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Reviews for For Their Unconquerable Souls

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From callistianstar on September 25, 2008
    :) So many great things to like about this chapter. Really. I absolutely loved how Draco barely realized and tried to excuse himself from acting so protecting of Harry. I am a bit surprised at the amount of things Draco doesn't pay attention to, such as listening to the "virgin" conversation in the previous chapter, but tuning out because Ginny was mentioned, so that he missed Harry's quite caring admission about why he insults Lucius. Not to mention missing that dig into Adoranar's solar plexus. Speaking of whom, I also look forward to hearing their perspective on the outburst Harry makes about the fact that Adoranar doesn't wear his wedding band for the duration of his former relationship with Harry. On another note, the scene with Draco being presented with Harry's smile was beautiful. :) Nothing can take the place of my Harry to me. I found his POV to be awesome in "Bloody But Unbowed" as I find his character to be equally enthralling. Yet, I must admit you really are exceeding my expectations with this peice. I'm truly enjoying Draco's perpective, and even his different ways of describing people like Adoranar with more complicated but refined language, measuring up, in this instance, not only the attractiveness, but equally the probably truthfulness of that attractiveness. Very wonderful just as he continually does with Harry. His inquisitiveness and frustration and quick redefinition of the characters around him are consistently enjoyable to read. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From callistianstar on September 22, 2008
    I absolutely adored the irony of Draco's thoughts that Harry was a type of worker that just worked from "timing in" and "timing out". You handle adult Draco well in his curiousness to figure out Harry's character. It rather reminds me of the parallel Harry back in Hogwarts with Draco, although there wasn't so much of a search for character as a search for mischief then. The seducing thing kind of surprised me. Either I didn't remember a confession of that sort in "Bloody But Unbowed" or I just didn't think to much into Draco's attraction at the beginning of that story, but the fact that he confessed to both of his parents that he was going to seduce Harry to keep him focused and wanting to help Lucius, is rather amusing. Especially since I'm certain those feelings will become less surface quality once Harry uses the "Defend Heart" spell. Speaking of which I'm curious as to whose perspective that'll be from. Fun so far, :) I look forward to more.
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 21, 2008
    Sooo soooo need chapter 3!!! Draco is sooo wrong about Harry!
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  • From Christabell on September 20, 2008
    I love the idea of hearing Draco's perspective of this story! I can't wait for the next update :)
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  • From Mangacat on September 20, 2008
    Well.. an enciting prospect and a very interesting technique... that should get very amusing as far as Lucius' musings go *g*
    Cat
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  • From ANON - Kiroko on September 19, 2008
    This is an awesome idea. I can't wait to see how the story unfolds from the Malfoy's perspective. I love your writing style, by the way. You are very articulate and well versed in how you portray each character.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on September 19, 2008
    lol. this ought to be interesting
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  • From ANON - minn yun on September 19, 2008
    yay! i'm just happy to see more of harry the workaholic mw, this time from the outer perspective. thank you!
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 19, 2008
    OMG!!! I sooo need chapter 2!!! A Malfoy pov!!!
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  • From ANON - Caldonya on September 19, 2008
    Yea!!!!
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  • From TimeFlys on September 18, 2008
    Loved it! It
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  • From callistianstar on September 18, 2008
    When you say Malfoy POV, do you mean the entire family? Or just Lucius, or otherwise Draco from this chapter on? I can't help but go back to the original and look at and try to remember Harry's reactions, while reading this POV. Interesting so far. It'll be amusing to read the deadpan thoughts of those observing Harry and how he doesn't care for himself as he should. I'm not sure how you handle the feelings of familyhood and blood arguments that they have with Harry, but I look forward to them. How long will this story be approximately?
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  • From bananasforyou on September 18, 2008
    i like it.
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  • From deadhead on September 18, 2008
    Excellent beginning. I look forward to further updates.
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  • From ANON - js on September 18, 2008
    I'm going to thoroughly enjoy each chapter of this story. It'll be interesting seeing the perspective of some of the events from the other shoe.
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