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Reviews for For Their Unconquerable Souls

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From BookDragon on August 16, 2017

    I'm loving the story from the Malfoy POV!


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  • From Severus1snape on July 30, 2015
    I like the story from this angle better
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  • From bloodshound on November 15, 2010
    this, and it's partner story, have got to be one of the most interestng things i've read in a long time.
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  • From on February 05, 2009
    I enjoyed both your stories immensely. It was a wonderful treat to find such wonderful depth of character and sheer thoughtfulness as the many threads came together. Thank you very much for sharing! I do look forward to any further works you may decide to post.
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  • From ANON - Michelle Wolf on January 28, 2009
    very well done! touching ending. Draco does know how to except defeat, amazing. took him a long time to figure out that you can't mould people.
    i liked it quite a bit, what's your next one? email me wingshinigami@gmail.com
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  • From ANON - Michelle Wolf on January 28, 2009
    messy and satisfying. this is a happy girl over here! i loved the compition element in this scene!
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  • From callistianstar on January 27, 2009
    Its fairly sad and coincidental that today is the first day I decided to read Invictus. Another author, Mephistedes, around the same time you wrote Bloody and I assume for the same prompt, wrote 'Out of the Night that Covers Me,' for the same poem. I hope you don't mind if I rec this. If you do, my email is callistianstar@gmail.com, and my lj is the same as this username.

    Which is why I can say that really this story, along with Bloody but Unbowed really captures the inspiring nature and life of that poem. You executed both point of views really well. These last two scenes with Draco were delightful. I like the way you described Draco's own convincing to himself. Even more that he acknowledges how he was changed by Harry. I also loved the that you incorporated that one line (And Harry had somehow carried that mass of scar tissue within his soul and not bowed under it.) and that Draco took Harry's experience, even incorporating himself into that scenario with his childhood in Malfoy manor, and found himself speechless. Wonderful job with these two stories.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on January 27, 2009
    that was great! i really liked this! not that i didn't like the first but it seems to be a fuller and more complete story with both sides told. great job!
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 25, 2009
    Perfect!!! Chapter 32 please!!!
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  • From callistianstar on January 23, 2009
    Draco is just selectively listening. Goodness. Harry said specifically in this chapter how he would not want revenge to be taken for him in any case (so far at least). On another note, though the last chapter of Bloody was considerably longer, it it funny that Draco's chapter of their first time would take up an entire chapter, as if the Draco made it that way (if that makes sense). I enjoyed reading Draco's perspective when he told Harry to undress, and even when Harry continually teased him. It was startling for me too the number of time Harry mentioned Xavier back in Bloody, so it was funny to see Draco's perspective. I love knowing that Draco playfully whacked Harry after worrying Draco over Harry's mental state. Lovely chapter.


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  • From hieisdragoness18 on January 23, 2009
    *drools* yummmmmmmmmmmy!







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  • From thrnbrooke on January 21, 2009
    Sooo need chapter 31!!!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on January 19, 2009
    lmao. poor draco and lucius didn't know what they were in for with harry. at least narcissa did though. lol
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  • From ANON - Spicyeggplant on January 18, 2009
    Oh I'm loving this story. I have an absolute personal abhorrence of vengeance, but your skill at describing the Malfoy's point of view has me as bloodthirsty as they are by the end of the 30th chapter!! I totally want Lucius to get his way.

    So great.

    And the addition of Draco and Lucius' discovery of Harry's abuse and neglect by the Dursleys keeps the story even more interesting. Kudos.
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  • From ANON - Michelle Wolf on January 18, 2009
    yeah, i know. i just like subtle revenge. good manuvearing on Harry's part. took Draco a while to figure out he wasn't going to win against Harry though. do we finally get that sex scene with Draco and Harry next?
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