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Reviews for The Death Eater

By : Alania
  • From pisces227 on November 22, 2008
    I don't know why, but Harry waking up to Draco thrusting into him is extremely hot. o.o The rape? Not so much. I think I've probably said this several times but stupid Draco! Leaving Harry all by himself. That's unacceptable, especially when Harry gets pregnant. Where's Hermione and her shovel when you need her?

    I really liked how this chapter changed perspectives. It's nice to get Harry and Draco's perspective on things. It makes things a lot more interesting. And it serves Draco right, Harry not getting pregnant yet, though I have to admit, I'm rather proud that he somehow gets permission before putting his prick in Harry's... feminine assets. It's touching, him not wanting their child conceived in rape. Draco has some morals intact, at least. He should really extend his boundaries a little. He could use a bit more sensitivity. And learn about the dynamics of a working relationship, the moron. I think Harry would be quite a bit more receptive of intercourse if Draco was nicer, gentler, more thoughtful.

    This just came to my mind. Draco seems to expect respect, affection, and submission from Harry. But he can't just keep taking and taking and taking, or Harry will grow to resent him even more. Draco needs to show Harry some respect, affection, thoughtfulness, some signs of love, or that he cares, if he wants a serious relationship in which Harry participates, responds, and reciprocates. If he can do that, then Harry is more likely to fall in love with him... or something of that nature.

    Don't know what it is about this story... but it somehow inspired me to draw a preggy Harry with a popsicle and a hand on his belly. Theeennn... I'm not entirely sure what happened, but the popsicle became a lollipop (probably because of my lousy perception of spatial relationships), and he's now holding a bloody machete while looking sinfully innocent. Did I mention the severed head that for some reason resembles Voldemort? Must have something to do with unresolved issues and too much caffiene. But right now it's in Photoshop and I'm trying to beautify it, a.k.a. clean it up, erase stray lines, darken the other lines, add color, etc. Hopefully it'll be done within the next decade? Anyway, it made me happy and when it's finished I'm so sending it to you.

    And I wouldn't be a good reviewer if I didn't include the punchline: good chapter, write more!
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  • From on November 22, 2008
    Who is that?

    I like it so far and can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Aalto on November 22, 2008
    I simply love this story. I can hardly wait for the next chapter, to see who it is that came visiting and surprised Harry so.
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  • From alma on November 22, 2008
    OMG!!! Is it Voldemort!
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  • From alma on November 22, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on November 22, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on November 22, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From alma on November 22, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From alma on November 22, 2008
    Aww, Snape wants to be a daddy!
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  • From alma on November 22, 2008
    So Draco does care alittle for Harry?
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  • From alma on November 22, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on November 22, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From ANON - Jen-el on November 18, 2008
    Wow this story is really coming along. i love it so far and cant what to read more. please add of to yous mailing list. tholmes38at hot mail.
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  • From ANON - Dee on November 16, 2008
    I think that the best way to make your story even more realistic is using some real world problems. One thing you may want to look up is stockholm syndrome. I think it may work really well with your future telling of harry's enslavement and his reactions to it day by day. Also I think that realistically victims who suffer from rape usually cannot sustain a healthy relationship in the future especially with said rapist so I think giving harry and draco a happy ending in this type of scenario is unrealistic. Also if/when harry concieves, no matter how much he may love or not love said child, and no matter what outcome draco and harrys relationship has whenever harry will look at that child he will remember that child was conceived during a horrid time in his life.

    Your story is really good so far but I don't know if the reactions from harrys friend towards draco and giving him presents on christmas was very again, realtisic. Other than that I cant wait to read more. keep up the awesome work.
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  • From ANON - Solana1 on November 16, 2008
    I agree with Kora Draco needs to learn a valueable lesson it is obvious that he loves Harry but he doesn't realize it I think he still feels hurt from Harry's rejection their first year which is pathetic. I also think that Draco is confused he has never known love because of his parents and all the torture he witnessed because of the Death Eaters. He can't express his emotions in a healthy and I think that is going to cause his downfall. Maybe Harry can teach him to love at a great cost to himself. Maybe Draco will realize in time to save Harry. No one can tell and thats what makes this story so great you make the character's flaws real, you don't have Draco learn this important lesson right away you have him take longer making this inner growth more realistic
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