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Reviews for A Muddy Secret

By : GammaOrionis
  • From HermioneMalfoFan on September 28, 2008
    Such an early update! You were talking about monday - not that I complain! But you're spoiling us a little bit... It raises expectations, be careful ;-) But hey, it works for me!

    Stupid, stupid Malfoy Senior! Really! They say "Better late than never"? Well, sometimes it's just too late!

    The two of them are getting all cosy... I think there is somebody falling in Love, isn't she? Since Lucius is already in head over heels that's good! And she really didn't find out. Hum, she's a bit dense there, isn't she? I mean she knows that he will become a death eater eventually. I still wonder how she will react when she finds out.

    Why did Severuy tense? Not used to openly displayed affection? He should get used to it, he's friends with Hermione now!
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  • From ANON - Apple on September 28, 2008
    maybe.... just maybe... his father showed lucius a bit more emotions other than that after he got the mark... maybe lucius will turn out differently....

    sob sob... makes me sad.....
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  • From Utopia on September 28, 2008
    11

    Whoa! Is 'Tom' Voldemort yet? I thought he only went all "Snakey" after the restoration potion/bath/thingy in GoF? Not to worry though, works well. In mine, I still have Voldie being Tom - and Hermione thwarting him completely by accident! lol! My fic is pure irony.

    He answers too slowly, he answers too quickly... he can't do right for doing wrong! WTF is Voldie's problem? Don't pi*s off your minions - especially the powerful ones that will actually be able to harm you when they mature - look at Sev as an example! (Though, maybe Lucius having a hard time of it will keep Sev away from the Death Eaters?)

    And Daddy gives him a hug and thinks it will all be better? I have the opinion that Abraxas is in need of a lobotomy, a rubber room and a straight jacket. I presume Malfoy Snr. offered Lucius up for the sacrificial alter in a bit of a drunken stupor!

    Poor Lucius, though, Hermione might be able to help.


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  • From Utopia on September 28, 2008
    10

    If you're a loser, then count me in as one too!

    Lucius has a VERY vivid imagination! lol! *fans self*

    Ickle Remus! I presume he's not thick as thieves with the Marauders yet - if they exist.

    But do wishes come true in the wizarding world??


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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on September 27, 2008
    Poor Luci =(

    Yes Abraxas! It is a little too late you blond fool!

    Did I tell you how much I loved this chapter?...No....Well I did! My Tommy's going to be punished for hurting Luci like that...Wheres that whip? *looks around room...THERE IT IS!* *turns to look at the Dark Lord...* "Are you scared, Tommy...Because you should be!" mwhahahahahaha LMAO.

    Brilliant this chapter, Brilliant I tell ya!

    ~LadyVoldemort87~
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  • From Heidi191976 on September 27, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more. I hope that Hermione will understand why he took the mark, if she discovers it on him. I don't think that he wants to tell her for fear of losing her. I loved how you made Voldemort look as he does in Hermione's own time, no one really knows for sure what he looked like in Lucius' time. I also noticed that you had Bellatrix there, isn't she younger than Lucius.
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  • From Shalengreh on September 27, 2008
    poor lucius
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  • From chickaboo on September 27, 2008
    I can see why Lucius took the mark. Say yes and hope to God that there won't be any more pain. Great update, I wonder what Hermione's reaction is going to be?
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  • From LaBibliographe on September 27, 2008
    Chapter 11: Well, that was unpleasant. He DID get the dark mark. I was worried that Hermione wouldn
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on September 27, 2008
    Oh you made my night with that update! I am working on a paper for Uni and I really have to get it ready! So to motivate myself, I work for 45 minutes to an hour, and then browse a bit... That was definitly a good break this time!

    I could have told you I knew it! Hah, Voldi is back. Poor Lucius. Although I am not such a softy when it comes to physical pain (as long as it is not inflicted on me at least ;-)) but emotional pain. I guess the saying "Once bitten twice shy" does account for me, too? Whatever...

    Hermione will be so devasted when he comes back! But at least she knows from his reaction to the letter that he didn't want to go! Oh his father is just such a sissy. Who could impose something like that on his child. It makes me angry even though it's only fiction.

    Your update was short but loveley, so don't apologise for it! Already waiting for the next one :-)
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  • From ANON - Miss Lilac on September 27, 2008
    Aaah! A lovely way to wind down in the evening :) Eagerly anticipating the next chapter! X
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  • From ANON - ChibiVampire on September 27, 2008
    Hey
    I'm loving your story so much that I've read it all in one go. I like how you've portrayed Lucius in the story; if only he was real :D
    I really hope you're going to bring the next chapter out soon!
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  • From Heidi191976 on September 27, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading the next one.
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  • From ANON - Apple on September 27, 2008
    poor lupin.... n poor poor lucius...

    you make me want to cry seeing lucius like that...

    sob sob *.*
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on September 27, 2008
    I'm your 100th reviewer!!!

    Poor Luci, I feel so bad for him =(

    REMUS!!! Oh Remus!!!I love a bit of Remus =D LOL

    Brilliant chapter sweets!

    ~LadyVoldemort87~
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