Click Here!

Reviews for For Their Unconquerable Souls

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Sara on December 22, 2008
    Yay! a new chapter!~ I loved seeing how much Draco cared about Harry. Thanks for writing again so soon, I loved it again. Your my absolute favorite author!
    Sara
    Report Review

  • From ANON - I.Drowned.My.Goldfish on December 21, 2008
    I really enjoyed Bloody But Unbowed and so I was surprised when I saw this one about Draco's perspective. I have to say though, I was a bit edgy when I first started reading this. I wasn't sure about the way it would go with the other story since I found that sometimes a second 'version' can turn out disappointing. I am happy to say this one isn't one of those.
    I think it's very interesting the way you can read them together, which is what I am doing. I keep finding things in stories where I think like 'I wonder what Harry's thinking right now' and you will never get to know, so it's great that I can just find the chapter and read that part and I'll be satisfied. It makes the both stories more clear and I definately think that more stories should be like this.
    Report Review

  • From Slytherdor on December 20, 2008
    All I can say is that sometimes I just want to smack Draco.
    Report Review

  • From thrnbrooke on December 20, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 22! Draco was foolish!
    Report Review

  • From hieisdragoness18 on December 20, 2008
    love harry and draco action! i also love how sometimes harry can do whatever he pleases and no one can stop him. like blasting trough wards.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Sara on December 19, 2008
    YAY!! I loved this chapter I have been waiting for Harry to leave for the hospital battle for a long time. I'm dying to know what happens next! And I just loved how you wrote Draco's perspective on this. I'm so used to seeing it from Harry's perspective its always a delight to read from Draco's. It's always so refreshing.
    Thanks for writing!
    UPdate soon
    Sara ^_^
    Report Review

  • From thrnbrooke on December 16, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 21!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Nothing on December 16, 2008
    Sweet! My name was listed on a chap!!

    I can understand repetition being one of your worries, but each 'scene' doesn't read exactly the same(to me). The things that the different characters notice, and their individual interpretations of it, is of great interest to me. I'm a "people watcher", even if I don't like or understand them... I learned long ago that there are at least three sides to every story: yours or side 1, mine or side 2, and the truth. Plus, I love seeing the changes that being around each other is making on the Potter/Malfoy characters. I'm really looking forward to seeing what revenge Mom takes on Emptyweed. After his interest in her, I'd go for a permanent flatulence and impotence curse. That won't damage his healing power or his person, which would be Harry's objection points. And where Mom can get around Harry by saying she didn't cause him pain (like he did Harry, and like she thought Emptyweed deserved) because she knew doing so would upset Harry, she just caused the man major embarrassment for the rest of his life. Can't be around people while gassing and can't be intimate if you can't achieve erection. Perfect.

    Thanks for updating swiftly, I really dislike WIPs that take forever to finish. Can you tell I'm impatient?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Sara on December 15, 2008
    It was a lovely day at work and thank you. Again I'm so exited. I was curious how you would make Narcissa side with Harry like she did at the end in "Bloody but Unbowed", and the way you showed her thoughts was fabulous when she seemed so eager to get revenge for the headache curse and how she decided against it for Harry. Thanks for the new chapter again so soon. It was fabulous
    Sara
    Report Review

  • From callistianstar on December 15, 2008
    I'll keep saying it: I love your Narcissa to peices. She is too fricken cool. As far as the mirror goes, what I was talking about was the mirror they put up in Harry's room, but I imagine it is the same deal.

    I really do love how Harry affects her [stopping her from inflicting harm on Emptyweed], more than how Harry affects Lucius or even Draco. It is fitting, as she is the one he most trusts and is bewildered by. And seriously? Her planning was amazing. I love how she detailed everything to work in multiple ways. Although I do wonder how it affected her that Draco pulled out the chair for Harry.

    I think the whole flirtation scene was actually much more enjoyable from this side, as Draco found so many little things to appreciate of Harry's. And Harry's flirting with Draco by licking his hands was all the more adorable and enchanting to see as Draco reacted.

    Although the following event was something I loved in Harry's POV--if only because we read his thoughts about his relief in being able to depend on Draco--it was wonderful how easily Draco kept forgetting his own hurt of Lucius' continued favoring of Harry, and just kept trying to focus on Harry, and all the things he adores about him. That he truly was putting Harry first in all regards, for sex AND a real realtionship is wonderful.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - js on December 15, 2008
    I thought that last sentence was perfect and was just the right way to end this chapter...great job!
    Report Review

  • From hieisdragoness18 on December 14, 2008
    awww! draco's in love!
    Report Review

  • From gentlenightrain on December 14, 2008
    Awwwww!!!

    So this is love..mmmhmmm mmmmmhmmm... so this is loooooove... so thiiiiis is what makes life divine.....
    Report Review

  • From callistianstar on December 14, 2008
    Great chapter! I love your Narcissa, of course. I like how she choose to disguise herself, the little things you added to cover the glamour and the make her dress in such a way that people would create stories about her [her hair color] instead of thinking about how they recognized her. Was the mirror enchanted, or just position in a way that "reflects his body in astounding proportions"? I never really thought much on it before in the previous story. I loved that one line that Rogers said though, very poignant: "He treats his body as if it were a mere machine for the bearing of his soul.
    Report Review

  • From thrnbrooke on December 14, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 20!!!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!