But - I am still waiting for the big relevations with Grandma! Soooooo curious!

    Oh and one question: If the beast was an illusion, how could it get hurt by the spell? Or did I miss something? Just a little bit confused there...

    As for the sequel: I don't really know what to tell you. Do you meand that you could write two different sequels directly following this one (so that there were two possible paths to follow after this story)? Or do you mean to write a sequel to the sequel? Well, I guess that both is feasible. If you have more than one idea about what happens after this story, you should write both possibilities, I guess. If you want more input, feel free to drop a message at sabine.thenen @ gmx.de. I would be honoured to help out. :-)

    Oh, and I will probably not review till Friday or Saturday. I have a lecture/tutorial at another university coming up, and I am staying at a guest house. I am not too sure if I will have internet acces in the evenings. Just to let you know I will certainly not abandon your story!
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  • From Utopia on October 04, 2008
    Ah! A fellow Biologist! I'm more on a cellular level personally, Ecology is too big for me! Why so many different topics at uni? In the UK you can do 2 at a pinch, but 95% of degrees are one topic only.

    What's 'L. C.'? And what's the favour duckie? The little note just stopped.

    You know, I think Hermione would make a brilliant Dark Lord, erm, Lady... seriously, she'd look after her minions! They'd have pensions; private health and dentistry (better than the NHS - but costs a fortune); two days off in seven; sick pay; bonuses and payrises and double time on Sundays! lol! Vooldie was nasty to his minions - its a wonder more of them didn't fight for the Order after his treatment! Hermione would have happy minions and 'minion of the month'. She'd have no problem ruling the world because her minions would be happy and do as they were told! lol!

    A growling nasty illusion... Grandma isn't like mine who's all cuddles and cups of tea! Flipping heck!


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  • From pandabear on October 04, 2008
    Life is good.....looks like old Lucy is (unknowingly) putting the peices that Hermonie isnt in fact a Pureblood OR Slytherine. Makes for a great melodrama on his part
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on October 04, 2008
    Oh yes, if you continue like that there better be a sequel! *Look Really Threatening* I read your answer to Utopia, and really, you should go see a doctor. I know I sound like my mum, but a friend of mine had the same problem with her arm, and lets just say, her diagnosis was not pleasant.

    So I still don't really know where this is going - but at least we (and Hermione) get to know some stuff about Lucius. It's good that you let them have some time on their own, they deserve it! Plus, I think the better she knows his "other" side the more likely she will fall in love...

    I think there will be more happening at his grandmothers than just getting the timeturner sand for Dumbeldore, am I right? Hummm... Just wondering! As always, without pressuring: already waiting for the next tidbit to read! ;-)
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  • From LaBibliographe on October 04, 2008
    Chapters 13-14: So they
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