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By : Lomonaaeren

From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2009
It's been a while since I read this from Harry's side, but I just seemed that from how Draco's view of things that Harry is 'giving in', when really if I remember correctly Harry was only admitting his feelings and attraction. It also became clear to me that the Malfoys have a weakness that they think is a strength, they think too much into actions and reactions. It's amusing reading what they think Harry's motives or reactions mean, when while Harry has changed for the better, he is still himself. Also I feel sorry that they expect Harry to change to suit them, sure they have their reasons, but besides being 'honest' and accepting of Harry's friends, they don't give in for much else. Basically from my rambling I'm saying they read into things way to much when they forget the smallest reasons. But I'm glad the Draco is being more honest with his reactions and actions with Harry.
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From thrnbrooke on January 07, 2009
Soooo need chapter 28!!!
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From ANON - Michelle Wolf on January 06, 2009
poor Drakey, what to do? i love that Harry calls Lucius an idiot to his face, it was priceless! the complexities of it all are so fascinating and make you think really hard. Draco has my sympathy for trying to figure out the best ways to say things, but it seems that he enjoys it as well.
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From callistianstar on January 05, 2009
Oh, this was really such a fantastic chapter. I'm not sure how hard it was for your to argue from Draco's point of view, but this was really excellent. I had forgotten that Harry, in the first part of this discussion, was in part really overwhelmed by the Malfoy family. So while the way Draco acted was appropriate to the ending of Harry's near "hyperventilation," I couldn't help but think that everything Draco wasn't saying actually made sense, when the words he had said did not. Especially the first, when he thought "Not fair...." Though I did enjoy better this time his words about native speakers vs. learners.

It was funny, the minor contradictions I still saw, only because I stand firmly in Harry's camp for equal thought to all. Such as the heroes topic that was brought up twice, the first when Draco thought about the heroes (pureblood) that fought for the wizarding culture, and then when he gets angry at Emptyweed, who also upholds heroes who understand politics (and culture since wizarding politics is probably very conservative).

But this chapter was really charming and telling. Honestly, some of the words masked through Malfoy-lips, once I hear their side, are the disadvantageous ones to say. This is true for the beginning when Draco was such a darn pervert. lol I loved hearing his thoughts that led up to Draco's headache curse as you introduced the thought really early in the chapter (And you must realize what a tempting target for vengeance he would make if he were here.). Seriously, this story is much more than I thought it might be, reading the same story twice. Perspective is everything I suppose. But for some reason, Draco seems to fall harder than Harry does in some ways, because Harry does it honestly (maybe). Every little thing in this chapter, from Harry telling Draco the little bit on the Dursleys, swallowing the potion whole, and the ways it affects Draco; it is so much fun to read. I could love the story probably from Narcissa's point of view alone. But I'm in love with this story because of Draco's. Amazing chapter.
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From thrnbrooke on January 04, 2009
Sooo need chapter 27!!!
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From hieisdragoness18 on January 04, 2009
wow. i think if draco had purred around me i would have had one of those instant orgasms. lol. i love that they are getting along better and starting to get closer
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From ANON - Sara on January 04, 2009
I do LOVE every time you update. I feel giddy and joyous just seeing the story. I loved to see from Draco's point of view this chapter because he thought so differently. Its amazing to see two points of view collide the way they do.
Thanks for updateing!~
Sara
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From thrnbrooke on January 03, 2009
Sooo need chapter 26!!! Narcissa is telling Draco to back off some and Harry just laid everything out for Lucius. Soooo need more!!!
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From callistianstar on January 02, 2009
I was so happy that Draco jumped out of bed, only to go running to Narcissa happily. Narcissa's section was amazing; you are the reason I love her character. ^^ (When she called him
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From hieisdragoness18 on January 02, 2009
lol. bout time someone told lucius off. i would LOVE to see him like that jaw hanging open in shock.
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From ANON - Michelle Wolf on January 02, 2009
Drat!Might i also say "Ouch!" for Lucius. that kind of stung alittle. it was very well deserved though. i like all of this psychology stuff, it really makes you think about it.
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From ANON - Sara on January 01, 2009
I loved your new chapter as always. It was great to see more of Lucius's point of view at the end there, and I loved how Draco is deciding to not change completely for Harry. Thanks for updating so quickly.
Sara
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From hieisdragoness18 on December 30, 2008
draco's sweet. a little overconfident sometimes but still.
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From thrnbrooke on December 30, 2008
Sooo need chapter 25!!! The interaction between the two men just blow me away! And Narcissa! Wow!
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From ANON - Michelle Wolf on December 30, 2008
that was very convincing and touching. i liked it very much. if Draco continues this way then i am sure he will get Harry's trust,though you are the author so really you are the only one that can determine that. i liked all the honesty stuff that Draco said, very heart warming. will Harry remember that kind of one sided conversation?
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