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Reviews for The Death Eater

By : Alania
  • From ANON - qwerty on December 20, 2008
    Good chapter.
    Keep going!
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  • From callistianstar on December 16, 2008
    Craziness! I wonder if they'll ever hear of the extent of what Lucius had done. And what their reaction will be to the marriage. Harry's reaction too. Nice job. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Alina Kotik on December 14, 2008
    A great story, full of angst, fascinating, with unexpected twists. I look forward to the II part.
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  • From gorgeousbowneyes on December 14, 2008
    Oh gosh!!! Just discovered this and I'm in love with this story so far! I need to read more!!! If it's not too much trouble, can you please add me to your mailing list - phoenix_fire_cat@yahoo.com

    I just ... wow. I don't know exactly what to say about this so far. I really love the story line, the plot, the idea. It's great! The only criticism I have for it is these two simple things - first there are a few typo's in some of the chapters, like forgetting to capitalize the 'h' in Harry, or putting him instead of he or just little things like that. The second thing is that I found from chapter to chapter things were a little jumpy. Within each chapter everything flowed fine, but then when I would go to the next chapter I would find things that did quite flow right, if you get what I mean? I know that's kind of vague, sorry. But an example of that is from when they've first had sex and then in the next chapter going to dinner there is some kind of plug in Harry ... maybe I personally missed that bit but I was really confused for a minute because I couldn't recall how it worked out that Draco had left something in him? I think the confusion might have come about because of the hermaphrodite properties of Harry's body with having two holes and all that.

    Anyways, it was a very very enjoyable read otherwise and I want more ASAP lol. I can't wait for an update! This is unusual for me too because I haven't been into fanfiction much recently but this has re-awakened my love of it!
    ~gorgeousbowneyes
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 14, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 15!!!
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  • From Nikte on December 13, 2008
    I can't wait to find out how everybody is going to recive Draco, I mean, they will surely recive Harry with great happiness, but Draco? Hopefully they won't kill him on sight lol obviously they won't, unless you wanted to end this story so abruptly lol Anyway, I so need next chapter, that I
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  • From ANON - qwerty on December 13, 2008
    Whew. That was some chapter. Keep going!
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  • From Jan on December 09, 2008
    Wow, very, very interesting story. Poor Draco is getting a handful with Harry... I was so happy when Draco killed that SOB! Though I think he should of torture him first... but oh well.

    Please update chapter 14 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From BrianLovesJustin on December 09, 2008
    OMG, I can't wait for Harry to wake up and find out he's married to Draco, the shits definitely gonna hit the fan.

    I would appreciate it if you could add me to your mailing list, my email is dejakin.dylan@googlemail.com, Thanks
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  • From on December 08, 2008
    Wow!
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  • From maegerakawaii on December 08, 2008
    Did the lawyer just suggest that Draco could bear CHILDREN!? OMG!!!! Thank you for the update.
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 08, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 11!!!
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  • From callistianstar on December 08, 2008
    While I'm glad that Harry isn't unreceptive of Draco, it is a bit depressing that Harry just signed a marriage document shortly after being raped by his now deceased [and now father-in-law]. Although this will all definitely make it easier for Draco to gain immunity or something when he goes to beg Dumbledore. Nice job so far. I look forward to how that "begging" goes ove with the Order.
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  • From ANON - Nikte on December 07, 2008
    Wow!!!!!!!!!!! they got married, just like that, I wonder if Harry will have a panic attack after the shock of Lucius's attack wears off, I hope not, I mean, Draco did everything the wrong way, but it
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  • From pisces227 on December 07, 2008
    Oh, wow. I wasn't expecting that, Draco taking the Potter name. But it makes perfect sense, after reading everything. Last chapter's OMG was for the child, this chapter however... "OMG, they're getting married!!" Where's the cake?! Ethically and morally, I suppose I'd have a problem with Harry signing anything in his incredibly weakened state. You don't need to be under the influence of potions or spells to not be of sound mind. Harry's just been through something traumatic; how can he be expected to make such a big decision? Oh well. It works, and will make it difficult for them to be forcefully separated in the future. Now they can be a proper family!!

    I can't wait for when the 'shit hits the fan,' so to speak. I wouldn't want to be anywhere near Voldemort, however, when that happens. Hopefully Harry may get to see some of his friends soon? That would probably lift his spirits, so long as they're careful about what they say. Oh, and absolutely loving the Advents. Keep 'em coming~!
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