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By : Alania

From ANON - Emily on November 16, 2008
Wow I am sooo in love with this story, it is the perfect mix of pain, laughter, romance and everything else in the known universe! You are a fantastic writer and I nearly had a fit when I saw that you updated so recently!!! I never find works in progress that are still actually being WORKED ON! I love you and I think we should get married, I think Canada still allows it.
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From thrnbrooke on November 16, 2008
Soooo need chapter 11!!!
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From pisces227 on November 15, 2008
*grumble grumble grumble* Apparently, anonymous reviews don't include the email... I didn't exactly want to put my email in the body of the review, so this was the next best thing, I suppose.

For the sake of the review, super-awesome chapter! I can't wait for more. X3
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From ANON - Kore of Enna on November 15, 2008
Poor Harry! Though I can certainly understand why he placates Draco with his submission, it hurts to see him lose his spirit. Rape is one of the worst, if not /the/ worst, violation of the mind, body, and soul. Maybe sometime in the future, Malfoy will make love to him, instead of raping him. Being gentle certainly seems to stifle most of Harry's rebellion; at this point, I can't even conceive Harry falling for Draco in the slightest until Draco ceases acting like a slavedriver and becomes more like a lover than a master, and Harry a responsive participant that gives as much as he takes. Perhaps with time? And Draco must be a lot more gentle as Harry progresses in the pregnancy; wouldn't want a miscarriage or anything from physical or emotional stress. Talk about karma biting you in the butt. I know Harry will be a wonderful mother figure for his children, but Draco as a father? That's rather scary. I can just see all the mini-Lucius's running around, whacking/molesting people with sticks. Here's to Draco /not/ being another Lucius. Cheers!

Ahh, the aftermath... well, so much for the pregnancy /not/ taking. Sex twice (or three times, including anal?) in twenty-four hours definitely doesn't decrease the chances. I must resist the urge not to cut off Draco's manhood and shove it up his own arse -- that would not be good for public relations... Still, a bitchy Potter during pregnancy is retribution enough, for now. I can just hear all the raging Harry'll do when he goes into labor, swearing castration and skewered testicles... Draco, you better do your part as a father and help Harry with the baby, you know, step up and take some responsibility? Feed him/her in the middle of the night so Harry can get that much needed rest? /You/ try carrying a parasite in your gut for nine months, you bleached poodle. Oh my, unborn babies really are parasitic in nature, aren't they? Taking blood and nutrients from the mother? Not giving much back except obscure cravings, severe abdominal cramps, and spontaneous vomiting? Now /that's/ something I haven't thought about.

Eep, rambling again! It's absolutely spiffy to read another chapter. I'll probably go back and read it again. Wonderful writing, excellent portrayal, thought-provoking, emotion-provoking, inspirational. Definitely one of my favorite fanfics in the history of Harry Potter fanfiction. To Alania Black, for turning a common and overdone plot bunny into an unique writing/reading experience~may your muse prove fruitful and imagination unending! Ooh, a Mailing List?! *whacks herself for not noticing sooner* That's /genius/. Please, Almighty Mistress of Harry Potter fanfiction, do sign me up. I suppose my name of this review is hyperlinked to my email address? If so, well, there 'tis! Ah, the wonders of computers...
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From ANON - Kore of Enna on November 15, 2008
I can't believe Draco's so /blind/. I suppose it hasn't fully sunk in yet that although he may get the children he wants, he won't get to keep Harry because Voldemort's going to /kill/ him! As in, dead, deceased, six feet under, kicking the bucket, etc. *thwacks Draco upside the head* Wake up, you moron! You stay in Voldemort's service and you will eventually lose everything you care for. Idiot, not realizing that sooner... denial's a lovely thing, ain't it? It would be nice if he could /stop/ fluctuating between extremes, one minute caring for Harry and the next beating him. Bipolar, much?! And I don't know about you, but if I were Harry, I'd do anything and everything to keep Voldemort from taking my child as his obedient whore, collar be damned, commit suicide if nothing else worked (a sharp object to the abdomen isn't a bad idea, either, if that would thwart them a little longer). No one would touch /my/ child, thank you very much, even if it meant it died with me. Screw the whole wizarding world, Voldemort, Draco Malfoy, the Death Eaters, the Order. Harry's been through enough; let someone else play hero and kill Voldemort.

It makes me wonder how exactly Draco's going to get them out of this, if he will at all. Part of me wishes he'd come to his senses and go to the Order, then woo Harry properly (that also includes a great deal of groveling for forgiveness), or sacrifice himself to save Harry and their child. Another wants to relish in his anguish after their child is born and Voldemort kills Harry. It would serve him right, it would, to see parts of Harry in his child, haunting him, taunting him, reminding him of everything he lost. Then the prospect of the Potter-Malfoy offspring either rebelling or finding out about his/her "mother," how Harry died, and exacting revenge in Harry's name is too sweet not to cross the mind. Oh, the possibilities... personally, Malfoy better get Harry out of there before their child is born or /I'll/ borrow that shovel from Hermione and make him suffer!

Oh, wow... I didn't quite plan to rant like that... I guess it stirred some feelings about injustice and that innate maternal instinct a girl has whether she has a child, is pregnant, or not. Not to mention Draco, Harry, and Voldemort aren't real (too bad), but who else am I going to vent at? Not at all implying that you're portraying them bad or anything, because they're remarkably in character to jive with the storyline. The characters can just be a bit irritating... okay, enough rambling, I'll get back on track: awesome story. Really, I mean it. It's certainly an unique approach to the Harry-is-captured-and-held-prisoner-by-Voldemort plot bunny. The differing perspectives of the characters are pleasantly varied and we get to read some about what's happening outside Malfoy Manor, with the Order and all. Kudos to Ron for the splendid white ferret plush. It was a thoughtful gift and quite appropriate, too. ^_^ Oh, and the book of the Chudley Cannons. I could picture Draco's reaction rather vividly. So sweet, all that passive aggressiveness in gift-form; it's really clever.

Hope to read more soon, I'm dying to know the aftermath of Christmas' events. You know, I hope that if Harry gets those annoying, violent mood swings from pregnancy, Draco is hit frequently in the crossfire. Spontaneous morning sickness when it's not morning to ruin some of those fancy robes of his... Oh, and with Harry pregnant, that certainly limits the extent of punishments Draco can exact on Harry without potentially harming the unborn child, wouldn't it? Revenge, I can smell it! There's nothing scarier than an unhappy pregnant woman -- or hermaphrodite, in Harry's case. Ciao, until next chapter!
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From ANON - Solana on November 07, 2008
Ok I like it but where are you going with this is Draco going to change his mind and take Harry to safety because he loves him and will Harry forgive him please update soon

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From thrnbrooke on November 06, 2008
Soooo need chapter 10!!!
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From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2008
update soon please! i love how when you update you put up multiple chapters...but please hurry! poor harry. i need to know what happens to him!
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From Elphaba on November 05, 2008
This is such an amazing and heart wrenching story. Wonderful Job!
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From ANON - Immersion on October 27, 2008
Please update more! I've fallen in love with this story, I must know how it all turns out!
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From Elphaba on October 24, 2008
Very interesting how this is going. I can't wait to see more!
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From Elphaba on October 24, 2008
Oh poor Harry
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From Elphaba on October 24, 2008
Oh My this will be interesting!
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From thrnbrooke on October 23, 2008
Sooo need chapter 6!!!
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From bananasforyou on October 21, 2008
oh nice!
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