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Reviews for For Their Unconquerable Souls

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From alma on November 11, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on November 11, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From callistianstar on November 11, 2008
    *embarassed* Yeah. I know that everything here is part of a story we've already read up to the end. But next to talking of the different aspects from the other, story, I suppose I am trying to review and approach this partially as if I hadn't read the other. Or maybe that's just an excuse to not remember. And trying to make a connection with the hopeful character growth of your Dracos. ^^ I noticed you didn't say things were looking up for Hephaestus' Draco. With only 11 chapters that's a bit worrisome. Especially since he stooped so low in that one as to call Harry a monster (although he didn't complete the comment) Btw, I'm not sure how LiveJournal works but if you see a random name called: "callistianstar"...that's me. My name was taken. So yeah, you can just ignore it. It'll help me updating-alert wise.

    Great chapter. I know he is definitely in character, but I found it a bit sad/amusing how Draco calculated everything from the compliments, while his eyes were downcast. But I really liked the transition at the end when Draco called it letting his barriers down a bit. Both gaining a comfort zone is awesome with Harry trying to gain comfort in luxuries, and Draco in simplicities (in a way). Another thing I liked were Draco's spot on deductions of what Harry was actually thinking. I didn't see a moment where he misjudge Harry, except for perhaps about the scene in the books when the gang showed up at Malfoy manner. But somehow that slip was far less horrible than the constant belitting of Harry or the constant attack of outlandish flirtiness. Wonderful job.
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  • From thrnbrooke on November 11, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 14!!!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on November 10, 2008
    looks like draco might be understanding harry a little more.
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  • From 7mizu8 on November 10, 2008
    another dazzling chapter
    I simply adore your writing style and I'm very happy you decided to continue this story on the Malfloy's point of view.
    thanks for the amazing story so far ^_^
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  • From alma on November 07, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on November 07, 2008
    I like how you're able to write from all three POV!
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  • From alma on November 07, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on November 07, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From alma on November 07, 2008
    Yay! Lucius's point of view.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on November 06, 2008
    hmmmm... so maybe draco really is starting to sorta understand harry. though i think narcissa does more
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  • From callistianstar on November 06, 2008
    "He knew that Narcissa
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  • From thrnbrooke on November 06, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 13!!! The Malfoys are very complex. They really can't blame Harry for thinking the way he does. First he doesn't know Wizarding ways, especially, Pureblood ways. And secondly he doesn't think this way. Not to mention the number of times both Malfoy men have not only hurt him but tried to kill him.
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  • From thrnbrooke on November 04, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 12!!!
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