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Reviews for For Their Unconquerable Souls

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - SP777 on November 03, 2008
    Thanks for telling me that, I'll let you know if I figured it out.
    *******

    about #11...

    Not much to say on this one, it felt more like a
    ''Getting-to-know-you-while-getting-a-''feel''-for-you'' chapter to see where the
    other stood or I should, Narcissa needed a way to see how to proceed with Harry,
    while trying to make him feel comfortable and not trapped.
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  • From LeeB on November 02, 2008
    Your view of Narcissa is faultless: she's sophisticated, faceted, and perceptive to everything and everyone around her. I love her and am terrified of her. Narcissa unerringly controls every aspect of her world.
    Wonderful.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on November 02, 2008
    it makes sense and i like how narcissa is shaping up as a character. i think harry needs someone like her to help him understand him.
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  • From callistianstar on November 02, 2008
    :) Narcissa is too cool. I hadn't thought of her dress before as something connected to the Heart's Blessing Spell, I would have guessed it was for a Griffindor welcoming or something. Her conversation with Rogers was fun to see, as well as her anecdote about Draco's childhood. It was really endearing to read Narcissa begin to fall for Harry's humbleness at the end of this chapter. Wonderful job.
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  • From SParker on October 29, 2008
    I know what I wanted to ask you last time, I don't know if only authors are allowed to
    do this. But, in the Author Profile, I noticed that you can do something called
    Recommended Reading and do a list of stories that are favorites or...recommended.

    But, I haven't figured out HOW to do it, I thought maybe there was a button you
    clicked on, but so far I haven't seen anything of the sort.

    Any clues?

    ******************
    about # 10...

    Sooo...when is Harry going to get a clue & have the Heart's Blessing explained
    to him??? I don't recall it taking this long in the other story.

    ...and I'm surprised you haven't done a Halloween one-shot. Lord knows your famous
    for creeping the crap out folks. :-)
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on October 28, 2008
    man draco and his father need to learn a lot from narcissa. i feel kinda bad for her.lol
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 28, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 11!! All three Malfoys have something to learn about Harry!
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  • From Caldonya on October 27, 2008
    IT'A SO FUN READING THIS I REALLY REALLY LIKES NARSISSA'S VIEW POINT.
    SORRY ABOUT THE CAPS
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  • From callistianstar on October 27, 2008
    Narcissa's was a refreshing point of view. Draco continues to be amazed at Harry's "ignorance," and it is completely understandable for Harry to feel frustrated when Draco acts as if he is talking to a child, rather than describing something that is of importance to Draco. So that she understands this without seeming like she is disgusted of Harry's misunderstanding of the situation, is really cool to see. Of course, her attitude towards Harry's appearance was less refreshing...lol. By the way I totally just realized I got the timeline wrong when I last reviewed. I had thought that Harry was to meet some resistance and attack at St. Mungos after leaving Grimmauld. Which happens WAY later in the story. Oops. In any case, wonderful job.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 25, 2008
    about #9...

    Good LORD!!!! Forget Draco doing this, hell, I want to take a stick and beat Harry
    myself!!! That's stubborness to the nth degree! O_o
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 23, 2008
    So so sooooo need chapter 10!!!
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  • From callistianstar on October 22, 2008
    It is amusing to see Draco take the extreme side of healing (healing the person + renvenge) while Harry had taken the extreme side of negative self-healing (not caring enough for himself + giving more than he has to others). I look forward to this next chapter, as I hadn't really enjoyed reading Draco's comment even before about how Harry will learn to appreciate Draco, once he gets hurt. It sounded to much like a Parent who would tell their child to do whatever, for the sake of waiting for them to crawl back and beg forgiveness. Although I'm sure this next event will just secure's Draco's own mind to keep a tight motherly control over Harry's actions, it did help set the medium need of what Harry should have. Especially with Harry having so surely denied that need. These two really do create such an extraordinary, middleground, invisible character, in some respects. Wonderful job.

    BTW, just adding this on to my post: That "Never-Ending Orgasm Spell" sentence had me lingering. lol Ashamedly I think I totally stood stock-still after reading that for at least a minute or so. Brain overload.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on October 22, 2008
    looks like draco is finally learning.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 15, 2008
    about #8...

    I've FINALLY caught up with my stories, it's amazing what you can miss when you
    don't have lights for 2 1/2 weeks [sounds like a movie].

    I'm surprised by all the freakin' stories that cropped up out of nowhere.

    NOW, about the story, the thing that gets me is in the original version from Harry's
    POV...Draco came across as sorta spoiled and, should I say, flighty. Is that how Harry
    saw him?

    Because, from Draco's POV, he displays true Slytherin qualities from the heart, with
    his smugness and arrogance and sees Harry as the one with half a brain, in the
    beginning.

    I guess it's all about misconceptions?

    By the way, I wanted to ask you something but forgot what it was.
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  • From Daktalakpak on October 13, 2008
    aaaaah.. another exciting chapter. I can't wait, I can't wait.. I feel like I should pounce around or something..
    Maybe I'll jsut go to bed and dream that there will be an update soon.
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