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Reviews for A Muddy Secret

By : GammaOrionis
  • From Byrony on October 03, 2008
    Excellent couple of chapters. I like that Lady Nimue is coming into the picture. Now is Hermione being in the past changing anything in the future, or will the future have to play out to the present??? Makes no sense does it??.. LOL.. well regardless, you have me hooked although stating that there will be a sequel probably means that we will not get the resolution we want here.. which in my case is smexy Lucius/Hermione lovin'... ; )
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  • From ANON - cherripepsiisgod on October 03, 2008
    HEHE.....Got to love the underlying tones of "Yes, were going to get fucked with"
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  • From Citten on October 03, 2008
    well i totally love the idea of two different sequel endings! i really love that you would even do it, totally cool! :) i do like the chapter not everyone of the chapters have to have so problem or adventure--so no worries. :) i wonder what will happen on the next day and if they do get to the lake and the Lady therein what will happen i wonder? :) well try not to keep us in too much sucsepence. until then!
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  • From Utopia on October 03, 2008
    My doc made me laugh, he gave me the third degree because I DIDN'T want to go to med school! He thought I'd make a brill GP and was acting more like an advert for his profession than actually doing his job of prodding at me! lol! The NHS doesn't try to diagnose you with something you haven't got because the NHS is free at the point of use (you pay tax to fund it, not a bill when you leave); if they diagnose you with something you don't have - then they're wasting precious pounds by doing so.

    English class? You uni student?

    You know, I always thought that the sword of Gryffindor was Excalibur... I was gutted in the last book when the goblins claimed it! I didn't half sulk.

    You know, Lady Nemune sounds quite nice, if she's saying the SECOND best moment of her life is her story; second to the FIRST rank of having children... she sounds quite motherly and proud of her offspring. Oh good grief, I'm going broody - someone slap me quick! I like children as much as Snape does!

    Darling, darling... repeat after me: 'Plot devices' and 'character development' Boring is such a BAD word, use the above words instead! Trick of the trade (not that we make any money, that would be plagiarism for real, rather than quasi-plagiarism).

    Hope you feel better duckie. *Hugs down the internet cable*

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  • From Rosamund on October 03, 2008
    Don't know why I didn't think of this...have you gone over to Granger Enchanted? I'm an author over there...would love to refer you if no one else hasn't :D
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 03, 2008
    A great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ohsnaptheresa on October 03, 2008
    interesting story so far! i enjoyed reading it. please e-mail me at ohsnap_theresa@yahoo.com when you update! thank you!!! i'd really appreciate the gesture!
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  • From OmenRequiem on October 03, 2008
    Yes, I can see how that would make her angry with him. Well, I would personally like to see both sequels as a kind of either or thing as you said. And I am torn between wanting a longish journey and a short one so they get to Lady Nimue faster so whatever you decide is just wonderful with me.
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  • From Rosamund on October 03, 2008
    Very awesome...I hope Lady Nimue recognizes Hermione for being brilliant and more ;)
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  • From pandabear on October 02, 2008
    sO THE PROBLEM IN YOUR HANDS IS PROBABLY CARPLTUNNEL....MY MOM HAS THE SAME THING HER HANDS GO NUMB AND IT HURTS HER SO MUCH....YOU MIGHT WANT TO GET IT CHECKED OUT. AWSOME STORY....I LIKE WHERE ITS HEADING.

    C.P.I.G.
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  • From ANON - Avanell on October 02, 2008
    Wow! And adventure is afoot!!! Can't wait...will they get closer during their travels? ;)
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  • From Citten on October 01, 2008
    oh you so have me wrapped around your little finger! :) i too want to know what was said between lucius and dumbledore! i bet it was good too! i am really glad that you (may) have a job i wish you luck and i will be watching for your update. no worries cause i have school and i know how it is when you dont have time to do all you want. well maybe now hermione will learn a little more. ;) until next time! :)
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  • From OmenRequiem on October 01, 2008
    Oh no! You can't leave it like that! Now I'm going to be wondering what Albus did to make Nimue mad at him. And the research, actually. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 01, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I liked the part where Lucius revealed that Albus is related to him. I think Hermione made a mistake by making an oath to protect Lucius, what would happen if she returns to her time.
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on October 01, 2008
    Hey, don't play with your health! The issues with your hand can be related to a lot of nasty stuff! Not that I can't understand you, I hate doctors myself and avoid them whenever possible, but still...

    With that chapter you left me a bit lost I must admit. I have no clue where it is heading right now! I obviously get that there are some "greats" missing before grandmother, but what the heck has she to do with it? Oh, I am wondering! But they are moving to the forest of the Dean. That has to mean something, but I still don't get it. Aaarrg...

    As for Sev: I certainly agree with you! I do picture him more as some poor abused (or at least neglected) child starving for affection, too. And that without even knowing what he's starving for! I can really picture Hermione becoming kind of a surrogate mum for him. Or maybe older sister, considering that they are only about 5 years apart during that time...

    But I deduce from your comment that you're devilishly scheming to tear Hermione and Lucius apart! That's soooooo mean! (That's my softy-side screaming there *LOL*) So, as I said, you got me curious there, waiting for the next update already! Good job, once again!
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