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Reviews for A Muddy Secret

By : GammaOrionis
  • From frozenquill on April 18, 2010
    Awesome story. I love it. Very nicely done.

    just read chapter 8 and saw that you modeled Abraxas Malfoy on your own father. I am so sorry about how you have been treated as a child. I was crying when reading Lucius' experiences, knowing that they are not only a plot in your story, but your own personal history. My tears were really for you.

    And no need for apologizing about the angst in your story: it has to be in there because Lucius' history has a lot of angst in it. After all, you don't become Voldemort's right hand man out of nothing.

    Great job. Very intriguing story. Will probably continue reading tonight until I am too tired. Thank you for this lovely work.
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  • From ebonyeyez1 on September 07, 2009
    this story was simply brilliant.
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  • From ANON - the rose and the dagger on June 12, 2009
    Hi, just finished reading your story adn i don't how long ago you posted it - brill by the way.
    i just want to say i was reading you rcomments and got a bit worried. over 10/12 yrs - bit more, my father had a pinched nerve in his elbow and had to have it operated it, 5 yrs later the same on the other hand, it started out with pins and needle, numbing and muscle loss, his muscles in his hands adn legs are best word is wasted, he has trouble controling them at times - chocking at night, unable to walk properly, unable to get a firm grip, he now has to drive an automatic.
    he gets yearly tests and for a while the doctors thought he had motor neuron disease the only reason they say it's not is that he would be dead a few years ago, but he does a muscle/neuron condition.
    please please watch yourself and if you go to the doctors again mention this as a collegue of mine husband had similar symptons and he does have motor neuron disease - this has a life expectancy of av 5 yrs from diahnosis.
    please take care of yourself x x x x
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  • From ANON - Yes Mistress on April 01, 2009
    No!!!!!!!Nonononono need more story!! eep. I feel so conflicted.Please tell me there's a sequel.
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  • From hopelesslydark on March 08, 2009
    GODDAMN IT!!!!!!!!!! YOU CANT DO THAT! JUST UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Dazzlious on December 26, 2008
    I really enjoyed this story, although leaving it on such a cliffhanger isn't nice! Good work - now I have to read everything else!


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  • From Anastata on November 23, 2008
    How could you! you.. you.. just ended it like that. =[
    i feel like i'm about to cry..
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 11, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Phiana on October 19, 2008
    You cant just leave it there, thats soooooo mean! Love his story, well written and very VERY GOOD!!! Keep it up and please post again soon!
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  • From ANON - the_slytherin_princess on October 16, 2008
    Wow, what a fantastic story! I loved it! I can not wait for the sequal, please don't take too long getting it posted! :)
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on October 15, 2008
    Wonderful action packed story. I feel like screaming now that I have reached the end and it is not the end. Aaarrrggg! What happens now? I am going to go to your Author's Page and see what you have been up to.
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on October 11, 2008
    So, I am back! As I promised, I would review when I had the possibility, here you go! Only for you I spend saturday afternoon in the library (well, not quiet true, but since I crashed my computer this is the only way for me to review right now...).

    I think I left you round chapter 16, right? So I will start there then! Your Lady Nimue was really delightful. The way she tells off Lucius and aparently all of her grandchildren? Oh, that was so much fun reading... And what is the problem she's talking about in chapter 16? When she tells that she certainly can send Hermione home? Will that one be solved in one of the sequels? I certainly hope so!

    Chapter 17 was so cosy and tame that I should have known that you would let out your evilly side in the next one! Really, you are evil, but that I already told you... But you did a very good job in planting doubts in Lucius once again. He really could have figured out what Hermione was telling him. At least come to the conclusion that there was more behind it than that!

    The next one... You started it out sooooo nicely and heart warming. He's so sweet when trying to get out of her if she might be interested in marrying him! Goodness, and Hermione having a penchant for older guys? Snape? Lupin? Ohhhhhh I can so see that! Well, at least for Snape, Lupin is not really my thing so to speak - I don't know, him and Sirius beeing James' friends? Well, for me it just doesn't fit with Hermione plus I really see him with Tonks! But that's actually not the point I am trying to make (rambling on and on...)Well, it was a nice move, smoothing out the way for any future endeavors. But then you ended it so cruelly! Really, how could you? Well, I already left my opinion on it, it broke my heart, poor Lucius!

    And than you let her disapear in the next chapter. Without reconciliation, nothing at all! She even met his father. Ohhhh... He couldn't even bring her to listen. Stupid Hermione. How could she not see that he had it hard for her! Is it right to assume that she used a timeturner? I almost missed the part where she received it. I had to reread the part when she was in the meeting with Dumbeldore... I really had no time to read the chapters carefully at the seminar I was attending...

    So, as for the last chapter. I had the impression that Lucius did not quiet get what actually happened? I mean it is impossible, since it was him who send her back, but then he should know that she couldn't possibly know that they had met in HIS past before? He was quiet upset with her... Hmmm... Oh, I am so waiting to see how the sequels will develop! Yay... I really liked your story, though there are still a few questions I was asking myself.

    1. The beast? You didn't explain that one yet, did you? Will it be of importance in one of the sequels?
    2. Lady Nimues parting words: I will see you after the NEWTS child. Was she talking to Lucius or Hermione? It wasn't quiet clear, I think. That might have been intended, am I right?

    Oh, and I hope your medication worked? Is your arm better now? Let me know, I will move on to the sequel rigth now! Thank you again for this delightful story.
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  • From MB3 on October 09, 2008
    I must admit to not really thoroughly reading this story. It does help that I got hooked on it after midnight and had a midterm at 9:30am which I was attempting to study for. So while I have officially read the entire thing, I'll probably go back later and read it a little more in depth. It was really good though and I can't wait for the sequel.
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  • From ANON - Seraphiccandy on October 09, 2008
    Just read chapter 2. Good writing but wasn't Armando Dippet headmaster at this time??? Dumbledore was a professor maybe?
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  • From jaimelee on October 09, 2008
    OMG!! I can't believe you left us all hanging like that! Poor Lucius - ignored for 26 years! Although, I suppose if he wasn't such a bastard to her years earlier, maybe things wouldn't beo so bad now... though, why does Hermione have to be so stubborn?? Please write the next part soon!
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